Survival in the Eternal Night: I Become the God of Mount Tai from the Start

The later parts just won't do. You're writing a lord-themed novel, which falls under the category of "earth immortal management" novels. It's one thing for the protagonist to be the sole force in the initial capital accumulation phase, but then you add this and that, various domains, skills, and magical artifacts—doesn't that seem chaotic? It's like a headless fly.

The setting is written in a messy and complicated way, but after reading through it, I found that it can be summarized in one chapter. Ninety percent of the content consists of meaningless background information, while only one-tenth is related to the plot. It's not very readable.

It's incredibly boring. The protagonist seems to be playing a single-player game the whole time—boring at the beginning, boring in the middle, and even boring at the end. The supplementary dungeons are even more boring. Furthermore, the author frequently contradicts established settings, making the writing feel like a joke.

The opening sequence is riddled with intriguing settings that don't advance the plot, and the data settings are bizarre. The upper limit for incense faith is 6/10. Can you believe that the upper limit in this data is 6 instead of 10? If the upper limit is 6, what's with the 10?

It was a mess; we gave him all sorts of good stuff, but he didn't seem particularly impressive.

The beginning is all setup, and the protagonist is a saint. I tolerated seeing the protagonist trade copper for things, but when the protagonist revealed how to obtain copper for the sake of reputation, I couldn't hold back anymore. Before, he was saying that the same region was raising Gu poison, but afterward, he turned into a saintly hypocrite.

The premise is very simple, but it's poorly expressed, confusing, and a headache to read.

The game started by throwing out too many pre-existing settings. The protagonist's previous life was just a pony that lived for a few dozen days, but the author demonstrates an excellent understanding of all the settings. How could a lowly pony who died without a divine position be so certain that it would be alright to usurp a divine position and that the gods and immortals were fake?

The left and right brains are at odds. Earlier, it was said that humanity needed landlords to protect numerous tenants and servants, requiring a large quantity. However, when the second chapter was released, it contradicted the original setting, prioritizing quality over quantity.

I feel like the author's writing is getting off track. The first book, "The Doppelganger," and the second, "Dark Infinity," were the peaks, but the later ones are becoming more and more like a setting collection, with dense settings and diary-style narration. They're actually not as good as the first two books.