The Third Evolution Across the Myriad Heavens

Certain plots should not be written. If there are any poisonous points, others will not care how you write them and will just abandon them. Not to mention how ridiculous it is for a company to capture slaves and cannon fodder and control them through mass messaging (and there were also women captured at the beginning, right? None of them got a career, right). The protagonist did nothing for a long time even though she knew that the people around her were tools to control her. Her only countermeasure was to buy a slave contract and tell the other party to let her choose. What is this? Free slave owner? You have to act and stand up, and you have to be sold as a clown

Author, don't listen to the guy who talks about using AI to polish it. The current AI output is very long-winded, including several adjectives and environmental descriptions in one sentence, and even the number of words is different. I have a few books that I abandoned because I didn't want to pay for these details.

Author, you have written so many books, why are you only at level 4?

I have been saying good things about the author in book circles and posting my opinions in chapter reviews. I was afraid that the book would die. But you did a great job. You focused on feeding the big portion and turned me into a clown. I gave up.

I feel that the author's peak level is "Earth Travel Era", and the subsequent books are more and more poisonous.

Oh my god, did you make the protagonist so stupid? After getting the basic information, you don't have to go alone but with the woman. You can go together, but why not use a slave contract, and if you sign it, you can take it with you or break it up. Knowing that they have ulterior motives to approach you, you still have to be fooled, and you have to write such a plot. How come the protagonist has never watched novels, movies, and TV shows before traveling, so he is a stupid good guy.

I heard in the last book that the protagonist is extremely poisonous, and the review for this book also said that the author still writes in this way, and I suggest the author to think about the protagonist's behavior with normal people's thinking, otherwise he should find a job in a factory

I feel that most of the authors of Qidian are old and cannot keep up with the times. Those poisonous points in the past should be studied carefully and how to avoid them. I can't stand it at all. It's too poisonous, and the writing is acceptable, a little better than Tomato.

It's almost a hundred chapters and I'm still working as a slave in this garbage company.

The text is too plain. Even if online novels have very low literary requirements, they won't be so bland. There is no side description at all, and there is no description of the environment. It relies entirely on dialogue to support the word count. It is recommended to use AI to polish it.