Swallowed Star: Beginning With the Analysis of Heaven and Earth

This is a really good subject matter. If the author writes it well, it's like rewriting a whole book. After all, it's too far removed from Luo Feng's era, unlike those people who just copy homework all day long.

The subject matter is alright, but the writing style of this new book lacks the "devouring" element, and the details of each instance of the cheat ability being drawn aren't explained enough. These are just a few personal suggestions. Having read the previous book, I wish the author good luck!

The author's writing style is often overly ornate, making it difficult to read. It's not that I can't understand it, but rather that I need to read very carefully to fully grasp what's being expressed. However, I read novels primarily for relaxation.

Is this all flashy and rambling? Are you writing it for yourself or something? Just indulging in self-admiration?! Eighty-five percent of a chapter is nonsense, full of nonsensical ramblings. You're a transmigrator, so how do you use your cheat codes? How do you choose a world to fish in—is it random? Nothing is explained. A single sentence is cut off mid-sentence. Are you some kind of shaman?

A race without even a World Lord possesses weapons with immortal-level power.

Instead of thinking things through, you blurt out everything. You just say everything: the Nine Tribulations Secret Manual, Luo Feng's possession, and even the final reincarnation. You just say everything!

This is basically no longer a fanfiction of Devouring; it just borrows some settings from Devouring. This is a new book, and the author was probably very excited when writing it. But I was completely confused and couldn't understand it at all. Also, could you please not use single names? One name is fine, but with more, I always get them mixed up.

First, the writing is flashy and superficial, but upon closer inspection, a large portion of it is filler. Second, the content and setting differ somewhat from the original work.

Dear readers, please support me by reading further, otherwise this book will die of neglect! (๑>ڡ<)☆

Was the original talent level set too low? We know that geniuses appearing once every ten million epochs can be world lords or marquises. Before the original story began, approximately 34% of the reincarnation era had passed, or 3.4 Trillion epochs.