Naruto: I Wrote a Diary to Expose the Arrival of Otsutsuki

What a bunch of nonsense, you super shadowed a Danzo and knew his information in advance, how much effort did it take? ! Since you flew the God of Thunder and asked him to snatch away the other gods before he used Izanagi, why don't you take this opportunity to kill him directly and recycle the other gods. It's really disgusting. If you don't write the original plot of the anime, there will be no logic at all, right? Is he also a master at this level? ! You won't really be selling your account!

And it looks like we have to wash the weasels? If you wash a monkey and forget about him being a loser, you can wash the one who killed his own parents?

Rubbish, the whole novel is a bit putting the cart before the horse, importing other people's stories into your novel, and the protagonist turns out to be just a digression. The real content is all the original content of Naruto. It is estimated that only two or thirty of the more than 400 pictures are the protagonists of this novel, and the rest are all original works of Naruto. Report it bit by bit, it's so boring, I might as well watch Naruto again.

Forget about filling it with water, it's still inconsistent. I've written about Shisui's eyes in about 95 chapters. I've written about 130 chapters and I'm shocked again. At the beginning, Jiraiya was still there. The Hokage did a physical examination every day to prevent the genjutsu. Later, it turned out that it didn't work. You have to inform the old man immediately. How about the left and right brains interacting with each other? Either it was written by a different person or it was written by AI.

No, is this really the author who wrote Martial God Space? Even if your account is sold, you can write a book like this

If Kakashi really gets this diary, it will be placed three generations ago in less than half an hour. The protagonist's memory will be searched the next day.

Diary novels are quite interesting, but they are very difficult to write, and they are easy to write in the early stage, but they are likely to collapse in the middle stage. I have no impression of high-quality works.

Diary system? You might as well take it easy, I bought it for free, everyone knows that the others are fine, this kind of AI version...

With similar themes, Lu Zi's show is already bad enough, but Qidian's show is even worse than Lu Zi's. There really is no one else.

This book is said to be a diary, isn't it just an exposure stream that has been popular for a while? The most annoying thing about exposure novels is that the protagonist is written like a clown, a puppet without a soul, and readers cannot get into it. No one wants to be like The Truman.

After seeing more than a hundred chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. After it was released, it was still filled with water, and there were even repeated or contradictory contents in several consecutive chapters. It's very much like I only wrote a little bit of what the book review said, and relied on AI to supplement and polish the rest. The plot is not completely boring, but I have to slow down every time I read a dozen or so chapters, which I feel is quite a loss.

In public, more than thirty jounin of the same clan openly attacked the leader of the Hokage (the village's top brass) who accepted his fate. Isn't it tantamount to betraying the village? What do you think?

To be honest, there are so many original works and all kinds of nonsense, you really might as well just fly🦌Forget it

Some breathing method or something came out from the back, and it was finished immediately. Instead of writing about Naruto, write about Demon Slayer. This immediately brought the book down.

It's so bad that I started writing and making it up later. Don't order it.

It's hard to say anything after it's put on the shelves, and I feel like it's a waste of money.

Nervous, good Naruto, I have nothing to write, and started to piece together other anime.

Whatever you write, I just rely on my feelings. I don't even check the information. The AI ​​is better than what you wrote. It's just a bunch of shit.

Madara was overdoing it, and Naruso didn't know how to defeat Madara. . . . It's funny, when they are single-eyed, they are pressed to the ground and rubbing together. Yes, they are separate, not the two of them working together. Madara can't even defeat one. When it is double-eyed, Rinku and Naruto's shadow clones are 50-50 split. The Tenzhi Zhenxing used is useless, and then it reaches the lower limit. In terms of strength, it is not on the same level as Kaguya. Don't brag about combat experience. Madara is a torturer in all his fights. He has never won at the same level, and they are all suppressed or abused by the other party.

It's pretty good. This one is a bit longer.

Do you have nothing to write? Why are you writing this here and there?

We should show a scene of Boruto and Sarana almost kissing, then a scene of Naruto and Sasuke kissing, and the last sentence: They are indeed a family.

Naruto has so many original animation plots and theatrical versions. You can write supplementary plots for the game, but don't write what-if lines, okay? If that doesn't work, let's talk about other anime about the moon, aliens, sacred trees, battles and other elements, whether it's Sailor Moon, Dragon Ball, Lightbringer (Magic King), Fate, Super Demon Heroes, etc. Just let the system draw rewards and help the protagonist.

When Sasuke broke into the Five Kage Conference, all the other five Kages except the Kazekage had the motive to kill Sasuke because they saw that Naruto was too embarrassed to kill him, and Sasuke only went to kill Danzo. Is this the main reason why Sasuke is so embarrassed? The Tsuchikage had been taught a lesson by Madara, and of course he would not let go if he could eliminate the descendant of Uchiha. The Mizukage had been controlled by the writing eye since he took office. An Uchiha in the Akatsuki organization is not the mastermind because it's almost the same. Raikage knows what's going on. Hokage is Danzo and he is Sasuke's target. Basically, the Raikage, Mizukage, and Iwakage would kill each other as soon as they met, and Sasuke could only deal with them in a hurry, hitting and running.

Che Zulu talks too much. He often rambles on for hundreds of words in one sentence. Even when I was writing the plot of the original work, I didn't feel confused. These over and over again words of Che Zulu are really stupid.

After reading about a million words, can you believe that the Chuunin exams are not over yet? This diary and memories account for 90% of the space. If I have this time, I can read the original version, okay? Use you to write here?

The author didn't write well in some places. When he showed them the future battles, they didn't lament how powerful they were. Instead, they felt that I could fuck me. Their current strength was as strong as the sky, that is, the peak shadow level, even Chao Ying couldn't do it. They still felt like that here. They were too arrogant and couldn't see clearly their own power positioning. They couldn't get involved in the battle on the moon, and I don't know how the author wrote it. It makes me feel that each of these people is more confident than the other, and each one thinks that I can do it. Moreover, the author has completely disrupted the original plot by writing it. Can Sasuke and Naruto really grow? When you become Hokage, do you only fight to level up? There are many things missing, and Naruto and Sasuke may not be able to truly grow. Watching the big scenes in advance can indeed broaden your horizons, but if you raise your horizons too high, it is easy to be arrogant. I feel that it is just that, and I keep writing "Sasuke, you can definitely reach this level", "You have more potential than your brother", and so on. Sasuke became very strong after opening the Mangekyo Sharingan and adapting to it, because he had Orochimaru lay the foundation for creating a perfect container. The Sage of Six Paths could appear. In addition to the war at the time, there were also environmental factors. The two protagonists also needed to have strong enough basic strength. If you agree with the Naruto conspiracy theory, then you think I didn't say it. But I still feel that Sasuke and Naruto, who have not grown up, do not have the will and mentality of the later period. It is as if they suddenly changed from a poor man to a king. They will only become arrogant and busy, proud and complacent, feeling that everything has been destined by fate and is their own. Look at Sasuke's taijutsu, after three years of growth, even Taiga was amazed; his intelligence against Deidara was cultivated and trained by Orochimaru. And if Naruto didn't have the faith and determination to recover Sasuke, would Naruto's character be able to train seriously to that extent? Can Naruto and Kyuubi really reconcile with each other if they don't go through the battle together? Without enough strength, Turtle Island will not be able to get out, and all the coalition forces will be disabled. Kaikaibamen can indeed defeat Utsuobara, but what next? I think if the Six Paths Sage sees that this generation of Asura and Indra are not good enough, maybe he will come out to clean up the mess on his own. They will have nothing to do with them at all. The one-sided crushing ninja coalition will not be able to unite as one, and will more likely flee in all directions.                                                                                                                                . Just make up for some regrets, it would be boring if everyone knew about it. That Jiraiya clone also knew that it would only change some intermediate results and not show the entire process to others. What this diary did made me really speechless. The author's writing of the drama is not very good either. The whole battle between Hashirama and Madara was very bland, and it didn't have the same shocking feeling when I first watched it. There is also the powerful combat power, speed, strength, etc. That the two broke out in the battle on the moon. The fighting scenes were really not very well written. In fact, it is best for Sasuke to learn from Orochimaru and grow the fastest. In Konoha Village, his development is indeed too slow. He may not be able to reach the level of the original work in three years. The environment is too bland and cannot cultivate a truly strong person. You can look at the comparison of Taijutsu between Eyeless Madara and Sasuke, Madara's reaction speed, and ability to judge the battle situation. Even without eyes, he can fight the Eternal Mangekyo Sasuke back and forth. This is the Taijutsu developed through years of fighting. If you don't defect, learning in the village is really a bit of a failure. I feel that the foundation may not be as good as that of Sasuke who defected. Don't think that there is no taijutsu. The rest is full of Gundam battles. Did you see that Boruto is all about taijutsu? If you look at the fight between Nazusa and Ishiki, it's taijutsu mixed with various abilities. Ordinary ninjutsu has no effect at all. Even Gundam is just a toy. The training and practice of taijutsu are the most important. Kai just doesn't have the power of the six paths. If he has the power of the six paths and opens the eight gates, you can see if he can kick Madara to death. In short, these are some of my personal suggestions. I think the subject matter of this book is okay, but some shocking scenes are not written, and their shock and fear of powerful power are not reflected. Everything is attributed to the gift of fate. It is not because they are Asura and Indra that they have such strong strength, but through every step of everyone in Hokage, step by step, they have strong enough strength to be able to accept the gift of the Six Paths Sage. The protagonist of the original book has not only become stronger in strength, but also has a state of mind that is no longer that of a child. The author now writes that even Jiraiya and the others feel a little like playing house. I can only rate this book as average. The early stage is okay. When it comes to the shocking scenes, there is no way to describe the shock through detailed descriptions. It is better to watch the Naruto anime.

It's a bit interesting, I feel like I'm revisiting it, and it's a hodgepodge of various forums. The author is careful and has at least sorted out various ideas.