Two Worlds: A Necromancer Invades the Martial World

A cute girl appeared just after returning to reality from the game. She had a 300-word appearance description and a 300-word background description. I went back to the book details page and looked at it - it's fantasy. Why hasn't it been turned into a light novel before it reaches fifty chapters?

The plot in the real world is a bit ridiculous. A grown man's IQ suddenly turns into a moron. This is not normal. Very dramatic. For example, when you get the desolate core for the first time and find that it can absorb energy and convert it into skill points, shouldn't you ask about the source and price of the item first? One desolate core adds one skill point, and the other one adds three skill points. What is the price difference? Don't even ask? My bones are a bit soft when I ask for food directly.

I remember that the necromancers in Diablo 2 never seemed to represent evil. They were equivalent to the regular army of the underworld. They seemed to have their own church, which was mainly responsible for burials after death. They were equivalent to the current staff of crematoriums.

It's well written. Don't write a heroine next time. You can write a woman as the protagonist, but I'd better not write a heroine. There's nothing special about it. A dozen or so chapters on getting married and having children is enough, but it can't be too long. You don't know how to write a female protagonist at all, you just use your strengths and avoid your weaknesses.

I'm also a fan of Darkness. However, the focus of this book is wrong. Darkness fans... At least I, a Darkness fan, have no interest in the author's content about Darkness. Attracted by the title of the book, I have always been looking forward to the story of the dark necromancer in another world.

I originally thought it was pretty good, but when it came to the heroine, I didn't want to pursue it anymore. It's not that I hate books with female protagonists, it's just that I think the writing there is poor. There was no need for a female protagonist. Female characters like Rogge were enough. What a pity!

I feel that Diablo doesn't need to be written in such detail. This is just a game opened by the protagonist, used for upgrades and the like. Your focus should still be on reality, and cheating is not about pretending to be cool in reality. You can't let people see you playing Diablo 🤔 Then I might as well start a game by myself. Anyway, I follow the mission process, and I will lose all the equipment quickly.

I've convinced you, and finally brought my focus back to reality. You started the ancient college competition again. No one likes to watch this stuff. Are you ready to fight for dozens of chapters?

Don't write a bunch of female supporting characters like before, and end up with Xiao Chunan

There are many things that you don't understand, but I have some popular science. You can open the chapter or paragraph and talk about it. After all, some people may not understand Diablo, and they may not understand some terms, such as 1-100 poison damage in 3 seconds. In other games, it may be a total of 3-300 poison damage in 3 seconds, but not here, it is 0-33 per second, and the total poison damage in three seconds is only 1-100. There are also some fast attacks, faster attacks, fast spells, and faster spells. Some people may not understand, why is there another word in the same entry? In fact, no, one is to speed up, and the other is to be faster, including swinging the hand back. For example, the barbarian has a skill of double slashing. If you attack quickly, the second slash will be faster. In fact, it will not increase the stiffness speed of your attack. However, you have a faster attack, that is, the third hit is also faster. The barbarian's flat A is one hit with each left hand equal to two hits, and a faster attack means that you can slash 4 times, that is, two hits with each left hand, before stiffness appears. . . Does this explanation make it understandable? ? ? Before being invaded by Hell, they already had chainmail armor, even crystal swords, and various giant axes, but they couldn't defeat the zombies. Why is this? That's because when there are no heroes, those weapons cannot cause damage to hell creatures, they can only cause 0-0, and they are just decorations. And even if it is the wooden stick at the back, it has 1~2 damage, it is more powerful than those crystal swords, because it is enchanted and can cause damage to demons, hells, monsters, etc. Otherwise, when the world was still normal, there were so many cavalry, monks, barbarians, Amazons, etc., And so many weapons. How could he still be beaten? The world was almost shattered. . . Later, some wooden sticks, iron swords and other backward weapons could even kill high-level demons. . . In this way, the reality and logic are more harmonious. Otherwise, you will not be able to defeat the enemy during the glory days, and all weapons will be useful as soon as you arrive, which is unrealistic and unscientific. . . . Also, you are the undead, even if the halo skills cannot benefit them, don't give me any trouble at this time. You can only bring one follower. Even if you go to the mage, spear knight and knight behind, you can only choose one! ! ! Although this is said to be a closing game, it is also reality. . . The skills of your previous paladin can be used by many people. . . There is no limit to the number of times. . .