This Man Comes from Five Thousand Years Ago

Go take a look at the mentality of the elderly people around you. They are all less than a hundred years old, and what you write is a student who has experienced thousands of years...

The year 5000 is just a background 🙂🙂🙂🙂 Selling dog meat over sheep's heads.

It's all about adding settings and memories, and it becomes more and more confusing.

This is what you have lived for 5,000 years?

Those who admire Cai Yuanpei can find out what he did on April 12th 🤭🤭🤭

Brother, after reading the introduction, I have no desire to read it. In a novel like yours, you can be a witness who follows the boss in a different capacity. How dare you write that you are the boss?

I've seen a book before where the male protagonist has lived on earth for hundreds of millions of years and is going to be the female protagonist's bodyguard.

See the so-called Persian Empire and Greece made up by the West! Just leave, even if you write lavishly, you can't get rid of the low-level and ignorant world view!

The plot is completely unlike someone who has lived for 5,000 years

The writing skills are very good, and the first part is good, but the plot becomes messy starting from the time when the heroine dreams of dreaming. It feels like I don't know what to write so I just put everything in it. One sleep went back to ancient times, the next went to the future, and then various conspiracies were made against him from modern times to the future. It's not that this book is poorly written, but the plot outline is too broad and confusing.