Genshin Impact: The Incense Keeper of Liyue

Actually, there's no need to hide things from another world. Genshin Impact has an otherworldly setting, and every year there are travelers from other worlds. It's just that the protagonist is special. Just make up a plausible reason, or if that doesn't work, attribute it to talent.

The fictional family of the main character is very vivid, but the flaw is the inclusion of Ningguang. Ningguang's brilliance lies entirely in her ability to rise from the bottom to the top, even lacking access to education in her childhood. Giving Ningguang a powerful family outright feels like those Japanese anime where, no matter how exciting the beginning, it all ends with a bunch of privileged kids flaunting their resources.

He wrote a poem called "Playing for Three Autumns".

Quietly asking how many people who read this book like Walnut, because it's for my wife.

Gu Sanqiu's voice message at the top of the hour: (I haven't listened to the in-game character voices much, so this is a fan-made version based on the voice lines on Lofter. Please point out any formatting errors. It may be out of character or have a strange intonation, but please be gentle with your criticism 😥) First meeting: Hello, are you alright?

After reading over two hundred chapters, I'm not really ready to continue. The plot is flat, nothing particularly bad, but nothing particularly exciting either. The earlier parts of Inazuma's storyline are disorganized, lacking clear goals and objectives. It feels like playing Genshin Impact – a chaotic open world, jumping around on a whim, but not truly open, mostly confined to the main city.

The slime next door was originally designed to drastically strengthen the opposing forces in the Oser War and weaken the Liyue faction, as if they were afraid that Liyue wouldn't be wiped out. Your book significantly strengthens Liyue's top-tier combat power, while also not neglecting its mid- and lower-tier forces. It seems you were worried about too many deaths during the main battle. Reading both books is a bit confusing ( •᷄⌓•᷅ )

Wow, that's impressive. However, it seems like Kurumi is the main heroine now, and Beidou also seems likely. If it's the younger sister, they might need to have a more "in-depth" relationship. The timeline hasn't been revealed yet (it seems there's a part mentioning an adventurer group from Mondstadt, possibly Falgar's group, so the timeline is probably half a year before the Traveler's…

... The Liyue Mondstadt chapter is alright, readable, but what's the Inazuma chapter about? To be fair, Inazuma has a history of nearly 2000 years since its founding. Subtracting the 500 years of Kanria, that means Ying and Zhongli have been drinking together for 1000 years. In terms of relationships, does the protagonist even deserve to be compared to them?

Keqing here is so unlikable. I don't understand why she takes it for granted that the protagonist should give unconditionally, and she draws her sword at the slightest disagreement, making her a complete shrew. Instead of focusing on the bond between the protagonist and Liyue, it would be better to show the protagonist taking the initiative. There's no need to portray Keqing as a vicious shrew; it's really hard to believe that Keqing and the protagonist are friends.