I Have a Truth-Seeing Eye

To be honest, the author's Earth Travel Era has a good theme, but the writing style is too poor. It always feels like reading a primary school student's composition. The main and supporting characters' IQs are not online. They often suffer from settings and overwhelm the protagonist's combat power. Later, the author started to write exciting stories. The combat power and economic system completely collapsed. The female character he wrote was obviously very disgusting. It can be seen that the author did not know how to write female characters at all, but he insisted on writing a lot of space for the female characters, which made the protagonist particularly aggrieved. In the eyes of many people in the book circle (including me), it cannot even be called a cool article, which is unpleasant. In my opinion, the overall evaluation is inferior to Xiaobai. It's really a pity that such a good subject and creative writing are so messed up, otherwise the results wouldn't be so bad. I hope the author of this book can write it well, and don't start writing yy again. Don't make the protagonist and villain's IQs look like idiots, and write as little female characters as possible. Also read more book circles and read more suggestions, otherwise you won't be able to write ten thousand books well. If you write books just for fun, then just think I didn't say it.

You should read the comments first and forget about describing Xiaobai. After all, most authors are like this. So won't the character He Yingxue die? Will you die if you don't write female characters? In the early stage, the protagonist just came through and asked about everything, which showed that he was mentally retarded. Not to mention that after killing the monster, he still had peace of mind. This woman was a failure as soon as she came out. She was poisonous, and the protagonist was described as annoying. The more annoying she became, the more she licked her, right? A very good subject was ruined!

Carrots and cabbages each have their own preferences. Anyway, for me, an old bookworm with more than ten years of reading experience, I can only read fifteen chapters of this book. I really can't stand it anymore. Apart from other things, are there still idiots in the army who want to recruit people into the army and do it without consent? Are the troops just decorations? There is not even such a small amount of binding force, and this army has not finished playing?

This can be regarded as an author who is as productive as a cow 🤭🤭🤭

I'm curious why the introductions are always from these books? Have you guys rented this place together? Hahahaha

I don't really like the characters in it. Liu Xiao is okay, but Li Mang and those gangsters are not well written, and the plot of those women is not good. Can the protagonist go out and work alone? Being with them is firstly a burden, and secondly, secrets are easily exposed. As soon as you come, they will tell you that you are not a normal person and have no common sense at all.

Tell me what you think 💡 The failure of this book First, the protagonist is like a licking dog. He licked He Yingxue at the beginning. Please🙏🏻If you like the protagonist, just write it. People who read it will feel aggrieved. Secondly, you said you should keep your abilities secret, but later the whole team knew about it and reported it to the military. . . In fact, is this team of any use to the protagonist? I saw in front of me that I had to fight Yalong to get a knife and some common sense about cultivation. . . I vomited when the captain asked someone to be used as bait without consulting the protagonist at all. Ni Ma, why don't you go and do the protagonist yourself and then cover you from behind. . . Also, you thought the protagonist was dead, but you didn't suspect it and didn't use your family's power to investigate. I can only say that the protagonist was never considered a teammate from the beginning, like a reserve cannon fodder. . .

If you don't know how to write female characters, you have to write them by force.

It makes my balls ache to watch the team-up, it's just violent. I feel like you can't write without the heroine. Look at the book "There Is a Monster", which is so popular even if no one has a heroine. Don't team up all day long, girl, it's so annoying.

The author insists on writing female characters. It would be better if the female characters were deleted. The female character is very boring and very bitchy. Just like the God Interpreter.