A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: My Master Is Baohua
凡人：我的师父是宝花
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 357k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 11mo ago
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171Chapters
1.7kRecommendations
5.1kFans
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There are even suggestions to cultivate demonic arts, forgetting the initial premise that Bao Hua was in the human realm. Cultivating demonic arts and ascending to the demon realm is just asking for trouble.
Some thoughts
After reading about thirty chapters, I feel there are the following issues. The protagonist is pretentious. It's often said that the protagonist's characterization stems from the author's mindset—that the author wants to dominate this world based on ordinary people—but I won't comment on that. Second, Bao Hua.
Is the anime "Ordinary People" really that popular? There's a surge in fanfiction.
The anime plot is adapted into a book; Dong and Yun have absolutely no connection in the original work. You'll know this if you read the original novel. Her conflict stems from a single cultivator in Huangfeng Valley's Feng family. Good luck! 🤭
Having reached chapter 55, it seems the character is simply not cultivating. He's a fake core cultivator, not yet a fully formed core, so why is he running around everywhere instead of continuing to cultivate? It makes no sense. Knowing that many Nascent Soul cultivators are after him, why not find a safe place to cultivate?
He's almost at the Core Formation stage, and he's still wandering around during the most dangerous time. Instead of focusing on Core Formation, he's dragging things down by getting emotionally involved. If this is how you write a mortal cultivation story, it'll probably lose some viewers.
In this kind of underworld cultivation world, caring about one's family is toxic. Given the choice between family and oneself, even a pig knows which to choose. If given the means, offering some protection to one's family is understandable. But risking one's life for one's family is a different story.
I forgot to mention, anime is just a pile of...
It's ridiculous that the story of a gangster cultivating immortality was changed into one of great virtue and righteousness.
Don't be misled by the adapter's perspective.
Han Li has three wives, and your protagonist takes two of them, cheating on Han Li twice. Couldn't you have written about other women? The anime's Han Li is actually a decent guy, why would the protagonist cheat on him?