Clan Cultivation: Starting with the Erlang Shen Fate

The protagonist has become a saint in the physical body, but he can't beat the Condensation Pill of the same realm. What does this mean? He has practiced in vain, and I don't see the advantage. It would be fine if he surpasses a big realm, but he can't be invincible in a small realm. Author, you are trying to suppress your combat power.

The overall idea is good and there is a development path, but the details are not handled well and the early stage is too lone-wolf. There is not even a close friend in the village. Everyone goes up the mountain alone, and when they catch large prey, they throw half of it away. If there are a few companions here, and you eat a big head, they will share some of the meat with you. No matter how worthless the meat of spirits and semi-elves is, it can still meet daily expenses. The essence of flesh and blood can also cover the daily training needs of the protagonist and his children. At the end, it can be taken back and fed to the dogs. Uncle Li still has hunting dogs. If you pick a few puppies and raise a few, they will not be as good as melee combatants if you are halfway to martial arts.

There is a problem in the introduction. No descendant will be unfilial and ask the ancestor to die.

It's smelly and long, and the pain is really painful. The first bite of meat can't be described as how precious it is.

I feel like the main character is so easy to lick, and he has three secrets to control others. Why is he neither humble nor arrogant towards Master Shen who is like a mentor? When it comes to Pei, he feels inexplicably a head shorter. This inexplicable feeling makes people lose interest. I originally followed every chapter with great interest, but after flipping through these chapters yesterday, I felt that I really didn't want to read them. I looked through it again today and still feel like I don't want to buy it. Hey, I don't know if I should pursue it.

Bai Jian's mother-in-law and three children are so awesome

Half-sugar plot, classic male protagonist NB, everyone can't do it, just the male protagonist 666

I have read so many bad books, and yours is really bad and unique.

After reading a dozen of them, I concluded that it is a homogeneous novel with no characteristics, no different from other novels in which the protagonist is an Orion. It has the same extremely bad start, followed by cheating and hunting, officials or local gangsters coming to the door, the protagonist practicing martial arts or cheating to kill with cheats, and life is getting better, but then something bad happens. I believe this series of events will be completed within a year.

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