The Third Evolution Across the Myriad Heavens

Some plot points shouldn't be written at all; if there are any flaws, people won't care how well you write it and will just abandon it. Let's not even talk about how absurd it is that a company would capture slaves and cannon fodder and then control them by sending out mass honey traps (and weren't there women captured at the beginning? None of them got a job, right?).

Author, don't listen to that guy who talks about using AI for polishing. Current AI-generated content is incredibly verbose, with multiple adjectives and environmental descriptions in a single sentence, sometimes even changing voices to pad the word count. I've abandoned several books because I didn't want to pay for this filler.

Author, you've written so many books, how come you're only level 4?

I've been praising the author in the reader community and posting all my opinions in the chapter reviews, afraid the book will die. Well done, you've been feeding me huge amounts of information, making me look like a fool. I'm dropping this book.

I feel this author's peak was "The Era of Earth Travel," and each subsequent book is more addictive than the last.

My God, is the protagonist really that stupid? After getting the basic information, he insists on going with that woman instead of alone. Even if he goes with her, that's fine, but why not use a slave contract? If he signs it, he can stay with her; if he doesn't, they can part ways. He knows she's trying to get close to him with ulterior motives, yet he still falls for it.

I heard the protagonist of the last book was extremely poisonous, and the comments on this one are saying the same thing. The author is still writing like this; I suggest the author use normal human thinking when considering the protagonist's actions, otherwise, he should just find a factory job.

It feels like most authors on Qidian are getting old and out of touch with the times. They really need to study how to avoid those toxic elements from the past; it's simply unreadable. It's too toxic, although the writing style is acceptable, a little better than Tomato's.

It's almost chapter 100 and I'm still a slave in this garbage company.

The writing is too plain. Even if online novels have low requirements for literary quality, it shouldn't be this bland. There's absolutely no indirect description, no environmental description, and the word count is entirely carried out through dialogue. I suggest using AI to polish it.