I Became an Immortal Among Mortals

Although the update is relatively slow, the author's writing style and the novelty of the story are still quite good. If I continue writing it like this, I think it will be more exciting than the original work. Make sure it doesn't end unfinished! Come on

Author: Don't keep those vases. Generally, they have no sense of existence in the end. Ideal Taoist couple, Ling Yuling, Zi Ling, Yuan Yao, Song Yu, Yinyue and Bingfeng. These are almost the same, and they are not considered harem stallions. The other vases are really not necessary and easy to jump. Except for Song Yu and Ling Yuling, they can all ascend without the protagonist. Think about Ling Yuling and Song Yu. These two are two heavenly spiritual roots. Ling Yuling's later transformation into a god just does not have a channel for ascension. I don't know how much better Song Yu is than those vases. It can be said that it is incomparable and not as good in any aspect. The protagonist can keep up with the belt behind him. How can those vases compare? When you get to the spiritual world, you can collect a precious flower. If the author sees it, you can refer to it. I really feel that there is no need to collect those vases that don't have many scenes. I will give you the final monthly ticket.

The Golden Three Chapters gave me a bloody drama. Forget about the bloody drama, it was still procrastinating. What was explained in a few sentences was written into several chapters.

In this book, the development and advancement of the protagonist is quite good, but the emotional writing is awkward 😅. If you are interested, you can skip reading and just skip the emotional chapter.

Many protagonists in the fan fiction rushed to give Han Li treasures, euphemistically calling them exchanges, and they licked them fiercely.

Hello dear readers, I am no longer a novice author. Regardless of my past achievements, I am relatively clear about many situations. I personally think that no matter where it is, it is very necessary to have a reasonable rule. Whether it is ugly words first or good words first, some unnecessary troubles can be avoided. Because writing a book means simply writing a book, there is no need to be involved in other energy, and only in this way can it be worthy of the majority of readers. The author considers himself not a master, and his writing style may be average, so he occasionally uses his imagination to piece it together. Some people like it and some don't. This is normal. But no matter which book it is, it is not RMB, and there is no way that everyone can like it. I have also written three mortal fanfics, and I still have some knowledge and understanding of some of the worldviews of the original books. If there is anything that is not as intended by some authors, please look at it rationally and do not deliberately follow the rhythm, or make nonsense or inexplicable things. I personally don't like prophecies and headline-grabbers, because prophecies sound like prophecies at best, but they are just conjecture and unfounded at worst. Sometimes the author of the subsequent plot may not even know about it, and some people just calculate it based on their personal assumptions. This looks very funny, and I don't want to waste my energy just because of some people's rumors and running around to refute them. When writing a book, you must write it well. I will express my gratitude to those who like it, and I won't force anyone who doesn't like it. If we seek common ground while reserving differences, we can work together. Of course, please rest assured that some obvious pitfalls or other pitfalls will definitely be avoided if you have a lot of experience. Dear readers, please be aware that every time a new book comes out, you will encounter something similar. Some people seem to be really angry, and they will go crazy and say some unreasonable things. It has almost become the norm. Sometimes, in order to avoid further trouble, some controversial or misunderstanding comments will inevitably be dealt with in a rough manner, and those that should be banned will be banned and those that should be deleted will be deleted. If a similar situation occurs, please treat it rationally. It is not directed at any one person. A harmonious ecosystem is necessary. How respectful the author is to his readers. Anyone who has read my book knows that as long as the comments I see are reasonable, I will basically accept them, and I will politely reply to those I feel are inappropriate. But Confucius said that repaying kindness with kindness and repaying grievance with kindness. Some readers don't like to read it, and some authors don't like to read it. Please understand this. Finally, I hope that everything goes well for everyone, that your career and family are prosperous, and everything goes well. Thank you.

Your introduction is a bit of a conflict between the left and right brains. It labels many female protagonists, and then explains that there is no harem. As a result, the article contains women everywhere. This is not something that ordinary people can write. 😄

Fan Jingmei is only suitable to be a gun buddy and sell supplies

Mortals has been scheduled, Master Le and Master Zhong (Han Paopao's sternest father) are about to appear 🤭

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First of all, the female character hasn't appeared yet, so don't expect it. Secondly, why did pseudo-spiritual root + hanging become the standard configuration. In fact, the second and third spiritual roots are better matched at the beginning, which is neither difficult nor easy. Of course, it cannot be ruled out that the author is afraid that the failure will be too great in the later stage, so he forcibly increases the difficulty and slows down the progress of practice.

Shen Nong tasted hundreds of herbs. Very exciting, respect the original work. The author's writing style is good, the context is logical and the story is novel. The story of the Blue Star Sea and the descendants of the scattered people in the sky is unique and novel. It is also clear and organized. On the basis of respecting the original work, it has its own ideas and is not brainless. It is not the same junk fan fiction. I hope the author will achieve good results. I hope everyone will read, recommend and vote every day. Attached are some of my favorite mortal fanarts, 😁😁😁

This one looks more comfortable

Come on, author, the popularity of mortal anime is so high now that there are many people writing about it, but the few that are written are just mindless and cool articles that are too boring to read, let alone subscribe to. The author should carefully polish the plot and grasp the rhythm, and differentiate himself from other fans. Over time, he can accumulate some loyal and stable paying users, and he can continue to support you when he opens new books. As for the heroine, you don't need to pay attention to those who tell you to read it without thinking. Just follow your outline. After all, the scumbags don't spend money to read the book. As long as it does not involve personal attacks, the author can keep it. Whether the writing is good or bad is up to you. Book friends will make the conclusion for you, and have their own results to prove it for you! {"TopicId":"573282490224017408","TopicName":"A Mortal's Story of Cultivation to Immortality"}

I remember that the treasure of the cave can take people to smuggle into the spirit world, and when they sneak into the spirit world later, they can take their wives to ascend with them. I can't think that every fanfic just ignores my wife and just ascends by myself like Han Li 😁

To be honest, I just love watching mortal fanfics with multiple female protagonists. The size of the harem was decided by Han Xin, the more the better. Who says there are so many beauties among mortals? I just love watching plots with beauties. The author is also very sensible and often publishes pictures. This quality is very good and exceeds that of most authors. And the plot is quite good. After all, I am not a great writer, so my requirements cannot be too high. It's smooth, you can read it, and there's nothing wrong with the logic. Very good, I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The number of mortal fandoms has increased dramatically these days, and I originally wanted to write about specific themes, but I've been thinking about this idea for a while. I'm actually quite sorry that I didn't finish writing about the spiritual world in my first book. Nowadays, there are more and more animation updates, and Han Laomo has also advanced to Yuanying. The plot will only become more and more interesting. Sometimes I really can't help it. But the important thing is to say three times, please vote, please pursue reading, please vote, please pursue reading, please vote, please pursue reading, this is related to whether the book can be put on the shelves, friends who like it, please support it. There are too many fan books for mortals nowadays. My first book was 1.3 Million words long. I will try to avoid some pitfalls in this book, so please feel free to read it. Thank you all, I will ask about the signing tomorrow and the day after tomorrow. I hope you won't be slapped in the face by the post!

It's true, it's much better than the previous one. I didn't subscribe to the last one, but I did subscribe to this one. Yes, indeed it can 🤭🤭🤭

This book was written so slowly that I was afraid of eunuchs.

I feel that writing about ordinary people is not suitable for the author. You can still write about men and women in bed.

The biggest failure of this book is the admission of Fan Jingmei into the harem.

These few female characters are enough in the human world 😁

Is there a mistake in the background of Tianjimen? There is Tianwuzi and his senior brother Tianyuanzi in Xutian Palace.

I'm following you from above, I'm looking forward to seeing you.

Stop cutting it! I gave you all the tickets!

Come on, I think this book is good. If you work hard to update it, you can definitely catch up with other fans.

Will you write about ascension to the spiritual world? The book is really good, but the first few chapters are a bit controversial. Personally, I don't think so. The slow pace is better. Those fast-paced mindless articles are hard to read. Come on, don't stop updating 🤭🤭

If this book can be written about the spiritual world or the fairy world, it will definitely be a masterpiece.

I hope the author can update 3 times a day

Are you preparing to enter the palace? 🙂