The Outcast: A Two-Way Portal, with Zhu Xian on the Other Side

If so many women are of use, Tian Linger and Bi Yao can forget about it. Xiaobai and Xia He are not necessaryright

If you don't write well about emotions, write less. Very poorly written. -At least ninety of the hundred books are similar to yours. I've seen enough

Why is there Xia He? Do you like buses? You don't naively think that Xia He only plays with Lingyu, do you?

I beat Lu Xueqi for five chapters. The original novel only lasted two or three chapters 😅. In the original novel, the fourth level of Yuqing and Lu Xueqi were both injured. This time, the protagonist was changed to the seventh level of Yuqing with the power of double Nine Heavens Divine Weapons and the power of two divine beasts. Still, both were injured and both fell into coma. These days, it is rare for a time traveler to be more useless than the original protagonist. I haven't gotten my results yet, so I'm just thinking about how to improve my studies 🤔

What's going on if Lu Xueqi and Baguio don't accept it? You have to be picky when opening a harem, either you have only one female lead, or you try not to miss out on all of them, standing in the middle won't please both ends, and with your introduction, readers of a real harem will probably run away after just one glance.

See updates. The first point: The purpose of cultivating immortality is for immortality, enjoyment, and seeing the scenery above. This is normal. You are here to protect the people you want to protect, Zhonger, Shabi. You are a reborn person, and it is disgusting that you like minors between 10 and 3-4 years old. Can't you wait until you grow up? Still want to protect? Second point: It is still very important to grasp the scene. You can't just write about one of the two worlds, but also write about Tian Linger for most of them? My eldest brother is about 10 years old, so he has nothing to write about. The third point: I agree with the multiple female protagonists. There are too few scenes in one person's world. And Xia He was okay before she entered the full gender. If you still accept her when she enters the full gender, it would be disgusting. You can't let your woman seduce others. ? ? ? ?

When I saw the introduction, I wanted to complain. Have you watched Under One Person? Will someone like Zhang Chulan be bullied by others? This kind of shameless nonsense is fine if he doesn't bully others, so how can anyone bully him? It's really funny, just writing randomly.

Why do you still want to be Zhang Xiaofan when you are already so stupid? Why can't you create your own character?

Your own innate energy can be absorbed by others, so what are you talking about? What rubbish second set

To be honest, the writing is not very good. The protagonist does not look like an adult, which indirectly reflects that the author does not look like an adult either. The angles of thinking about the problem are too different.