A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: From the Start, I Copied the Little Green Bottle and Sought the Dao in the Mortal World

What a load of rubbish! Dark spiritual root only reached level 11 after ten years? That's ridiculous!

Author, Han Li only has one Daoist partner and two lovers, so please don't go and cuckold them. Nangong Wan is a good person and beautiful, but she is Han Li's Daoist partner, so you should give her to Han Li, that's right. You should also leave Yuan Yao and Zi Ling alone; taking one is the same as cuckolding, so why offend us readers who just want to be on good terms with you?

It's inexplicable. It all started with that furnace/cauldron thing. What does "exchanging spiritual roots" even mean? If it were that easy, why would anyone bother replenishing their spiritual roots? Just exchange them directly! A mere lower-level Hehuan Sect has this kind of ability? And the sect leader's son saw through the Demonic Sect's Thousand Illusions? Just cut it out. This trash novel should be rewritten.

In some places, the author's writing is quite good. However, on page 7 of Chapter 13... You're already planning a demonic invasion right after you've just reached the Foundation Establishment stage? If you really want to arrest Wang Chan, Let alone whether you can capture him alive, As long as you do this This is the Nascent Soul stage of the Ghost Spirit Sect. I'm about to call your name.

I don't understand. Why tie yourself to Huangfeng Valley when you already have a Dark Spiritual Root? Your cultivation technique wasn't obtained from Huangfeng Valley, and they didn't give you any major opportunities. Dark Spiritual Root + Huangfeng Valley just doesn't seem right. Wouldn't it be better to just be a lone wolf cultivator with Little Green Bottle? 🤔

What's the biggest problem with a lot of fanfiction these days? It's that the cheat codes are way too overpowered. How the hell can you write that? You can't keep going. You'll be done for a hundred or two pages. Take this one, for example, with double portals and duplicate items. How the hell is anyone supposed to compete? Others work hard to clear dungeons.

There are countless novels about ordinary people, and half of them are copied novels.

This is hilarious! A mortal's cultivation journey involves god-level investment—a single Foundation Establishment Pill and the protagonist is treated like a dog. Not only did they warn the sect about the demonic invasion beforehand, but they also helped the sect fight in the arena and even gave them a teleportation array to the Chaotic Star Sea. Why don't you just give your mother to the sect? You can't repay the sect's kindness enough!

🙂I can't understand the behavior of being sold out and then still giving money to the other party.

If you like the female lead Nangong Wan the most, you can skip this series and not watch it.