
I Will Kill Taiyi for the Sake of the World
我为人间斩太一
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- Ongoing
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- 426k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
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- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 7mo ago
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- Qidian
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Top quality work
It's a very interesting story with fresh inspiration. You can read the conventional world view you want to write (normal upgrade and monster-killing flow). It also has a hint of the author's unique ingenuity. It combines concepts such as the Ke system and the related turbid flow path and meteorite, as well as the concept of time travel, but it can all be explained. The overall narration is very smooth, the story structure is very beautiful, the world view is laid out and the description is also very feeling. The turning and development of the entire plot are very smooth, because the protagonist is not very old and not very mature, the whole story presents a plot twist of passive involvement and active decision-making. The way of inserting the worldview is very clever. It almost seems to be constantly supplemented and extended as the plot develops. The whole story is slowly unfolded in front of the readers, and the explanation is very complete. You can quickly grasp the worldview of the entire article and understand the logic of the character's behavior along with the worldview. Basically, it can find echoes with the specific behaviors, especially the protagonist Lu Chenyuan. The story begins with the protagonist, a young boy who is just starting out. He does not have a deep understanding of the world, or even further ambitions and ambitions. He may just want to follow his master around, do odd jobs, and buy her a bottle of wine to live peacefully. But the things lurking inside will not make him feel better. Lu Chenyuan's image is that of a relatively simple boy, but he is quite smart and sharp, and has endurance and patience that ordinary people can't match. He is a very charismatic character. He is a completely decent person, compassionate, and can easily help others when encountering injustices. Although he can be deceived by others, he may not be strong enough and has to be humiliated by others, but his core is still stable, with the determination and perseverance that are unique to a young man. She is too beautiful, so she can understand the temptations of Situ and Shangguan Chuci. He does not have too deep plans, and he is never indecisive when it comes to making decisions. When facing people close to him, he can easily praise his naive sincerity - very touching sincerity. The appearance of Shangguan Chuci, the time traveler, makes the various elements of the whole story well combined. Both women are the image of superiors, each with their own charm and style, but Lu Chenyuan never falls behind, and even makes them look sideways and fall in love with him. The profile description highlights that the protagonist's writing skills are quite good. They are strong, in order to highlight Lu Chenyuan's character creation, and at the same time, the identity gap gives Lu Chenyuan the motivation to move forward. The second thing I like about this article is that the transitions of each plot are very smooth, and there is no separate thing. All kinds of foreshadowing and hints are naturally sewn into Lu Chenyuan's knowledge. At the end, Qian Dahai's downfall ends some foreshadowing and suspense, but there are still new ones to attract readers to continue reading. I really like the character creation in this article. Each one is not too stereotyped but is quite flesh-and-blood. The first one is Qian Dahai who has been through to the current point. He is a contradictory person, tenderness and cruelty coexist. He is not so sinful that he is applauded, but he is not kind enough to let people let him go - the complexity of human nature. There is a better expression here. He has his own weakness. No matter whether it is a last resort or not, once he steps into the abyss and is swallowed up by the abyss, it will happen sooner or later. Although there is no objective description of his evil, the description of Li Zhenren also gives a good side hint of what he did. This ending is also expected. The writing throughout the article is very smooth, and you will not feel bored when reading it. It is very attractive - I am becoming more and more curious about the subsequent development.
This introduction is so good🐮, let me savor it carefully
Book lovers should take a look
After reading this article, it is true that it has potential. The characterization is relatively interesting and the personality is also described. It is a logical online work. The picture is also rich. The small plot can also be experienced in it. I boldly guess that the subsequent elements will be explosive. I am still very curious about the subsequent plot. The pace can be gentle and the sense of expectation cannot be hidden 😁
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Notes to authors
Author, who are you? The Guinness World Record is typing 807 letters per minute. Each Chinese character requires six letters. Calculating, you can type about 134 letters per minute. Since you are not a Guinness World Record holder, let's calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep standard is eight hours, and it takes about two hours for you to eat every day, and another 40 minutes. 20 Minutes to wash up in the toilet - - hours, exercise, two hours to trigger inspiration, and then remove - one hour of free time, you should have nine hours to type, and type approximately 435,780 words. Calculated based on at least 2,000 words per chapter, you can update 217.89 Chapters every day, but how come you only have so little content every day? Honestly, are you deducting it? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not take a break like you????
Wait until chapter 100 to read, update soon
Whose trumpet is this?🙂🙂🙂
Worship the boss
Friends who have leisure time, can you read the book I wrote? If the writing is good, please support it if you have any remaining recommendation votes 🌹
Is this an old model's trumpet?
Sorry, see Chapter 38
What I want to complain about the most is definitely the siege and murder of Qian Dahai near Chapter 38 ① The protagonist suddenly appeared at the scene of the siege and asked "Qian Dahai to get behind him" for no reason. Qian Dahai's life gate has been broken, and anyone with a discerning eye will know that the death is certain when the sword stabs his body, so there is no need for the protagonist to speak. The most ridiculous thing about the extra drama is that after the extra drama starts, the protagonist also wants Qian Dahai to die... The reason to prevent a dying counterattack is untenable, because the last person in the book to kill is Xuan Qi. ②. After the protagonist spoke, Shangguan Chuci actually let Qian Dahai pass. Hmm... Are you really not afraid that Qian Dahai will suddenly take the protagonist hostage, or do you have so much trust in the strength of the protagonist who has no cultivation? In addition, the book says that Shangguan believes that the protagonist is smart and has plans, which means that Shangguan Chuci believes that the protagonist is on his side and the purpose is to kill Qian Dahai. Then the question arises, why does Shangguan follow the protagonist's plan? What was already a sure kill has become more variable. After all, the protagonist has no cultivation. According to the world view, after Qian's identity is exposed, no matter which side the protagonist is on, the superior will kill him. ③. The protagonist later blamed Chu Ci for setting up a trap. What Shangguan Chuci said in reply to the protagonist was absolutely correct. The author's writing of the dispute between the two was okay. The problem arises because all the correct words were said by Shangguan Chuci. Well... Who is the protagonist in the book (a big question), and the protagonist's performance is completely disgusting to the readers. In addition, combined with the previous chapters, the protagonist who personally backstabbed Qian Dahai and used "as an elder" to confront Shangguan Chuci is quite funny... Of course, if the protagonist really cares about "Shangguan setting up a trap and not telling the protagonist", rather than the poisonous point about Qian Dahai, it can be explained. However, I hope the author can pay attention to the way of expression and the fact that readers actually have different tolerances for different genders in some things. When I first saw the main character in Chapter 38 being so poisonous against Shangguan, I came to post it directly. In order to write it back, I read the follow-up and re-edited it. The author writes about a growing male protagonist, but of course there are a few minor flaws. By the way, I personally recommend not to raise the moral value of the protagonist too high. Firstly, some readers will be disgusted. Secondly, it is easy to break the story and turn it into double standards and hypocrisy. For example, in Chapter 37, the protagonist risks his life to repay Qian Dahai for his guidance. In this case, if he is strong, he will prevent the mutation, and if he is weak, he will repay his kindness to his granddaughter. Of course, the suggestions are purely my personal thoughts. They are just words and can be viewed as you like. (Off-topic: Promote kindness and fight with hatred. There is a line for the upper limit of kindness, but whether it can exceed the line and how much it exceeds depends on the person.)
The three-character protagonist is changed to two characters, which is more suitable
It's better to call him Lu Chenyuan. If you can't bear it, you can call him Lu Yuan.
Is the male protagonist a native? No sense of immersion
Darth Harki Sword
Why is this chapter so long? I'm exhausted
If the writing is not good, just write in vain, and you have to forcefully support the article.
Collected
Encouragement
When will Master come back online?
Wonderful, wonderful
The indigenous male protagonist wins the time-travel female protagonist 😍😍66666