Survival in the Eternal Night: I Become the God of Mount Tai from the Start

The latter will not work. What you write is a lord story. This type of landlord type belongs to the land fairy management type. In the beginning, the original capital is accumulated and the protagonist charges into battle alone. What you later do is this and that. The protagonist has various fields, various skills, and various magic weapons. Don't you think it's confusing? Like a headless fly, what are you doing in this paradise? You have raised a bunch of people, do you really treat them like pigs? Does the alliance you built only provide you with a little faith? Then help you with some chores? Even if you go to find a treasure map yourself, there will be no one else. You are writing about a lord, and your own strength must be fundamental, but for some simple world strategies, you do everything yourself every time. What kind of lord do you want to be? What kind of landowner? Which emperor attacks others by himself every day? You are already at level 3 and level 4, but you are still charging outside alone. You raise so many people together. It is really like raising a group of pigs. A lord article makes you become a lone wolf. What do you think about the future? The entire logical development of the plot is directly contrary to logic.

The setting is messy and complicated, but after reading through it, I found that it can be summarized in one chapter. The meaningless setting explanation accounts for 90%, and the plot accounts for 10%. Not very readable.

The writing is very boring. The protagonist is like playing a single-player game throughout the whole process. The beginning is boring, the process is boring, and even the ending is boring. The flavored copy is even more boring. Moreover, the author often messes up the setting intentionally or unintentionally, and it is almost as if he writes it and plays it.

Even if the setting is crazy at the beginning and it doesn't advance the plot, the data setting is still weird. The upper limit of incense belief (6/10). Can you believe that the upper limit set in this data is 6 instead of 10? Since the upper limit is 6, what are the 10 at the end?

It's a mess, I've given him all the good stuff, and I don't see how awesome he is.

The front part is all about settings, and the protagonist is still a virgin. I couldn't bear to see the protagonist exchanging copper for things, and I couldn't bear it when I saw the protagonist announcing the method of obtaining copper for the sake of fame. Before, he was saying that Gu was raised in the same area, so he acted like a virgin bitch.

It's a very simple setting, but it's unclear and confusing. It gives me a headache just looking at it.

There are too many settings thrown away at the beginning The protagonist was just a pony who lived for dozens of days in his previous life, but the author knows all the settings very well A pony who had no godly status before his death can be absolutely sure that it is okay to usurp the godly position, and that the gods are fake. A protagonist who only had levels 1 and 5 before his death can freely comment on the settings of levels 3 and 4, etc.

The left and right brains compete with each other. As mentioned before, humanity requires landlords to protect their many tenants, and the quantity is large. Later, the second chapter will be put on the shelves to eat the settings. Quality is needed, not quantity.

Why do I feel like the author is getting more and more wrong as he writes? The first clone and the second book Dark Infinite are the pinnacle. The following books are more and more like setting collections. The dense settings and diary-style narrative are not as good as the first and second books.