Adding Points for Longevity in a Haunted World

Shennong Explores the Path: Everyone wants to kill the protagonist; the whole world is his enemy! It's all the same old tricks!

Let's talk about the downsides. The protagonist can go out and change his face, work as a pharmacist, and still do menial tasks. They say menial tasks are worse than dogs, yet they also say they go to brothels. You could write about him developing cautiously and then having a major breakthrough, constantly having people trying to harm him. Every time the protagonist levels up, someone comes along.

This work is too overly virtuous; I can hardly bear to listen to it. There's no decisiveness or ruthlessness. It doesn't resemble the feudal dynasty depicted in the subject matter at all. The work has some internal conflicts.

It's self-contradictory. One minute they say high-ranking servants have high status, then ordinary servants can challenge them at any time. And if you lose, almost any servant can kill you. But if you win, they don't kill the servants. Is this some kind of sanctimonious hypocrite?

Those that don't reply are either products from studios or new authors trying to inflate their traffic. It's best not to subscribe to this kind of trashy book; it's a waste of money.

The overall situation is contradictory; the rules of the martial arts school are extremely cruel. What did the main character do later on? The maid was so bold, and the female lead was so shameless.

He didn't buy a maid, he bought a master, a sycophant.

It would be much better if the plot weren't written out. Why couldn't they have been more decisive and ruthless? They already had the incredible shrinking technique early on, but the second person who tried to murder them was either killed by a ghost or didn't even know it was them. In the end, the second person even knelt down and begged for mercy, and they just let them go and forgot about them.

There was no need to test for poison; Shennong died directly from the poison.

If you're starting a new book, you could write about a protagonist who is decisive and ruthless. Cautious, but not overly sentimental. Show the protagonist's next steps and their thoughts. If the protagonist doesn't have their own plans for the future, the reader is basically lost.