
A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: From the Black Fiend Sect to Extreme Yin Island
凡人:从黑煞教到极阴岛
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- Completed
- Length
- 1.3M Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 6mo ago
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The Black Fiend Cult's techniques are riddled with flaws; encountering a Xuan Bone will inevitably result in death.
Author, what are you planning to do? Are you going to kill off this female supporting character who has such a low starting point but abundant resources? If you can intercept the resources that Yuan Yao had just obtained after killing the young master of Qingyang, then you can solo Xuan Gu who is still trapped. With Qinghuo Lei and Tihun, Xuan Gu will definitely die.
I'll teach you how to choose the female lead.
Based on the original novel's character design, the only female lead who is easily manipulated and usable is Mei Ning, whose special physique is suitable for advancing to the Yuanzhong stage of the Phoenix Cultivation Technique. She's almost a strong female lead, but still reasonably compatible with Ling Yuling, who is purely a freeloader. The others are either worthless or look down on the male leads.
The protagonist always believed he was in a dream, that it was the academy testing him, so he felt no remorse for the heinous acts of killing and practicing his skills. After all, no one would treat an NPC in a game as a real person, which is problematic. This approach only attracts readers who enjoy ruthless acts, but not those with a moral compass or who prefer serious cultivation novels.
The protagonist's mentality is so strange. Early on, he clearly discovered the little green bottle and wanted to steal it. During the trade negotiations, he even glanced at the bottle's pouch, alerting Han Li. What was he thinking? Why didn't he just make a move?
After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist still felt like he was in an illusion. Moreover, the beginning was a bit strange. The protagonist knew about Jixuan and Luanxinghai, but he didn't know about the little green bottle at first. He only learned about the little green bottle after some planning, which was really strange.
Fanfiction readers will instinctively compare the protagonist to Han Li, from cultivation techniques and supernatural abilities to personal conduct. Then they discover the protagonist is actually a leader of an evil cultivator, practicing demonic arts and using magical weapons that are completely countered by Han Li—one strike from Han Li's Evil-Repelling Divine Lightning is enough to cause him…
Judging from the comments, it seems like it's a single female lead story? Then why bother writing fanfiction? You might as well just create your own original work.
Recommended techniques for protagonists to use as inspiration for creating their own martial arts and supernatural powers: Nine Heavens True Scripture, Tai Chi Profound Skill, True Martial Tai Chi, Yin and Yang Eight Methods, Four Symbols Profound Skill, Eighteen Subduing Dragon Palms/Legs, True Martial Yuan Qi
Recommended source material for the protagonist to draw inspiration from when creating their own martial arts techniques and supernatural powers: The Nine Heavens True Scripture (which helps the protagonist develop their physical acupoints, allowing them to absorb, store, and refine Qi, thus unlocking their physical potential and aiding in comprehending the Dao of Unity of Heaven and Man) is a…
Is this a signed contract? Keep it up! While maintaining quantity, also ensure quality; take it slow and steady! Learn from Han Yu's character portrayals; the core of mortal characters lies in their understated, natural expression, not in deliberate domineering displays! 😁✊✊👍🌹
Studying in the protagonist's world is truly dangerous; if you're not serious, your teacher might kill you.