This Poor Daoist Only Knows the Sword Art of Slaying

Your writing style and writing methods really need to be polished. . . Blood God, you just hammer here and there with a stick, and this is still the case. . . . I will simply talk about the faults I see, which is why many people say it is confusing and tiring: First of all, the power system is not clearly explained after a hundred chapters. You don't even explain clearly what levels the divine training has and what abilities it has. You only talk about it after you encounter several levels and the protagonist is about to reach the next level. It makes people tired to think about it every time. Then your power system has not been established, you have not taught all about the divine training, and then suddenly a god, a deity, pops up, oh, the god is very awesome, the deity is very awesome, specifically how awesome, I don't know, but I know it is a very awesome state. It is not said what level is below the gods, nor is it said what level of gods the Heavenly Lord is. The next thing is that you stretch the power level casually, and it is the beginning of the story, and then you double-click to trick the protagonist. Last time, Blood God, you were the main character in each story and the power level was increased without thinking. This time, you directly lock the blood. It's very meaningless, you can obviously set this as a small copy. Wait for the protagonist to grow up for a period of time before coming back to reveal the behind-the-scenes story. Why do you have to throw it out in one go? Even if you throw out the world view, you should at least explain your realm clearly before talking about it. The last thing is that your narrative structure often switches perspectives and tells a lot, but in the end the plot progress of the protagonist does not advance much. When you write, you may think that you have written every aspect, but in fact the readers seem very tired. I saw that you said in other comments that you wrote a white text, but in fact your book seems to require readers to draw a timeline in their heads and then label events. In the end, the main plot does not advance much, and the readers are still very tired. . . And don't forget that you are writing an online novel. Readers have to wait for updates. If you describe too much about other places, over time readers will forget what the protagonist did and what happened. Another digression, do you know why some people are dissatisfied with you writing that the protagonist learns other things? Because the name of the book is "The Poor Taoist Can Only Kill Swords"

How should I put it? I feel confused. I feel tired while reading.

I feel confused. There are many things to learn. Why do I have to learn Taoism? Talisman? There are so many martial arts talents, why not develop them properly?

Good guy, Xiangxi is still secretly updating the book.

Good guy, secretly updating the new book, right?

Some people suspect that this is a studio AI. Believe me brother, even AI pays attention to subject, predicate, object, tense and complement.) But the author's writing style is to expose parts randomly. People who have read it say it is confusing, and the same is true for the previous book. The beginning of this book was okay, but it gradually became apparent as I wrote it. I seriously doubt that the author was high. He might have smoked something while writing.

There is so much nonsense, the author must be new. A bunch of settings were explained at the beginning, which directly killed my desire to read. . . . The author is writing a textbook? ? ? ?

I just said that the writing style looked a bit familiar, and I also wanted to complain about whether it is a brother to a certain Xiangxi book on my bookshelf. The subject matter is good, but the writing style is not smooth. It is good-looking, but the writing is not clear, which tests people's understanding. I clicked on the author's column and took a look. What a brother. To be honest, the author is the third one I can recognize based on his writing style after just a few glances.

The setting is quite interesting, but it's a pity that the writing style is quite poor. The continuous missing words and wrong sentences are reversed and difficult to read. It's a headache for people who read it. Does the author never proofread?

The setting and background are pretty good, but as I read I couldn't figure out where I was going. Could the plot be simpler and clearer? I always feel like reading is not smooth.