A Bow From the Start, and My Gear Just Keeps Getting Stronger

Can you find a reason to merge the protagonist's name??? Who is this? Who is this? Who is this trouble? The protagonist finds an event to identify himself with, and no one calls the protagonist by his last life name, and readers don't care what he was called in his previous life. What is the reason for insisting on two names?

If Shennong is here, why don't you try it here💩?

How should I put it, all kinds of sensational plots are starting to come out. We readers are here for the plot, not the sensationalism. The sensationalism you wrote may also be good in your opinion. But it looks awkward to us. I was so embarrassed that I almost picked my feet.

Overall, it is a rough novel. It seems that the author wants to tell the story in depth, but the fact is that there are a lot of self-monologues and dialogues between the protagonist and the novel. It is even very abrupt to write the conspiracy corner directly after the end of an event 😅. Although the first few chapters (only a few chapters away from revealing the conspiracy corner) are written with the protagonist's self-monologue, "it seems that There is a conspiracy", but the content of Chapter 133 is really too trivial Mainly I feel that the protagonist has a lot of self-monologues (it looks like the author is explaining why the protagonist does what he does 😥), and there is almost no description of the character's psychological details, such as some of the character's small movements, expressions, and tone In short, the feeling after reading this novel is that it is white.

I have just read the fifth chapter, and it is hard to imagine that a book written at the end of 2025 could have so many common sense errors, such as the fierce man who eats black bread to maintain his health, shoots a bow for an hour continuously, and the "hurry march" for hundreds of meters with his own bedding and is out of breath. There are countless problems.

There are too many poisonous points, and the plot is too vague. When something happens, he will chatter and talk back and forth, touch his nose at all times, talk to himself with a golden finger, shout out during a sneak attack, and even though he has been framed, he uses psychological activities for several pages and then chooses to forgive.

I would like to make a small suggestion and feel free to adopt it or not. Considering that a large number of swordsmanship and archery skills are unclear recently, it is better to change archery to archery. Firstly, there will be fewer typos, and secondly, it is also a naming convention. When we say that the bow and horse are skillful, we do not say that the archery and horse are skillful. In addition, according to the protagonist's recent rhythm of farming dragon blood/dragon vein kobolds, shouldn't he be able to make up a few groups of dragon tooth arrows? Can the teeth of the dragon vein dog be used as an upgraded version of the dragon tooth arrow? I feel like the author has forgotten this setting😅😅😅😅

The following is based on my current feelings after reading Chapter 40 (I opened a small account because I have works under a large account to avoid people saying that I am attracting traffic): I saw a lot of criticism of this book in the book review area, so I couldn't help but want to talk about my views on this book. This book is undoubtedly a Chinese fantasy novel. World view setting: It is a mixed world view with fighting spirit and magic, mixed with some traditional Western fantasy such as Ranger Druid. The character design of the protagonist: It is not very different from the character design of mainstream fantasy novels on the market today, whether it is the cautious type of the Western Genre style or the sultry succubus type of the Nigen style. The protagonist of this book gave me the feeling of being childlike. The protagonist's thoughts are very simple and straightforward. The behavioral logic in many places is not that of a fully mature adult who has experienced social beatings, but like a reckless boy (of course, the author did not indicate the protagonist's age in the previous life in the article, only saying that the previous life was time traveled while eating hot pot and singing, so naturally he may be a teenager or a boy). Of course, many people will definitely feel a little stupid. This feeling is very similar to the martial arts novels I read before, or the time traveler in the ancient fantasy novels long ago. Like it or not, it depends on the individual. Writing style: Very simple and light. And there are a lot of colloquial expressions, and some places lack sentence breaks. This is a point I think the author can optimize. Even if you want to maintain your own writing style, you must properly break some sentences that should be broken. So combined with his writing style and the character of its protagonist, I define it as a Chinese fantasy novel. The above is where I think it is more controversial. Then I think the best thing about it so far since I saw Chapter 40 is the plot rhythm. The plot rhythm is very tight. On the basis of being able to accept Chinese fantasy, I didn't feel jerky or boring after watching it in one go. Overall, for my taste, I would rate it 75 points. Of course, as I said before, if you want to know the taste of peaches, just try it yourself. My suggestion is to give it a try, if you don't particularly mind the controversial points I mentioned above. Oh, another point is about the name of the protagonist. How should I put it, I felt a little awkward at first. But his writing style and his name, after looking at them for a long time, really don't feel particularly out of the ordinary. Because its overall descriptive feel is not that of Western fantasy or Japanese fantasy. In short, this point is similar to what I said in the first point. It depends on whether you can accept the feeling of Chinese fantasy.

Then after the protagonist upgrades his equipment to a magical outfit, and I steal all the equipment while he is taking a shower, won't he return to before liberation?

Can you imagine? Each paragraph has the name of the protagonist Wu Wei. When talking to the character, the opposite name is Maas. The protagonist himself calls himself Wuwei. His mental activities are still the same name as in his previous life. I really can't stand this kind of schizophrenia. The name is also the same as the name of the dish. The name is enough to persuade. Retired, doing nothing, no wonder there are so many bad reviews, Tomato, the two pictures in front of you have to go away. At your level, you can still survive until it is put on the shelves without being cut off. I don't know how so many people like to eat it. It is no exaggeration to say that if you can put more than 8.0 In tomato on this thing, you are considered awesome 😅