The World's Revival Begins with Apprenticeship to the Great Sage

After thinking about it for a moment, I realized that the author had been writing fanfiction before and hadn't changed his approach. This time, he tried to break through by writing original content, but because he had written too much fanfiction, his writing pool was polluted.

It's subtle, the premise is common, and the logic is fairly self-consistent. But it's just not clear enough, there's a layer of separation. I think it might be because the groundwork wasn't laid enough, there's no cause and effect, and when reading it, it gives the reader a sense of "unfamiliarity" as you start reading from the middle of the story.

So far, I think it's alright, but it's definitely a bit slow to start. The main plot isn't very strong, and the plot's climaxes aren't very coherent, making the daily life scenes seem somewhat boring. Perhaps because the author previously wrote fanfiction, which had a relatively clear and fixed main storyline, making it easier to weave extra plot twists and side stories into the existing main…

Everyone says it's a slow burn, but why do I feel like the plot moved too fast? It feels like the author started the story they wanted to tell and then suddenly rushed to the end.

Hey! I love your incense-offering people so much!

Hey bro, could you go back and write some Gourmet Prisoner of the Wild fanfiction? Anything else is fine too!

The plot is good, but the writing style could be improved.

Is the author tired of writing fanfiction and preparing to prove their original work?

Well, it reads a bit strange, kind of like... I'd say it's passable. I've finished the previous books except for the ones about offering incense. Anyway, keep going!

Author, keep up the good work! Jiang Jiang is here, peeking out her little head.