The World's Revival Begins with Apprenticeship to the Great Sage

After thinking about it for a while, it should be that the author has always written fan fiction before and has not changed his ways. This time he wrote something original and broke through. However, because he wrote too many fan fiction, the writing pool was polluted. Not used to dealing with the main line, and at the same time assuming that readers have a consensus, causing the author to have an intellectual disability. The author may want to consider this. The perspective of the reader and the author do not have the same worldview recognition as before, but now the difference between the two perspectives is even greater.

It seems subtle, the setting is very common, and the logic is self-explanatory. But it's just not clear enough. After thinking about it, it may be that there is not enough foreshadowing, and there are no causes and consequences. When reading, it gives people a "strange feeling" when reading from the middle of the story. I can deduce the causes and consequences, but it just feels inexplicable. The writing is exciting but it feels like writing a suspense thriller. The behavior of the protagonist and the supporting characters is logically reasonable on the surface, but for me as a reader, I can guess but not understand. Inexplicably, it's like having a semi-lucid dream, with a main line but a trance. And the protagonist's golden finger is also unclear. Is it because of the special time travel? So Brother Monkey forcefully recognizes the protagonist as his apprentice, and then Brother Monkey gives the protagonist a benefit by asking the protagonist to meet Lao Jun to recognize him, set up a stick (background) for the protagonist, and then let Lao Jun decide whether to give the benefit (plug-in)? And this benefit is suspected to be a scripture, but what is it? I don't know, I just know that as long as the protagonist adds resources, he can improve the protagonist's soul through "weight-bearing knowledge training soul" (shown as understanding improvement and spiritual consciousness cultivation). There may be knowledge in the scriptures but the scope is uncertain. I can understand it but I am speechless. This is a complete black box. Whatever the author says, there is no possibility of the author taking advantage of the settings or patching it. It feels so uncomfortable. I thought it was a problem with my writing skills, but the author didn't seem to be like this before. It's because there is no outline and it doesn't feel like it.

So far, I think it's okay, but it's indeed a bit slow, the main plot is not strong enough, and the plot points are not very coherent, which makes the current daily life seem a bit boring. Maybe it's because the author used to write fan fiction and had a relatively clear and fixed main plot, which made it easier for the author to intersperse additional explosive points and branch plots with the existing main plot. Now that I'm writing an original story, I have to write the main plot myself, so I'm a little uncomfortable with it. I still hope that the author can adjust as soon as possible and earn a lot of money.

They say it's slow to build up, but why do I feel like the plot is moving too fast? It feels like the author started the story he originally wanted to tell and then suddenly ended it quickly.

Guy! I love you so much, Fengxiang people.

Boss, can you go back and write about delicious food to share with fellow prisoners? Anything else is fine too.

The plot is good, but the writing still has room for improvement.

The author is tired of writing fan fiction and is he ready to create something original?

How can I put it this way? It's a weird thing to read. It's kind of… I'll just count it as food. I've read all the previous books except Fengxiangren. Anyway, keep going.

Come on, author, Jiangjiang is here, stick your little head out here