Folk Customs: Beginning with a Nuo Opera Troupe

Why are you such a plagued ox and horse so lazy, why don't you just finish the remaining chapters quickly? Don't you know the methods of Bodhisattvas like us? Is it because the monthly ticket knife that bullied me is not sharp? If you update it carefully and frequently, the Buddhas will be happy. When the Buddhas are happy, it will benefit you.

My heart was moved, and I came here in response to Yongzhen Bodhisattva's appointment.

Not good, I can't stand it! The Tibetan secrets in the previous book are bearable because most readers are not familiar with the mysterious environment, customs and customs of Tibetan areas, and the characters' dialogues are written in a convoluted way that fits the readers' impressions and imaginations. I still can't stand the way it is written about China. The witchcraft and Nuo dramas are not unusual, and the dialogues are not as expected. I just think it's too convoluted and boring.

I feel that the author's book has a problem, the coherence is very poor I have this problem with the previous books. I don't know the details when I need to, and I don't omit the details when I'm reading. When I'm getting excited, it ends suddenly or I change the copy. I wasted a lot of words on some unimportant parts. I read half of the last book and I couldn't follow it. I hope the author can change this problem.

An extremely biased author. All books have the same problem, and it doesn't change at all. The first copies of several books are well written, so the first impression is very good, and many people follow them. Then the more they are written, the more abstract they become, and the more readers they read, the more they fail to achieve results. The two biggest problems are that the wording is obscure and cumbersome, which was fine in the early days. Basically, after one or two hundred chapters, I can no longer control it. Half of the content of one chapter is turned over and over, described in abstract words. Writing is similar to AI. Second, the plot jumps around, is incoherent, and cannot form a smooth story line. There is quite a beauty in playing an open world. You can play the main story today, start the side story tomorrow, and do half of the tasks the day after tomorrow. When you find that the time for the limited time task is up, you will do the time limit task again. It's okay to play games, but the story line of the novel shouldn't jump too much. The author should study and correct his mistakes. Now it's purely self-pleasure, and readers can't stand it.

Yongzhen Bodhisattva has not yet achieved the highest level, and I hope it can be supplemented in the future. It is indeed a bit difficult to defeat the final BOSS and run away 😅

Write a book review Advantages: The author's setting is quite good, and the plot can be developed reasonably. At present, there are more foreshadowings, and the world view in the later period should be more interesting. Disadvantages: The author has certain writing skills but is too clumsy. He is water for the sake of water. He has to speak clearly in one or two sentences. Moreover, he always uses some idioms, poems, and ancient sayings inexplicably to show off his writing style or pretend to be profound, which makes him look very dramatic. I think if you want to be a great writer, you can do it but you can't fool the readers. You should do it naturally, at least it can't affect the plot or the reading experience.

Oh my god, why are there so many double quotation marks? It affects reading so much and is disgusting. It would be fine if some rare or special nouns need to be marked. But the problem is, why do you feel that it is a word and you have to add double quotation marks? Your double quotation marks must be used as frequently as commas and periods.

Have you ever skipped Nuo opera? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Like those platinum masters who release new books, they will place advertisements in old books or readers. Of course, it may be that the word count is not high at the beginning and the extra chapter is not finished yet, so the author feels that it will take some time.