The Outcast: A Two-Way Portal, with Zhu Xian on the Other Side
一人之下：双穿门，门背后是诛仙
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- Myriad Worlds
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What's the point of having so many women? Tian Ling'er and Bi Yao are one thing, but Xiao Bai and Xia He are unnecessary.
If you can't write about emotions well, then write less. Your writing is terrible. At least ninety out of a hundred books are similar to yours. I've read enough.
Why is Xia He here? Does she like buses? You don't naively think Xia He only plays with Ling Yu, do you?
If you want to see a native surpass a time traveler with cheat codes, you can check this out.
Holy crap, this guy's been fighting Lu Xueqi for five chapters straight, while in the original novel he only fought her for two or three chapters! 😅 In the original, the protagonist was at the fourth level of the Jade Purity Realm and was severely injured by Lu Xueqi.
Why aren't you including Lu Xueqi and Biyao? If you're going to start a harem, why be so picky? Either stick to a single female lead, or try not to leave out any. Standing in the middle pleases neither side. With a synopsis like this, any true harem reader would probably run away as soon as they read it.
Let me tell you what's on my mind.
See the update section. First point: Cultivating immortality is for longevity, enjoyment, and experiencing the scenery above—that's normal. Your claim of protecting someone you want to protect is childish and idiotic. For a reborn person to like 10-14 year old minors is already disgusting. Couldn't you wait until they're older? And you still want to protect them?
I want to complain after reading the synopsis. Have you even read *Under One Person*? Someone like Zhang Chulan, a scoundrel, would be bullied? It's a miracle this shameless idiot doesn't bully others; who would dare bully him? It's ridiculous, just utter nonsense.
If you're already using such a huge cheat code, why do you still want to be Zhang Xiaofan? Can't you create your own character?
The idea that your innate Qi can be absorbed by others? What kind of nonsense is that? What a piece of garbage secondary setting!
To be honest, it's not very well written. The protagonist doesn't seem like an adult, which indirectly reflects that the author isn't an adult either. The perspectives on issues are too different.