Dragon Lord!

The writing is very good. At first glance, it seems that I have been a dragon. The writing is very real. It matches my experience of being a dragon. Come on!

Dragons are obscene, and reality has already suppressed them. You can't even describe the nature of dragons in your novels?

Have you ever seen a dragon? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

To be honest, the protagonist is a demon clan, and humans are still in the tribal era. Just integrate humans directly. Then, similar to the family cultivation novel, the protagonist's life as a demon clan is long behind the scenes. At this time, the human race has not yet succeeded in cultivation, and their lives are short. Then they go from tribes to big tribes, then to towns, and then to humans. The country is a very natural plot, unlike the current plot, where a group of mountain people have been killed, and now because of a Spica, they have to directly teach the other party. Regardless of the status of this Spica, will the Star Observation Department go back on their words in the future? So what if Spica decides to die to express his will? Can his death change the overall situation? As for the protagonist, he wants to develop a little while at the same time he wants to gain merit. Now facing the Star Observation Club, which has an unknown attitude and unknown strength, he has to pass on his skills. It's outrageous. He has to ask the opponent to explain each formation before he knows the solution. I don't know how big the protagonist's heart is. The characters before and after are different, which is ridiculous. Anyway, I'll read a few more chapters, and if I still feel like this, I'll give up.

Is the main plot of this book that the human race becomes stronger under the leadership of the protagonist, or does the protagonist's own abilities become stronger? The writing style is generally good, and it is worth spending money to read. The confusion of the main plot is the biggest problem of this book. Why did you write a time-travel character? It can't just be to show that the protagonist is morally noble! Not a strong chance The inexplicable division of camps, what is the purpose of writing about each Tang Xian? The big monsters developed various tribes of humans, and later they wrote that the human race and the demon race were inseparable. The first one was a dialectical relationship between you and me, and you in me. Later, the level of struggle dropped and became diode. Some monks said that humans and monsters were inseparable. The Pardon Ling Jade is also inexplicable. It takes so much time to write about a treasure, and then it is gone. What is this treasure used for? This is like the protagonist having an account of 20 million, but not knowing what to do. Then the protagonist has now made a decision and wants to invest it. Each of his strategists has his own set of perfect ideas. Each of these ideas has its own reasons, and it is impossible to distinguish between high and low. Then the protagonist thinks, just go with them all, whichever one is more popular. The problem is that the protagonist can do this, but the author cannot! Your text advancement is inherently limited, and your expression is limited. You must spend the most words to advance the main line. In the process of advancement, you will definitely encounter various in-depth difficulties. In this way, you will try one thing here and there, and you will only touch each direction. To put it bluntly, what is the difference between this and everyone else?

It would be better if Zhu Qianqiu removed the setting of rebirth, to be honest

Is she a female author? It looks simple and has a female flavor 🤤

It made me want to share, but... By chapter 18 I couldn't stand it anymore! Brother, what are you doing! Just lie down? Push the main line, increase the crisis, increase the pressure! In Chapter 10, I started to lie flat. By Chapter 18, there was no main line at all, and there was no pressure or crisis! I thought I was ready to take off, but in the end, you told me: We've arrived 🤔

Have you ever been a dragon? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

I've only met the ginseng spirit twice. The tiger spirit didn't even chat for a few words the first time they met, and they started to become sworn friends. Isn't that a bit too hasty?