This Man Comes from Five Thousand Years Ago

Go take a look at the mentality of the elderly people around you. They are all less than a hundred years old, and what you write is a student who has experienced thousands of years...

The year 5000 is just a background 🙂🙂🙂🙂 Selling dog meat over sheep's heads.

It's all about adding settings and memories, and it becomes more and more confusing.

This is what you have lived for 5,000 years?

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Brother, after reading the introduction, I have no desire to read it. In a novel like yours, you can be a witness who follows the boss in a different capacity. How dare you write that you are the boss?

I've seen a book before where the male protagonist has lived on earth for hundreds of millions of years and is going to be the female protagonist's bodyguard.

See the so-called Persian Empire and Greece made up by the West! Just leave, even if you write lavishly, you can't get rid of the low-level and ignorant world view!

The writing skills are very good, and the first part is good, but the plot becomes messy starting from the time when the heroine dreams of dreaming. It feels like I don't know what to write so I just put everything in it. One sleep went back to ancient times, the next went to the future, and then various conspiracies were made against him from modern times to the future. It's not that this book is poorly written, but the plot outline is too broad and confusing.

The plot is completely unlike someone who has lived for 5,000 years

At first I thought it looked good. Later, I suddenly felt too oppressive. Suddenly it felt boring.

｜Category: Science Fiction ｜Advantages: Grand setting, amazing imagination The first few chapters were thought to be daily literature + campus literature + academic construction, but they turned out to be biology + time travel + doomsday salvation. The protagonist is immortal, but will be resurrected and change into a new appearance after death, which is as magical as a snake shedding its skin, a cicada shedding its shell, or a chrysalis transforming into a butterfly; Enter Peking University at the beginning, with both modeling and intelligence. It is also a very cool template for writing, not heavy or abusive. ; He does not have a typical misanthropic tendency, but is active on the cusp of the trend of the times and devotes himself to social development and progress. He said: Five thousand years is not enough, and he also wants to see mankind move from the Stone Age to the Information Age, from the Information Age to the Interstellar Age. Suffering from a strange "soul disorder", after regaining consciousness, he found that he was in another place, and the memories in the middle seemed to have been cut off. The ability of consciousness to travel through the dreams of one's own blood gives a new way to open "ancestral dreams". Although this ability is not currently used, it instead travels to one's own past and future self and one's descendants, revealing the truth about "Asoria" —— The mysterious text "The moon collapses in the sky" recorded in Xixia script has turned into a real epic CG in the future: the moon disintegrates and breaks into planetary belts surrounding the sky. Huge boulders cross the earth, penetrate into the sky, and open up the atmosphere. Frost covers the world and all human beings are extinct. In 1945, when he was preparing to behead Japan, he died when two little suns fell from the sky, and when he was resurrected in 2008, how many things happened during this period? The mysterious organization "Adam" pursues the "God Descendants", treats the immortal protagonist as a god, and has evil intentions... Here it starts to get heavy, but it becomes more exciting. ———————— Then again: It is said that if this book does not collapse, it will become a masterpiece—— But there are already some bad signs, and some places are a bit witty. For example, the protagonist is not sensitive to the words god and god. This arrangement is a bit too hasty. You don't have to think that you are a god, but you can't have no feelings about others thinking that you are a god. Readers can see it at a glance, but the protagonist has no awareness of it - don't talk about the reader having a God's perspective, this has nothing to do with God's perspective. Of course, if you say that a person who has lived for more than 5,000 years, a talented person who has traversed history, has any blind spots in his thinking that are different from ordinary people, that is fine - then you have to give an explanation to convince the readers. In addition, many plots are a bit rushed. For example, the big breaking point of the moon collapsing in the sky is thrown too early, and for example, a lot of history is inserted in the middle of more than 40 chapters, which is a bit overwhelming, causing the overall writing to be uneven. This makes people suspect that this book will not be spread out, will not be long, and will even have to cut off the end and run away...? Absolutely not, so I rely on your support and the author's persistence. Then there is the heroine, who is a bit too "official". The reason for this feeling is that the author's characterization is not good enough. Suggestions... I can't make any more suggestions. I've already written them here. I can only say that 90% of the behaviors of the characters in the novel are not considered poisonous. The premise is that you can write about their psychological changes and soul charm. Finally, the introduction is a bit weak, and it is hard to tell that it is science fiction. It is recommended to shorten the description of history into one paragraph, and use the rest to describe the universe, time and space, etc., To add a science fiction atmosphere. To sum up, the Godhead is lacking; it's a bit of a headline, but it can be regarded as helping the author to promote the book. After all, there are not many people in the book circle, and there are only two or three recommendations; the remaining negative reviews are very inexplicable, as if they are not reading the same book in the same time and space as me.

It feels like living forever for 90,000 years 🙂

Comment node: November 12, Chapter 66 The setting is grand, but the development is slow. In the early days, it was disguised as an ordinary urban plot. After browsing the catalog a second time, I found that chapters 15 and 16 were used to introduce the background, introduce characters, and lay out clues. Only in chapter 24 did the first important plot of the book appear that readers expected. (Tucao: What are the "Golden Thirty Chapters") I personally think that when this book is updated to 200 chapters, it will be worthy of stronger recommendation and become one of the hottest hits in the science fiction area, but the most pressing priority may be how this book survives until that time (I may come back to update this discussion as it is updated)

I haven't read it yet, but when I go to school, I don't want to be taught, but teach others 😏

I am Shennong. I look good. Come on.

Memories are not the key information. It is not recommended to write too long. I was confused by the few pictures introducing Adam.

Okay, I have a lot of imagination, and my faults don't hide my faults.

I still hope that only the protagonist is a special case, and no other people appear. Your novel can be written as a relaxed plot. This kind of conspiracy is difficult to write, and it is also very troublesome. I have read a book called Genius before, which is similar to yours.

Well written, but niche, if the die-hard fans can't earn gold coins, they'll be the eunuchs

The main flaw is actually this. I've read Chapter 50, and I still don't feel happy. After all, this is an online novel, or it can arouse some emotions, and the wits are very low-level. The author may want to write well, but his own thinking ability limits his writing ability.

I wanted to support books, but ended up dying 😭 Brother, why are you like this?

Except for two chapters that are inexplicably dull in the middle, the overall story is still very good! The writing is smooth and I read more than 60 chapters in one sitting. But I feel like the pace is a bit too tight. According to the way you write it, it would normally be completed in three to four hundred chapters! Of course, if it's water, just pretend I didn't say anything!

Was it inspired by that movie?

🤫It's beautiful and beautiful. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs.

A woman appears in the classic time and space novel. Is it true that the controlled novel cannot be written without a woman?

I remember there was an invincible novel, the beginning of which was very similar to this one: It was also about a book whose strength and appearance were outrageous, and then it traveled through time. Does anyone know what it's called? 😰😰😰

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So far, it's pretty good. Come on

One thing to say, it was indeed slow to enter the theme earlier and the attraction was very weak. It was only when I read Chapter 18 that I realized that this is a grand setting. Otherwise, I would have thought it was just an ordinary urban novel. Maybe the author is innately screening for those who are patient in reading? Other than this being relatively abstract, it currently seems to have great potential, provided of course that most of the audience at Qidian can survive the first 18 chapters. Or the author may insert a wedge or statement before the first chapter to lay a hook for the grand worldview, which will make it easier for people to stick to the rest.