I’m in Swallowed Star, but the System Is in the Primordial World

The protagonist's cheat-like abilities are incredibly strong; his strength increases rapidly through annual simulations. This makes the protagonist's adventures, money-making, and combat seem pointless, as most of his earnings are used to cultivate plants. The text states that cultivating plants to the level of a Domain Lord requires 10 Chaotic Units, yet the protagonist can easily kill a Domain Lord in his third simulation.

Why the rush? You could have taken it slower; time is precious. Making things so complicated will only attract unwanted attention.

I've never quite understood the purpose of those treasures in the simulated anthology. In the early stages, you're just trying to survive, so you don't really need them. By the time the protagonist starts fighting others, they'll likely already have most of the ultimate treasures. What's the point of collecting so many powerful items? The protagonist is essentially a lone wolf; having just one set of the best treasures is enough.

Everything else is fine, but the comparison between the Great Luo and the True God feels a bit far-fetched. If we compare them like that, even a Saint can't escape the confines of the mortal realm.

You've been here so many years earlier, and if I hadn't seized the Star Tower, I'd look down on you. Don't give me that moral nonsense. You've come so early, with such a huge cheat code. Seriously, if you still can't become the Lord of the Universe in hundreds of thousands of years, don't even bother writing this story.

This is the first time an author has written about a member of a slave organization as the opening theme, which is very original. It's a real shame that the author insisted on linking Devouring Stars with the Primordial Era. If you're going to write about Devouring Stars, just write about Devouring Stars. Bringing it into other worlds is very unethical.

The premise is quite good, but author, you'd better pay attention: when writing fanfiction about Devouring, you should strictly adhere to the Devouring system. Powers from other systems, including treasures, should ideally be converted into elements of the Devouring system. Don't include any random or nonsensical elements. Also, I don't know what's wrong or how to express it, but after reading dozens of chapters, it feels like I'm reading a fantasy version of Devouring Stars.

The rest is purely for the sake of simulation.

Dear readers, could you please lend a hand and contribute to reading this article if you have a spare moment? While the author isn't likely to abscond, not following the story could easily cause it to die out... Dear readers, all you need to do each day is turn to the last page to get 🙂🙂🙂

(Personal skill level ≠ combat strength; I don't know what the author thinks.)