In the World of Shrouding the Heavens, I Cultivate as a Mortal

This one should be pounced on too. If you are tough, find someone tough. If fighting is fun, fighting is fun. Just sew the "Eternal Life" system and "Shading the Sky" together, and your results will be much better. Determined to sew "Mortal" and "Zhetian" together, Gou Daoliu and Battle Shuang turned into a pot of random stew. If you don't attack the street, who will?

You can either write about an isolated autistic child who is just a mortal, or you can write about the battle of a peerless genius. Don't sew the two together and write them like four

Is the mortal system too weak?

To compare the strength of the system, I only look at the destructive power described in words by the original author. Looking at the comment section, there are many people who use nouns to compare combat effectiveness and system, which makes me speechless. How can the mortal cultivation system be compared with the Zhetian system? The combat effectiveness is not on the same level. Mortals use magic weapons to fight with the sky-shattering people? If you punch it down, the magic weapon will turn into rubbish. Is the blood bar of the Heaven-shattering Man casually described in the original novel? Like the invincible Xiaoqiang, his broken body can be repaired in minutes. Would you like to try breaking your body to pieces in the mortal system? Minutes later, only the remnant soul was left hiding in that corner. And the mortal system does not have a batch of magic weapons with weak combat effectiveness, and the Zhetian World does not lack magic weapons. I read the book to see the combat effectiveness and system. I only read the textual description of the original author, and did not look at the imagination and comparison of netizens.

Qi-building foundation-building Nascent Soul actually appeared on Jindan Avenue? Do you still have spiritual roots? Mortals can cultivate immortality just as long as they can cultivate immortality. How about the whole Taizhang method? The Supreme Master has not come out to cultivate his spiritual roots. What if there are some techniques that the spiritual roots require to be taught? Everyone can cultivate the golden elixir path! The whole thing was so different that I lost my mood to watch it for a moment.

There is no future for being a mortal cultivator in Zhetian

While telling others to be stubborn. Go on an adventure with people with bad intentions

This novel can only be said to be a great failure, a very typical negative case. The title is clearly about people covering the sky and cultivating mortal laws, so the mortal laws should appear at the end of the first chapter or the beginning of the second chapter. As a result, the book only appeared in more than ten chapters. It is a typical immature writing method for novices 😅

I have lost consciousness several times after reading five of them. In fantasy novels about cultivating immortals, don't always write about the protagonist losing consciousness. This is a poisonous point. Readers will become the protagonist and will be very disgusted when they see it written like this. In addition, the main character is written very brainlessly. Two senior brothers approached him to collect herbs. 8 Didn't agree without thinking about it at all, and they didn't even think about why they approached you and whether you were qualified or not.

Putting aside the structure of this book, the writing and character creation are a bit poor. The protagonist taught his younger sister all kinds of morals, but as a result, his own behavior always showed clear stupidity. The brainless protagonist is unlikable. He can be bad or blameworthy, but he cannot be stupid, otherwise the author will suspect that you are swearing. And most importantly, the protagonist's surname is Gu, not Weiwei. Maybe the author likes this female character very much, but in the description, I didn't see the charm of this character, I just felt it was water, a huge amount of water.