Swallowed Star: I’ll Stop Being Human on Canglan Star!

In the Devouring Starry Sky, without a clan, it's easy to be possessed and enslaved!

I'm not saying I really have to complain, but the protagonist's actions were so childish, I'd actually call them stupid. In the part where he impersonated the Crimson Serpent King to lure the aliens into an assassination attempt, this imposter had no connection with that Cold Bat, so why did he tell him everything?

Furthermore, the Mechanical Group itself doesn't have a soul, so how can it attack the souls of others? You might say that the Mechanical Group's Father God, as the strongest, uses some means to enslave a Venerable, but where do the other members of the Mechanical Group get their soul attacks?

The protagonist didn't join the five core forces through the Genius Battle; instead, he joined the Cosmic Mercenary Alliance through an internal referral system. This involves demonstrating amazing combat power and being discovered and recommended by lower-level officers. He then participates in the Trial Tower assessment alone, passes the assessment, and is ranked to enter the core level.

You can refer to the writing of Eagle Lord. Later, you can give the protagonist a Hunyuan bloodline, awaken the bloodline to become a Hunyuan, and then slowly become a lord. After all, Tomato hasn't written about the Hunyuan aspect, so you can freely develop your own ideas.

Hey everyone, please give me your support! After the author's work is published, I'll be writing 10,000 words a day... For a month!!!

It doesn't necessarily have to be the mortal python type. Aren't Nuwa and Fuxi better? Another peak bloodline of the human race... The innate eight trigrams transformed into the eight paths of the beast god.

🤔Is it necessary to recruit apprentices in the Secret Realm?

It's well-written, but it doesn't feel like a description of "Swallowed Star"; it feels more like a description of cultivation novels.

Why take in this lousy lackey? 😅