With the Ancestors' Blessing: The Perfect Life of a Rural Livestreamer

I don't know what others think, but personally, with your book titled "Live Streaming Rural Renovation," I felt that if you were to live stream the house renovations, you could finish the renovations quickly, let the entertainment industry film it, advertise it, and drive rural development, then expand into commercial or other areas.

First, the romance is a flaw. Second, the story is somewhat chaotic. The first problem is that the acquired abilities come too easily. You could have written that the protagonist learns things little by little from his ancestor in a dream, like learning to cook, progressing step by step.

The author's bio didn't mention any intention to engage in commercial contracting; now that they've changed direction, it's considered fraud.

I've always had a question: if the main character is living a quiet, secluded life, but a TV show exposes them, my question is, does being exposed mean they have to cooperate with the show? Do they have to let the show profit from them? But the main character doesn't want to be in the public eye.

You want to turn this old house into a bed and breakfast? Aren't you just wasting something?

You only briefly touched on things like house repairs, cooking, and carpentry in a few chapters or paragraphs, but why spend so much time on just one thing: wild boar hunting? In this internet age, with wild boar infestations, you can just expose them directly. The local authorities are doing nothing but encouraging private hunting without any measures; I think they're just not interested.

Despite being described as a live-stream story, it's mostly long stretches of dialogue, especially after the rich second-generation Gao Tianfeng moves into the protagonist's house. The sheer volume of dialogue makes you want to just skip over it.

The female lead's romantic relationships were written so blandly and tastelessly, with neither sex nor love. I'm speechless. I suggest focusing the later chapters on her livestreaming and causing trouble. I really had to skip the chapters with more emphasis on romance.

Having too many skills or too much variety is not good.

Just reading the synopsis gives off a strong tomato vibe, oh my god!