A Qi Refiner, but I Cultivate Through Merit

This is so well written, comparable to Lu Xun. Author, you were just born in the wrong era, otherwise you would definitely be a great writer. Your writing talent is completely unnecessary for writing online novels. Without your participation, the Nobel Prize in Literature would be a worthless award.

With your writing skills and ambition, why are you writing about the entertainment industry? Does it even deserve it?

It's been over 60 chapters, and not only is there not a trace of the entertainment industry, but they've also started a massage parlor! Given the author's procrastinating nature, this lousy club definitely won't be up and running for at least another 50-60 chapters.

Dude, I suggest you change the title. Readers attracted by using entertainment as a hook are mostly impatient, coming for the glitz and glamour of the entertainment industry. They really don't have the patience to read through all the Qi cultivation theories, especially since you've written so much and haven't shown a single trace of the entertainment industry.

Chapter 84 already, and he still hasn't made it into the entertainment industry.

It's truly on the fringes; by chapter eighteen, they haven't even touched the edge of the entertainment industry.

Let's change the name: [Reborn as a Qi Cultivator: Giving Massages to Old Men in the Park]

In terms of evaluation, if a book has three climaxes, this book spreads the three climaxes evenly across each chapter. Each chapter has very few exciting moments, but you can't say that it has none.

It's not even a paid subscription, so why is it so padded out? You can fill two chapters with just a single scallion, and the main plot is still stuck even after I skipped ten chapters! It's all filler!

The styles are similar. The themes are similar. The rambling is even more similar