Farming and Cultivation: One Catty of Spirit Grain for a Year of Magic Power

This cultivation level is too restrictive. He hasn't even converted his mana by chapter 54, yet his combat power at the second level of Qi Refining is already sky-high.

If he manages to harvest the rice (achieve a certain level of mastery) overnight, his book will collapse. Or, if he reveals a cheat code in his book, it will also collapse. So I think his book will end once he's harvested the rice (achieved his goal).

Now you've already acquired something capable of gaining 500 years' worth of magical power. I wonder what level you can break through to. Too much pressure will likely ruin you. Also, this thing you wrote is only 44 chapters long and it's already a jumbled mess. At the beginning, you introduced a weapon-refining talent that wasn't explained much, so let's leave that aside for now.

If you don't bet on the main character, it should be watchable. If you accumulate 10,000 jin of mana, you should be able to defeat a Nascent Soul cultivator, right? If not, then it's just a case of false advertising.

This pound can be exchanged for a year's worth of magical power. There must be a template for how much magical power one can gain in a year! After all, the magical power each person gains in a year of cultivation is different! Magical power isn't a fixed quantity; it's about quality! Different realms and different aptitudes mean that even with the same amount of time spent cultivating, the resulting power will definitely vary in quality!

The next bumper harvest will be a major turning point for readership growth and loss. I don't know how you calculated 200 years of magical power, and besides that, the entire plot is just a formula; without any highlights, readers will leave.

The story is good, but like the Conan story, it was supposed to be over in a month, but a lot of things have happened and the month is still not over. It's already been dozens of chapters, and I'm afraid the story will fall apart after the ending.

Wow, that's impressive! With so many events happening, and counting the time on your fingers, you should have been under a lot of pressure.

The writing is okay, but the plot is childish. In a normal person's graduation banquet, a few sarcastic remarks are fine, but if you're constantly being sarcastic, that's self-harm; the host might even beat you up for it. Let alone showing off wealth in this kind of setting—that's not giving a gift, it's offering yourself up. It needs to be changed.

I've seen slow-burning characters before, but I've never seen a cheat code as slow-burning as yours.