Time Travel Begins with Family Cultivation of Immortality

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Let's encourage each other. After reading it, the plot is very bland. Of course, the author also marked it as a slow-burning movie from the beginning, so I won't make any more comments. The following are some personal opinions. I hope you don't dislike it. First of all, the setting of time travel feels very unnecessary, because the author did not write anything about the advantages brought by time travel, even if it was written directly by local people, there would be no sense of violation. The plot is currently in a fairly stable state without any ups and downs. Because it is in a learning state for the protagonist, it may not be easy to write the climax, but it is recommended that there be some collisions to enhance the tension. The description is still relatively capable and there is no big problem. Keep it up and further strengthen it at the same time. The above opinions are just personal opinions. You are justified in your objection. They are not directed at anyone or anything. At the same time, please also read my book and give me some suggestions and comments! Grateful! Book title "Until the Farewell Day Comes"