From Practicing Qi in a Small Town with Cows and Horses to Becoming an Immortal Taoist King

What a piece of shit. You were given a golden finger to practice so quickly, and then you have to struggle not to expose your true state. If you can't expose it, forget about it. You will cause endless trouble for the protagonist every day. Even if the protagonist eats at home, the trouble will be solved. If you can't write novels, just find a factory to work.

The progress is too slow, chapter 230, no foundation building, and then there is the golden finger of development, and there is always a lot of things, being threatened, being fucked,,, it has been in a depressed state for more than two hundred chapters, nothing exciting, and according to this golden finger, does it matter if it is one year earlier or one year later? It has to be involved in so many things, and there is not much profit. It could have developed well, but it has to be brainless. Even if the author wrote a lot of reasons, in my opinion, they are completely invalid reasons. They are just reasons for messing around after being full and having nothing to do. I can eat it. I am full and can't wait to read your novel until chapter 230, but I find it difficult to accept the protagonist continuing to talk nonsense. You must know that the protagonist's golden finger is a developmental golden finger. As a result, your life is in danger every day, which completely violates the tone of the beginning. It's very annoying to watch. There are endless things and endless dangers to life. The whole rhythm is completely broken.

I know why it's bad. The first chapter gave me the impression that modern literature has been transformed into a fairy tale.

Twenty-year-old Shennong has completed the appraisal and it is currently non-toxic. Food and grass++

I feel that there are several problems: 1. The plot is too routine and has no content at all 2. The numerical values ​​are filled in a bit randomly, including but not limited to money and combat power, especially money, and the context often does not match up. One moment he casually handed ten yuan to the concierge, and the next moment he said it only cost two yuan and felt very heartbroken. One moment it was said that the protagonist's monthly salary was 150 and later it rose to 300+. The next moment he was shocked when he saw someone taking out 150 to buy something in the black market, thinking that it must be a kid from our family. 3. The protagonist seems to be very cute, but he is not doing anything serious. The main plot now should be how to clean up his cultivation. After all, it is unrealistic for the protagonist to change his appearance and start over with his family. But I said I found a recipe, but there was no movement in dozens of chapters. I didn't write about how to obtain the materials, and I didn't write about how to use this excuse to really win people's trust. After all, you couldn't find a way for more than ten years before, and you still made meritorious deeds. So why did you get the means to change your qualifications now? Even the elixirs given by others were delayed. 4. Before he could clear up his cultivation, he tried every means to make money in exchange for spiritual stones, but in order to earn a profit of more than ten yuan, he attracted covetous people. 5. Can you be targeted if you sell goods for more than ten yuan? In the end, the fight was endless and 20 people were killed? It was purely because there was no plot and a battle plot was added without considering the rationality. The protagonist's combat power was also exaggerated. One hundred talismans were inspired to be scattered, so if I collected a thousand or ten thousand talismans, wouldn't I be invincible? How could I use them all at once? Shoot Speed ♾️ belongs to 6. The hang-up is too big and starts to force the protagonist. First, it has been procrastinating and not allowing the protagonist to improve his cultivation level on the surface. Second, it has imposed various restrictions on the protagonist's means of making money. He has crafts but is restricted from selling them anywhere. He has to go to the black market, and he cannot sell them at a high price. 7. I like to add various settings that cannot be reflected in the later text or even contradict them. For example, there are male and female defenses, etc. 8. The description of cultivating immortals is too empty. What has the protagonist achieved through cultivation? At present, it is known that the fourth level of Qi training has spiritual consciousness, and the seventh level has a protective shield that can prevent rain. But their presence is also very low. However, other parts of cultivation civilization are also well written, including various production and life-related talismans. Of course, there are many advantages in other places. I hope the author can fix these points.

The level of Goldfinger is too low and unattractive (Goldfinger can start to have restrictions and be weaker, but you cannot be too low level) Goldfinger in the Golden Core stage, what is the difference between you, Goldfinger, the protagonist, and the immortal cultivator who has received an opportunity in the world of immortality? Well, there is still a difference. It is weaker. In the novel about cultivating immortals, at least you can get the resources of a Nascent Soul. If it is better, you can transform into gods and overcome tribulations, and even get immortal relics.

You kill people when you tell them to. After you kill them, you don't dare to touch the body for fear of being discovered. After you touch it, you don't dare to keep the storage bag. This is a fantasy world. How useful is it if you destroy the physical evidence? Either don't do it, or just do it to the end. There are so many clues left, and it's up to you to make any assumptions. Is there any physical evidence? Is it important to the fantasy world? Don't substitute real world settings

Why do so many people always target the protagonist? Why does the protagonist always have so much shit?

Through the author's description in the first chapter, the image of the pig-footed villain emerges vividly on the page.

Cultivation of immortality is about being self-centered and going against the will of nature. A single husband among single husbands will set up a wife and children when he comes out, and take care of his family to cultivate immortality. He does not "move forward with a heavy burden" and does not create some uncomfortable responsibilities. It does not conform to the logic of cultivating immortality and deviates from the current mainstream aesthetics.

I was lucky today. I accidentally searched for this book. It was unexpectedly good.

It was the first time I met my mother-in-law and her mother-in-law.

The biggest drawback of this book is that the cultural heritage is insufficient, the words do not convey the meaning, and the descriptions are inappropriate.

The creativity of this book is quite average. The biggest shortcoming is that the plot is too urban. A mortal woman plays matchmaker for Jiuji. She does not ask for the language to be immortal. The word "walking" is really not suitable for writing. It would be better if the tone is consistent.

A small town is either one thing or another. If you get to the city, you won't be able to kill people in one city after another.

I don't quite understand why I named my son "". Isn't the first thing that comes to my mind when I see this word "human pig"? And the word itself also means pig, so why?

Kill people and don't pick up trophies. The first time I didn't pick it up. Didn't pick it up the second time. Don't use your brain when reading this book, I can't stand it anymore.

I have been reading novels for more than ten years. Unless the family cultivates immortality, I have never seen a novel about immortality that starts with having children and has children become popular. I really don't know where the author got the idea? Cultivation requires talent. You are such a bad guy. You must have no talent to marry a wife. You will also have children with no talent. You are cultivating immortality by yourself. If you cheat, you will drag the whole family with you. How to delay? A burden to the family in a fight? Your children will get married and have children when they reach their age. If you are not a family cultivator, how will you do it personally? I really can't understand what's going on in my head. Don't you want good grades?

Invented all over the country, you can even pull to build the foundation with the most unpleasant words. You can also practice the third level of Qi and play with a hair ball.

You start with a useless talent, and you reach the third level of Qi training at the age of thirty. If you come up with a system, your speed upgrade will tell everyone clearly that you have a great opportunity, right? What is the difference between this and seeking death? Could it be that the world would be peaceful in another world?

It's actually pretty good, but the time line is too short. A 30-year-old practiced Qi at the third level, but it turned out that he was almost building a foundation in a few months. The strength has been greatly improved, and he is constantly exposing himself. It is unreasonable and the plot is too false.

The old woman's foot wrap was so rotten that it took more than 200 chapters, and 6 months had passed. The protagonist went from the third level of Qi training to the foundation building. He used 200 taels of low-grade spiritual stones to create the best Qi training in the world.

It's hard to recommend books that you can read at the starting point. It's not easy. The more traditional a fairy tale is, the more difficult it is to write. As for the author's writing style, if he is not afraid of 404, he can also write urban novels.

Pay attention to the timing of entering the factory. If you are older, people will not want you.

In the previous chapters, he became a disciple of the Immortal Sect. In this chapter, he became a disciple of the Yuanshen Gate. The previous 500 chapters were spent wandering around the county.

I gave up the book, and I haven't broken through the 156 or 100 chapters of the book until now. I've been waiting for three months, and I haven't waited for Gang Sha yet for Foundation Establishment. There was no replacement book before, but now there is one. I'll come back when I have the chance to see you finish it one day.

The pace is still too slow, and the writing style is nothing to say, but the plot advances too slowly, otherwise it won't be eye-catching.

In ancient times, there were sects in cultivating immortals, and then team leaders, personnel, secretaries, salaries... Everyone who could see it was a god!

I thought it was a high-quality product, but it started out as waste material.

Others are cultivators, but you are talking nonsense