The Liver Gives Birth to a Taoist Lord of All Laws

I actually almost gave up on the book. There is a saying that the sense of immediacy at the beginning is too strong. Then it will be more depressing in the early stage, but it's not that depressing is bad. I think 80% of online articles are either depressing first, then depressing, and then depressing again... I want to say that you are writing documentary literature here... Otherwise, it is suppressed first, and the later moments are so bad that it is better not to read it. There are very few people who can really suppress the front, bury the stems, and bury the threads well. This book seems to start at chapter 30, and the bitterness at the beginning makes it sweeter at the end. What I like very much is that the author really grasped the essence of turning around to feel better. He did not give up at all, or kill the relatives and friends around the protagonist in the script, but instead gave them more help and improved their lives. This is the real joy of turning around stories... I have seen too many malicious "script killings" for plot advancement, and it was very divisive. Other than this, the plot development is really good. After reading a lot of novels, I can guess some of the plots. A must be followed by B or C, but the author is so stupid that it turns into B or C. Originally, I thought I would offend my son and grow him up one by one, but he... Died? Dead? Huh? You... I originally thought that his vengeful father would come to kill his relatives and friends in revenge, but in the end, he became a disciple of a big boss and came to warn... You, this... ah? It was beyond my expectation, refreshing and satisfying. The rhythm is bright and the logic is smooth. It's a genuine good book that is totally worth reading. Hurry up and put it on the shelves. I want to pay to read it all the time.

This book is about the protagonist. As everyone said, this is just the beginning of the book. Goldfinger has already lost its sense of existence, and the protagonist is not feeling any better. He is just banging his head here and there.

It's a pretty good book, but I know too much about it. After reading more than a dozen chapters, the comment section is full of comments about the author's inability to teach the author how to write a book. It makes me upset. There are so many people who are too good at what they do, and I might as well award the Nobel Prize in Literature to the comment section.

I have voted for the monthly ticket, the money has been charged, and I am waiting for updates!

I've ordered it all, and after reading over 140 chapters, I want to share my thoughts. Although the book is very depressing at the beginning, it gets better once you get through it, but things start to go wrong when the sixth son of the He family comes later. First of all, the male protagonist becomes more and more complicated as he learns. As a result, he cannot concentrate on his own skills. He has not fully understood the original skills, so he is greedy and greedy. Moreover, the author keeps suppressing the male protagonist and directly abolishes his liver to become stronger. The details are as follows: Disadvantages: 1. When fighting Yang Meng and Liang Wulang, the male protagonist's skills always either greatly increase his proficiency, or his proficiency instantly improves and breaks through. I'm very curious about this. Can't you compete with people from the second and third realms? You can't just use the golden finger if the male protagonist has it, right? 2. The golden finger is set to open high and go low. At the beginning of the novel, the proficiency setting of making your liver stronger gradually changed. In the end, your liver has no big effect, and gradually turns into a super understanding function. The male protagonist does not use this golden finger to crazily improve his skill proficiency, but is constantly pestered by trivial matters. It is strange that he can become the Taoist Master of Ten Thousand Methods. I believe that if the male protagonist becomes angry, he will definitely reach a state of perfection in the skills he is currently practicing. The author found that the male protagonist in the novel was still not generous enough. He had forgotten what happened to his brother at the beginning. To borrow a few words from the book by Water Monkey next door, spiritual practice is inherently difficult, and if you are entangled in trivial matters, it is even less likely to achieve anything. The realm issue has always been something I want to complain about. It would be funny to say that the four realms are the end points of the first realm of perfection. The four realms in the book mean basic introduction. There are only four or five third realm warriors in Heishui County. It feels like the male protagonist is just a tool to promote the plot. He has been stuck in the one realm of perfection, blindly suppressing the male protagonist in order to advance the plot. In order to advance the plot, Golden Finger once again has the flavor of becoming crazy and strong as long as the liver is there. The male protagonist's strength increases rapidly and the plot unfolds. After the plot calms down, the male protagonist continues to do trivial things and occasionally practice. When I thought of this, I instantly lost interest in the following chapters. I was originally attracted by the introduction. I wanted to see the male protagonist become crazy and strong. I thought there was a male protagonist with a lot of liver. The result is a group portrait article. The male protagonist's master is invincible all the way. The male protagonist is still stuck in the Dzogchen realm after one or two hundred chapters. Why, there is an invincible good master, so there is no need to take the test? Master Ning kills instantly every time, and the enemy is just bidding to sell out. If this is the case, there is no need to write the introduction like this. Just change the title of the book to My Strong and Invincible Master. What is the use of your golden fingers? Where is the meaning of the title of the book? Where are all the Dharma embodied?

I always feel that the author has not grasped the joy of writing books, and it makes people choke. For example, in the part where the red-browed thieves attack the city, the protagonist's fighting scenes are only a few, and the most is killing Yang Meng. The results of martial arts training are not fully demonstrated, and the other ones highlight the old sword; when he discovered that Mo Zhuan can be combined with martial arts, he didn't push forward immediately, so he might as well find a book Forget about merging the same thing, and then go back to writing other plots; the protagonist has perfected the first level, but has to lower the level, saying that he is not in a hurry to advance to the second level, and wants to wait for the master to come back, so he goes to the fire kiln again. The plot of the fire kiln clearly requires the protagonist to gain a blacksmithing skill, but the writing is extremely delayed, and it is still beeping after two or three chapters. It doesn't feel that good, it looks uncomfortable! ! !

Don't write his brother into some kind of god. It makes me sick. The protagonist just woke up and his brother immediately became a genius. He is even more awesome than the protagonist.

I bought almost 700,000 words. I have no need for updates or explosions. I have been struggling. I think it's not too much to say thank you 🐴4 for the money I spent.

The author asked, why do you have to press the level? How many chapters have it taken to practice, and you are all writing side plots. I haven't moved at all, and the liver is out of play. Where is your word liver? Your golden finger is meaningless, and it is still spinning in a small circle. The old writer is so awesome, I really feel like a waste.

The world view is quite large, but I didn't even finish the Novice Village before I became a eunuch.

Everything is good, but I feel that modern knowledge is useless at all 😅😅😅😅 Even for fishing, there is a lot of modern knowledge that can be used. Who can go down to the river to catch it, power it on, or prescribe medicine or something 🙂🙂🙂

Analyze the current predicament of the book (the author's attempt to increase the sense of substitution and readability of the novel led to a decrease in the concentration of information that creates exciting points) 1. The protagonist's motivation is weak after the identity of the protagonist is increased At the beginning, the protagonist is a poor fisherman and needs to use all methods to overturn/destroy the fishing pen. All adventures, forbearance, hard work and other behaviors at this stage correspond to the decrease in the difficulty of solving a certain character in the fishing camp. Readers will intuitively feel the change in the advantages and disadvantages of the enemy and ourselves, and it is easy to understand the price the protagonist has paid in advance for the motivation of survival. After killing Lao Yang, the protagonist lost a certain intuitive enemy/target. Instead of forming a new goal that drives the protagonist, the addition of multiple identities has dispersed motivations, causing the protagonist's goal to become increasingly blurred within the same amount of text. 2. Characteristics are blurred after social relations are complicated In the early stage of the plot, each of the protagonist's superior qualities has a clear contrasting object, such as his younger brother, the fishing pen deacon who is not interested in martial arts, etc. However, after the apprenticeship is successful, the protagonist's cheating effect is not as profound as the master's skill at the same level. In terms of how to behave, there are also thirteen rows of peers who have similar advantages for comparison. The fun points of the show-off type still require comparison to be easily triggered. After losing the advantages of high-frequency comparison in terms of upgrade effect and human behavior, those tools used by authors for comparison that only appear once are completely unable to carry the daily fun points and readers' expectations. 3. Inability to achieve achievements and lead to boredom Under the two premises of the protagonist's weak motivation and vague characteristics, readers no longer know where to direct their expectations. The author further amplifies this boredom by allowing the protagonist to upgrade his life skills, and even the most advantageous plug-ins cannot make him happy. How can this novel make people happy? In the current mode, the author has appropriately added the main line that the protagonist will subjectively promote (exploring past history and managing power in fourteen lines). However, due to the limitations of the protagonist's character at the beginning, the author did not show the exciting details of exploring knowledge and secrets, and managing power, which resulted in a boring situation of earning achievements in vain. This article mainly analyzes the current difficulties of the book. I hope that the author can give full play to his own advantages as soon as possible so that the achievements of this book can be continued. You've already seen this, why don't you write something to make this book more readable?

"The Chronicle of the Solitary Master of the Dao" This is the end of the cultivators when the way of heaven collapses. The true traditions of the saints have disappeared, the dharma lineage of hundreds of schools has disappeared, and the entire world has fallen into immeasurable calamity. In Chixian Shenzhou, which has been in decline for three thousand years, there are heretics who abuse the people, and there are great monsters below. Moreover, the mountains and swamps are covered with wild buildings, and the grass is entrenched with dragons and snakes. Taking bait, refining medicine, receiving the pot, and obeying the destiny; Exhaling, training strength, transformation, and gathering true form. Looking at all kinds of sentient beings, they all use this to knock on the door of immortality! In this chaotic world where the winds and waves are high and people's hearts are dangerous. Bai Qi, a fisherman from Heihe County, suddenly opened his eyes. Start a myth and legend of breaking through the barriers and taking sole control of Taoism! PS: Ah ah ah ah ah, wait for me to write a million words, and I will definitely regain this title! 😭😭😭

This b can be cut so unscrupulously. Everyone here has a responsibility. I have been paying attention to the new book and am waiting for it to be completed before I order it. It seems to be the same as the previous two books.

It's a pity, eunuch, Bai Qilang still didn't become the Lord of Wanfa Dao after all.

If you have something at home, you can make an announcement and wait until you finish it. You may think that taking a break for too long will affect your grades. But unless you stop writing books, as long as you still want to write a book, you can't cut off books with good grades. Who will read your new book if your good grades are cut off? How can there be trust? If you finish this book well, there will still be a lot of people subscribing. If you finish this book, you will have a strong foundation for the next one to have a group of loyal readers.

This kind of eunuch shouldn't be allowed to write a new book. If he doesn't finish it, the book fee should be refunded, which is a waste of money. Grass

I just found out that this thief has a long criminal record. I just found out today that this is a eunuch book. An old thief who wants to return money.

I heard that the new book will be about Eunuch again, but fortunately I have been waiting and watching 🙂. This kind of eunuch is addicted, and we can't expect him to quit.

I thought the protagonist was the Huang Chao version where the inner treasury was burned into beautiful ashes and the bones of public ministers were trampled in the streets. I didn't expect that he was actually a eunuch.

According to the protagonist's current improvement rate, it is estimated that the protagonist's realm will reach the fourth level after 600 chapters. This book is set according to the author's background. Based on the protagonist's current level of improvement, it would normally take at least 2,000 chapters to be written. Or the speed of light will increase to a high level later, and then it will end unfinished.

What is Qidian doing? The eunuch book is still a high-quality product 😡

You are a human being. When you cut it, you kept saying that you would change it and not do it again. I started writing the new book just like this one, but I had to describe the background ruthlessly, the political establishment, and private goods. You also played the role of corrupt upper-class people and disgusting book friends. You just can't write about fighting. You have to disgust readers and ruin the goodwill accumulated by previous readers, right? Why don't you go and write a contemporary pen for others and just write the beginning?

It's also a fantasy with a system, starting in the water. This book is really no worse than Water Monkey. Unfortunately, the author's character is far worse than that of Crustacean Ant. If he does it again, I'm afraid no one will read his book again.

I just came back from the next book. It looks like he wants to be a eunuch. This author has no credibility at all.

No matter how new the book is, who would dare to read your book?

Don't look at this old eunuch.

Damn, dead eunuch

Okay, okay, these chapters are really well written.

The author is so full of bad things that I burst into tears😭