Hidden in Fuyuan Xiu Changsheng

Many women chased her 😍😍😍

A novel about cultivating immortals also uses so many plots on the affairs of men and women? It's like a female romance novel

Just post female videos? Why are you posting a male video?

There are too many irrelevant plots to write There is no need to write some trashy male and female characters at all, including dialogues and so on. Overall, it seems to be very dull, and the plot is very dull. After dozens of chapters, it is about slowly improving your proficiency and cultivation. In Chapter 70, it's okay to just practice Qi at the fifth level. The plot is all about trivial matters. Let's go and look at what other people have written. The foundation is established in Chapter 60, the pace is fast and the details are appropriate. What are you writing? Do you want to drink water slowly and daily? There is no need to write about so many interpersonal interactions. In the early stage, a small character needs to write about any interpersonal interactions? Write it directly like below. Three years have passed by. The protagonist has been practicing hard every day, and this day he finally succeeded in making a low-grade talisman. To put it bluntly, one sentence omits many passerby characters that the protagonist encounters in the early stage. You said that the writings written by these passers-by are not outstanding and are bland.

The parents behind are all naughty. Are you infected with Siheyuan? Cao Yang failed to build a foundation for the first time, Cao Yang failed to build a foundation for the second time, Cao Yang this, Cao Yang that, you care whether Cao Yang can build a foundation, does it have anything to do with the protagonist?

It should be renamed the Love Cultivation World, add a longevity plug-in and a proficiency panel, and still have a relationship with several women who are unclear about it, which is also unnatural

This book should be renamed "My Romance from an Ordinary Worker to a Technical Executive in an Electronics Factory in the 1960s"

Can you tell me why all of these must start with the main character Dio, Qingmei is awesome? Is this a template? If not, it wouldn't be written on it, right?

Stallion article, forget about stallion, it also wrote down the two women that I wrote about in a large space in the early stage. It is not recommended for consumption.

It left me speechless. My cultivation depends entirely on taking drugs, and my understanding depends entirely on plug-ins. The plot was set ten years ago, so I only wanted to test the emperor's uncle to attract people 😐

It can be seen that the author is treating the protagonist like a dog. Either he encounters someone who wants to steal the protagonist's woman, or he doesn't like the protagonist. He also uses all kinds of conspiracies and tricks to get revenge on the protagonist. However, the protagonist cannot take revenge, which makes him laugh to death.

Speechless. Become an unnecessary extra master just to make a woman think the protagonist is good? There is no distinction between priority and priority. If you don't work hard when you have a face-to-face relationship, how can you fall in love?

The guy who has the reputation of cultivating immortality is having sex with someone

It suits my taste. It's not a dark cultivator. IQ is online. It's logical and reasonable. It's not a eunuch cultivating an immortal. It's not a slave cultivating an immortal. The plot unfolds slowly. The key is to lighten, slow, twist, wipe and pick again, haha.

You can't cultivate immortality without a lower body. I'm speechless. I'm so fooled. I'm still a woman every day. How can such a person cultivate immortality?

How could there be so many misunderstandings? It's too poisonous.

If you don't write about women, you'll have no life, but crotch literature still has a legacy.

After reading it, this book is really good, I would rate it 8.5 Out of 10, but the harem is too slow to open, not even 10. The monthly and recommended votes have been cast, please update as soon as possible.

I'm all convinced, why did the protagonist offend Cao Yang inexplicably? Why does the author always like to arrange some mentally retarded characters to target the protagonist?

The author is a woman, I guess. I can't resist the pressure of female videos.

I am in love with cultivating immortality, and I don't write spells and fights to find opportunities to fight for them. Just write about the relationship and psychology between men and women in a company.

How come every one of your books sucks?

I have a dozen female characters with 700,000 words, and I show off this aspect of depression.

I originally read this book for the sake of reading the previous books, but I don't know why there is something wrong with Orange Cat when you write about cultivating immortality. The previous books were perfect before you wrote about cultivating immortality, and you didn't feel any frustration at all. As long as I write in a comfortable way of writing fictional history, so many people will not run away. And this book also has a lot of plots about revenge and revenge. In other books, even if you can't beat the foundation building, you will still hit the door. If someone encounters someone, he will run away after being provoked. This book is only as interesting as the heroine's plot. Moreover, Mu Qianqian's reincarnation style of writing is really disliked. The next book will return to that kind of alternate history. I'm reading it now, or maybe I'll go back to writing doujins.

It looks good, but it's not a eunuch cultivating immortality.

Come on. Thanks to you, the writing is very comfortable.

Speaking of whether immortality stories are suitable for writing group portraits, the harem is a bit difficult. After all, a genius who has survived for a generation can only be considered a living Laoden. Immortality must be reflected in a long time span. If a bunch of female supporting characters live together, the male protagonist's longevity will be a bit bad.

Why do I feel that the author's writings are getting sweeter and sweeter? Although Lin Shuang was quite nice to him before, after that, it was basically a deal, and then he became cold to you. Then I felt that the author wrote that the woman treated him better like a dog licker, and he forgot all the things that were not good to him before. And you don't lack what he has. You will basically go to the Eastern Region in the future. Many of your spiritual creatures here are basically monopolized. The author hopes not to write like this in the future. Although your heroine has these two on the list, it feels like you are licking a dog when you write like this. Likewise, if you look disgusting, it is worse than Liu Huayi, and you have golden fingers. As soon as the alchemy talisman comes up, basically everyone around you will gather around it. Later, you can also pave the way for your woman in the secret realm of Hehuan decades or hundreds of years later. With your current resources, there is basically no problem in accepting a fake order. In addition, with the effects of the pools in Hehuan Secret Realm, it is possible to form a real elixir.

Traditional cultivation of immortality, no romance, multiple female protagonists in the harem, clear emotional lines, a bit rushed and slow to catch up in the early stage, but it will also add some old-fashioned cool elements. This book will be better if you read it carefully, it is not just a cool article. People in the world of cultivation are sinister. When you possess the Holy Body but do not have absolute strength, you will only become the prey of others. The protagonist was born under a conspiracy and died. A trace of his soul was fused with the puppet's body and became the so-called flesh and blood body. The so-called rebirth is just a ridiculous dream after the memory has been tampered with. The so-called genius is just a road leading to death deliberately paved by others. When I lost myself in death and confusion, when I was about to fall into the abyss and never recover, the power that truly belonged to me, the power that had been deposited in billions of reincarnations, awakened at this moment. I remembered the agreement I made with her, and also the fireworks on the river bank of the human world that year. Fireworks bloom in the world, leaving only a moment of brilliance, but they remain in memory forever...

It looks like you are constipated, and you are whining and groaning. Do you need to take so many pills to break through the second floor? It took so long?