Broken Sword

The first volume is officially finished! I was quite moved when I saw the "Complete of this volume" added after the revision in the early morning. When I first saw Zhe Jian, I thought it was the "Jian Zhe Zhongzhou" in the copywriting, but after reading one volume, it was much more than that. Breaking the sword was Lin Che's retreat. In the beginning, he was walking in Lingmei Alley and was pointed at by his neighbors and called a liar, but he did not defend himself. He wore a hat and walked through Tuocheng, trying to be a transparent person. He said to Yan She, "Look at the sea and listen to the scriptures, maybe that's all." He thought he could settle down here, feed horses, chop firewood, plant fields and harvest vegetables, and sleep in the sunshine when spring flowers bloom. He said, "This is my hometown." But people like him are destined to have no peace. The genius from Zhongzhou came, the ghost from Hades emerged, Ming Shijiu almost died, Nan Zhi was injured, and the genius from Zhongzhou also died. Zhaoyuan Seng is fake, and Yan She is also fake. The place he thought was his hometown was actually a chess piece in a chess game. Then he did one thing: drew his sword. When the bright moon shined alone on Lianshan Temple, he used the moonlight as a sword to destroy the three thousand worlds of dust in Yanshe. But before that, he had already broken the sword with his own hands that allowed him to "face the sea and bloom with spring flowers". That's why he was able to walk into the Zen room, destroy the key, and say to Ming Zun, "I want to enter the Taoist court." Breaking the sword was the thought he had set for himself of "living quietly from now on". In just one season, too many unforgettable stories happened. ·About Lin Che He always behaves indifferently, does not show emotions, does not explain motives, and does not get angry in public. I thought he was just such a person, like water in a well, without any ripples. But he is not well water. He is Jing Zhongyue. I like this metaphor very much, just like the chapter "The Moon in the Well". He accepted Nan Zhi as his disciple. He was restless because of the poems and wine, and felt comforted by the rain in the west. He said, "People like me are probably destined to die outside," but before leaving, he taught Nan Zhi to repair the roof, promised Bai Liuxing that "you won't die," went to the cliff to meet Ming Zun, and came back with a "good". He never said what he was going to do, but his actions were more important than any lines. This is Lin Che. The bright sky is as bright as a flying mirror approaching Danque, and the green smoke extinguishes the clear brilliance. ·About Mingshijiu I think I will never forget her. My favorite character, bar none. She is smart but not showy, proud but not mean, brave but not pushy. She knew that Lin Che had seen through her identity as a princess, but she never revealed it. She accompanied him through every street in Tuocheng in her own way, sleeping on his back with peace of mind in the wasteland; making tea in the rain and waiting for him to wake up; She said "I believe in you more than I believe in the Buddha", she said "that's wrong", she said "living" can only be seen again, she sang that song before leaving. "Memories are no longer controlled by me, I admit..." When she finished singing, I suddenly remembered what she said, "But if there is no such moment, how would I know that I am truly alive?" She is a girl who really lives seriously. Chapter 56 Cizhou Monk asked her "What is your relationship?", But she did not answer. In Chapter 57, she answered with one word "ally." But what she was thinking of was "comrade-in-arms." These two words are much heavier than "like". If you like me, you want to get closer, but your comrade-in-arms just wants to back you. She put her life and Lin Che's life on the same scale. She doesn't become weak just because she likes someone. When she shouted "Come and save me" and received no response, she became discouraged and rushed forward with her fist raised. She dared to say to Yanwu, "Then Lianshan Temple can become history", and she also dared to stand between Zhaoyuan monk and Qiuyang in the wasteland, putting herself in danger. Everything she does, she does because she wants to do it She is so good. I love it so much. (ps: I feel that one of the main reasons why I was attracted to this book was that I was attracted to her at the first time. The metaphor of "not a stream, but a disaster" really hit me in an instant! It's so wonderful and so effective.) ·About Yanshe When I wrote this, the playlist happened to be "Half a City of Smoke and Sand", "Just to fulfill a long-cherished wish: How to distinguish between evil and good in chaos" felt really suitable. I was surprised when I saw that he was one of the masterminds behind the scenes. It makes sense if you think about it carefully. I always remember his answer. Lin Che asked him why, and he said: "In the evening, the whole city of Tuo was very happy, because everyone finally had other meat to eat. I don't want the people living in this land to just live." If a person lives in this city all his life, watching the people here live and die from generation to generation, but has never tasted the taste of meat, and does not know what the world outside the Western Land is like - how powerless would that be? He saw this situation, so he had a wish. He wants the children in this land to live a normal life like the children in Zhongzhou, wants to turn "survival" into "alive", and wants the Western Land to never fall behind again. Yan She took the wrong path, but he did not miss the original intention. Before he died, he asked Lin Che: "Was the pear blossom cake that day delicious?" The last thing he cared about was whether Lin Che had finished the snack he asked Ming Shijiu to bring. I think he actually knew a long time ago that he would not be forgiven for what he had done and that he would die. He just wanted to make sure Lin Che still remembered those small and warm moments before he died. Then he said "go quickly", exactly the same as when he sent Lin Che away nine years ago. Lin Che did not look back. · Regarding the ending of the first volume, I didn't expect it to be like this. I was always a little melancholy. It rained for the first time in 136 years in Xitu. Mingshi wine caught the rain and made tea. Lin Che woke up and drank a cup of tea under the eaves. What followed was the long-foreseen parting, and a long-awaited song. Nan Zhi stood at the entrance of Lingmei Lane and asked, "Sir, are you really back?", And he said "Of course"; Bai Liuxing and the others were waiting to die in the wasteland, and he said, "You won't die." Ming Zun said, "It turns out that the setting sun is the rising sun," and he said, "Okay," and the first volume ended like this. Everyone is on the road, some go to death, some go to Zhongzhou, and some stay where they are. The separation of life and death runs throughout. But it rained in Xitu. This thing itself is a hope. ·Breaking the sword was the sword that kept him where he was. Only when the sword is broken can one move forward. Looking forward to the second volume. Looking forward to the deer feast, looking forward to Lin Che walking into Zhongzhou without wearing a hat and making a splash, looking forward to the high-spirited appearance of the group of young people in Yunlou, and looking forward to Ming Shijiu and him meeting again - she said, "We can't see you again until we are alive." They are all alive, so there must be that day.

I have read the first two chapters, so I will only comment on the first two chapters. 1: There are many flaws 1. In the opening dialogue, after reading it a few times, I feel there is something wrong with the logic. The monk asked the protagonist to be a guide for the distinguished guest, but he didn't give the distinguished guest any information? 2. Ming Shijiu is a distinguished guest from Zhongzhou, so why doesn't he know the protagonist? Also, using [that person] instead of the protagonist is inexplicable and feels very pretentious. [I read other book reviews and they said that the protagonist went to Central Continent to hide his identity. This patch can do it. 3. At the beginning, it felt like the protagonist Lin Che looked like his cultivation was completely useless, and then the protagonist was asked to protect Mingshi Wine? Two: Flaws do not hide the advantages 1. The writing is good, and it is first-rate from the starting point. 2. Meticulous and slow pace is a bright spot in the current fast-paced market. Words to the author: Don't pay too much attention to the logical issues I mentioned. This is not important. The most important thing about online novels is to keep updating. There once was an author who stopped updating after I commented on it. I felt sad about this.

I read through the existing chapters twice and sorted it out, and it finally seemed a lot smoother ·Eleven years ago, Lin Che "came to this world" and appeared at the place where Ming Zun died six hundred years ago. At that time, he was just a teenager and was rescued by Master Yanshe of Lianshan Temple. ——In other words, he was not in the world for the first ten years of his life. Does he have any memories of these ten years? ·After being rescued, he lived in Lianshan Temple, but his physical condition did not improve for a long time and he was always weak. In order to keep him alive, the monks in the temple asked him to try to practice Buddhism. During this period, he became successful in practice and was even regarded by the temple as the perfect candidate for the next generation of abbot, and he is expected to become the leader of Buddhism in the future. ·It was also during this time that he began to do an important thing for Lianshan Temple, persuading ghosts to change their graves. He visited almost every tomb in Tu City, and therefore knew the inheritance and opportunities in the city well. His fame spread to Zhongzhou. The geniuses of the seven sects of Tao Ting were ready to face this unprecedented enemy. ·Lin Che rejected Lianshan Temple's offer to stay and chose to leave west Tu and go to Zhongzhou. ·While in Zhongzhou, he sent nine sums of money back to Tuocheng, but the money was withheld due to corruption within Jinghu Bank and contempt for west Tu. ·In nine years, he established his own organization - Yunlou in Zhongzhou. Its members include Fu Yueyi of Wangyue Mountain, Bai Qiushi of the Bai family and other proud sons of the seven Taoist sects. But he always kept his last name anonymous, and even his partners did not know that "Lin Che" was him. ——Since they don't know that the "leader" they know is Lin Che, what is their name? Last fall, he mysteriously disappeared without warning, and the organization was on the verge of collapse. His companion Fu Yueyi suspected that it was the high-level officials of the Taoist court who had committed the crime, because "he was a foreign enemy and deserved to die." It was at this time that the text "In the autumn of that year, Lin Che's sword broke into Zhongzhou, and the Taoist court was relieved of serious troubles, and all the sects silently celebrated together." Yu Xianyu was also looking for this leader, the "someone" in his mouth, after he disappeared. ——Is Yu Xianyu a member of Yunlou? Is the half-marked "Lin Che" in her note because of doubt or reluctance? ·Lin Che returned to the West after disappearing. He was regarded as a liar by his neighbors in Lingmei Lane because the money he sent back was never delivered, and he himself did not look like a practitioner. He made no excuses, just kept all the money he had and promised to pay back another portion within ten days. He was arranged by Master Yanshe to be the guide for Her Royal Highness Princess Bai, and was responsible for receiving the maid Ming Shijiu. ——In the third chapter, the author used the word "noble", which can be seen as clues that Ming Shijiu is the princess of the Bai family, and various subsequent signs, "Her Royal Highness the Princess who wrote the letter", "Why do you have to be so gentle in your voice", "I should remind you to change a pair of shoes next time" prove that she is the Princess, and Lin Che also knows it. ·The two reached a deal - Ming Shijiu found out the whereabouts of the nine sums of money for him, and he ensured her safety before she left west Tu. While accompanying Ming Shijiu to the tomb of Ming Zun, Lin Che had a conversation that spanned time with Ming Zun six hundred years ago. Ming Zun bluntly said, "I have been waiting for his arrival as early as six hundred years ago." ——Here is the first revelation of Lin Che's ability, which is also known as "Tianwen". Tianwen can turn back time, revisit the past, and encounter the historical truth buried in the long river of time. After the people from the Seventh Sect of Daoting came, Wang Xuan was dissatisfied with the fact that his admired senior sister Yu Xianyu wrote in his notes that one of the emperor's favored sons was an "unremarkable" Lin Che. The more he thought about it, the more jealous he became, so he came to Lingmei Lane and injured the neighbors. Lin Che beat Wang Xuan to death in the street, attracting everyone's attention. Monk Yanwu of Lianshan Temple asked Lin Che to retreat in seclusion on the grounds of "overall situation", but he refused. ·He accepted the little girl next door Nan Zhi as his disciple and taught her spiritual practice. One of his purposes was to "make the Western Land not just the Western Land of Lianshan Temple". This move was regarded as "rebellion" by Yanwu, and the two sides almost broke up. Nan Zhi unexpectedly obtained the inheritance of the "Whale Moon" sword from the former sage of Wangyue Mountain in the orange garden. He defeated Qiu Yang, who had painstakingly searched for this inheritance, and was seriously injured. Qiuyang challenged Lin Che, and Lin Che accepted. Chen Ruoyun negotiated with Lianshan Temple in the name of Xuandu, hoping to welcome the bones of the former sages in the wasteland outside the city back to Zhongzhou. ——Does it mean that Lin Che's achievements in "persuading ghosts to change graves" will be overturned by Zhongzhou? The representative of evil heretics, the Xuansheng monk of Yanyang Temple, took the initiative to find Lin Che and wanted to join forces with him, but was completely rejected and was captured by Cizhou monk. Seeing that the proposal was rejected, these people turned to Qiuyang, and the competition was about to break out. ——Digression—— This is the first time I have updated the book after reading it for so many years. I hope it can be completed with high quality and quantity! If there are monthly votes and recommendation votes, I will vote for them! (Editor 2: Because it was written some time ago, I will sort out the newly updated parts and information when I have time)

Currently, the three female characters that have been written about more (including frontal and profile descriptions) are Ming Shijiu, Fu Yueyi, and Yu Xianyu. Among them, Ming Shijiu has physical contact (originally I wanted to write about the only one, but Chapter 22 writes: "This kind of warmth is not unfamiliar. He has experienced it many times in the past." "This experience." Does it mean that he has slept on the knees of other girls?) Fu Yueyi is a former partner, and Yu Xianyu is an obsession pursued alone Fu Yueyi wrote: "Whether it is the West or Zhongzhou, they are all under the same sky. >The girl on Wangyue Mountain pursues the moonlight last night, and Lin Che in Lianshan Temple stands outside the Zen room waiting for an old acquaintance. It is also the same." Yu Xianyu wrote: "If you were born nine years later, you would no longer be lost in the crowd when the Buddha's restrictions were about to be loosened. , Is qualified to gain my suspicion. That's all." Neither of these feelings is for love, one is friendship and the other is rivalry (?) And Ming Shijiu, I felt it was very promising from the first chapter ! More importantly, I like this girl so much, from her name to her personality to everything! A really clever girl said, "Come and save me, Lin Che!" Those words were even more clever! ————Let's hit the dividing line———— ·Chapter 1, the relationship between the two is purely guide and employer. , Ming Shijiu even wore the disguise of a "maid" and asked Lin Che what kind of legend that was. When they first met her, she was standing on the steps condescendingly. Lin Che looked up and saw her, "I realized it was not a stream, but a disaster." This is the first physical description of a female character in the book, and the location determines her initial positioning - she is the heroine! ·Chapter 2 "If I accidentally slip and fall off the cliff, will you hold me?" "If I save you, won't the temple give me money in return?" This is the first time Ming Shijiu has made a joke to Lin Che. She wanted to see if he would answer, if he would panic. Lin Che's reaction was "I thought this makes so much sense." She "snorted, sounding a bit proud" and made one move after another, with a tacit understanding ·Chapter 3 "This girl is so beautiful, she really deserves to be your wife." "Senior, you are wrong, I don't know. She is his wife, and he is not my husband... This time I finally found an opportunity to come here to have an affair." Ming Shijiu made up a lie about an affair, and asked sincerely, with her hands clasped together, "How long do you think it will be before someone discovers this bad relationship between me and him?" This is the second time she used jokes to resolve embarrassment. Lin Che was not angry, but instead "wondered what on earth are you surprised about." ·Chapter 4, the two met Zhao Qi and his son on the street, and the boy called her, "Sister, stay away from that liar." Ming Shijiu took off her hat and said with a sweet smile: "What a beautiful girl like me is really good at is lying and deceiving people." She was blocking his arrows in a self-deprecating way. Although she said "it's not about defending or trying to please," the trust between the two has begun to grow. In the same chapter, in the courtyard of Zhaoyuan Monk, she asked him: "Do you know who my enemy is?" He said: "I never thought about it. It is enough for me to be known." This was the first time Lin Che showed confidence in front of her, and Ming Shijiu's reaction was "remembered", and she did not doubt his ability. ·Chapter 9 "Probably the most intimate moment was... Lin Che, who was forced to stay outside the temple, carried his food box to the Baisha Zen room, sat side by side with the girl who was still not fully awake, and finished breakfast on the stone steps." "Forced to stay outside the temple" shows that Master Yanshe was trying to bring them together. The girl who was "still not fully awake" was sitting on the stone steps eating the breakfast he had brought. This is a very warm and everyday picture! ·Chapter 10, she asked him where he was going: "When that day comes, you have nothing to do with this matter, where are you going?" Only when a person cares about another person will he care about "where he is going to go in the future." ·Chapter 13, "You and I have known each other for less than a spring, and our relationship is not that good, so my curiosity is really curious. You can take back the thank you before." "I just want to remind you that the alliance between you and me is very pure, and it is all about interests." She was drawing a clear line, but it was too deliberate. If it was really a pure interest relationship, she didn't need to emphasize it. ·Chapter 14, Ming Shijiu asked him after the fight: "Don't you mind if I talk too much and prevent you from taking action?" Lin Che said: "Since I promised you, I won't mind it. And your voice has always been nice. I think for Why should I dislike it?" This is a sentence that is very close to "love words", and what he said is "always nice" Ming Shijiu's reaction was: "Ming Shijiu didn't say anything, just wrote it down." Here she was quieter than before. In the past, when praised for her good looks, she would "give a thumbs up and say, 'My hair is right.'" When misunderstood, she would say, "I'm here to have an affair." When she was accused of a bloody disaster, she would smile and go out to enjoy the breeze, but when Lin Che praised her for having a "nice voice," she stopped talking. "You can now look forward to the day when I leave Xitu, and I will sing a song for you then." She kept his words in her heart, and thought about "I will sing to her on the day I leave." She began to envision a "ceremonial farewell." A girl will only think about the ritual of "farewell" when she takes a relationship seriously. Also in the same chapter: Ming Shijiu tests Lin Che's strength. She said, "I just want to take this opportunity to see how strong you are and to determine whether your efforts are worth it." And Lin Che "defeated Wang Xuan in five breaths." She told him "You can take that thank you back." Because she was selfish, she felt it was not pure enough, so she shouldn't accept his thanks, she was open and serious. ·Chapter 21, On the way back from Ming Zun's tomb, Ming Shi was tired of drinking. Lin Che didn't say anything and just carried her on his back. "Lin Che adjusted his body posture slightly, and after making sure that Ming Shijiu would not be easily awakened, he continued this lonely journey." "It was lonely, windy, and ghostless along the way." "Ming Shijiu did not wake up once during the journey and slept peacefully." The next morning, Ming Shijiu woke up and found herself on his back. His voice trembled slightly and he asked, "We're here?" He said, "Yeah." She didn't ask "how long have you carried me", and he didn't say "all night", there was a silent understanding between them And judging from the following text "I should remind you to change a pair of shoes next time", Lin Che obviously saw through Ming Shijiu's identity when they were in the wasteland. There was no "status gap" between the two of them, and she slept on his back all night. This is complete trust. Same chapter, "If I jump back on your back now, will you throw me off?" "I gave you a chance." She wanted to let him carry her again, and he said "I gave you a chance" - meaning that if you didn't wake up before, it doesn't matter if you wake up now. This sentence sounds like rejection, but it also sounds like "If you didn't sleep last night, I would have carried you." ·Chapter 29, Ming Shijiu was surrounded by tree ghosts and she shouted to the sky, "Come and save me, Lin Che!" "Ming Shijiu raised the corners of her mouth slightly, smiling at herself, thinking that being passionate can really harm people, and it is best to be alone." ——The author used the word passionate, and it was basically obvious that she had feelings for him. Without this feeling, she would not be vulnerable. But the next moment she put away her vulnerability. At this time, Lin Che "After Ming Shijiu left, Lin Che felt uneasy. For him, this was a very rare emotion. Especially now after returning home. After Nan Zhi came back with the new branch, Lin Che simply told the little girl not to be lazy when practicing her boxing, and then walked out of the small courtyard. At first, he didn't really want to see Ming Shijiu's back, and just chased the wind in the sun. However, walking in this weather was really a self-torture, and the young monk was busy, so he finally decided to go there. As for seeing her or not, it all depends on God's will. In a sense, this is taking advantage of the opportunity. The difference is that he met her before she was too excited to be a celebrity. Standing on the street, Lin Che looked at the girl facing life and death under the scorching sun, with a solemn and proud expression. Then the heart returns to peace." In summary, "He can't see her, and his heart is calm when he sees her." This is also the first time I write about Lin Chedao's uneasy heart. He was smiling when he was trapped in the palace by Yan Wu Na Jingju, and he was chatting and laughing face to face with Ming Zun. But he was restless because Ming Shijiu had left his sight. Later she asked him why he came, and he said: "These are the reasons why I don't have to blame myself after you die. It's not the reason why I didn't come to save you." This sounds cold, but if you think about it carefully, it's not wrong: if you die because I didn't come, I will blame myself for the rest of my life, and I will not allow this to happen. ·End of Chapter 31: "Ming Shijiu turned her head away, not looking at him, and said calmly: 'It's just that my hair is messed up, which is a bit annoying.'" She had just finished a life-and-death fight, and what she cared about was "that her hair was messed up in front of you." A girl can't even hide her heart! In the same chapter, Ming Shijiu said: "No matter how loud or loud your voice is, you are more effective than Buddha." Lin Che said: "Maybe it's because you don't believe in Buddha." She said: "Believing in you is better than believing in Buddha." It's not that love words are better than love words, one sentence is worth a thousand words. (My favorite paragraph!) ·Chapter 40, Mingshi is waiting for him under the wine lamp. She handed him Chen Ruoyun's letter about returning the bones of the former sage and said to him: "Win." She knew what the outcome of this competition meant to him - not only personal honor and disgrace, but also the first tough battle he fought after breaking with Lianshan Temple. It was a proof of his choice to Xi Tu and himself nine years ago. About her identity: ·Ming Shijiu never admitted that she was a princess in front of Lin Che from beginning to end, but Lin Che obviously knew it a long time ago, and she might also know that he knew. In the wasteland, the two used "your lady" and "my lady" to fight. ·Chapter 25, the girl in the white dress appeared to rescue Lin Che and said, "Lin Che is a guest of this palace." What Lin Che thought was, "Why do you have to make your voice so gentle? Can I really not hear it?" Later, He sent her back to the temple and told her, "I should remind you to change a pair of shoes next time." "I went back to the wasteland and came back at twenty-four hours. Is the green skirt alone dirty?" He noticed that her shoes were also dirty. She changed into a white skirt but not her shoes. If you are not close to someone, why would you pay attention to someone else's shoes? (There should be a lot that have not been sorted out, so let's do this for the time being) (Editor 2: I have deleted some instructive remarks and treated it as a pure emotional line analysis post State in advance that this is just a personal analysis and recording post, without any guidance) ————The above are all personal interpretations, and the rebuttal is that you————

If a newcomer writes like this, he probably won't be able to sign.

Single heroine or harem 🙂

Can the author tell me whether it is a single woman or a harem 🙂

Ask a question, single or multiple? In addition, stock trading Sima

I've briefly read Chapter 10, let's talk about it. This narrative rhythm would definitely not work if the subject matter were different. It has a sense of déjà vu that goes back 10 years, but fortunately it is a classical fairy tale. As a result, I predict that it will be version 2.0 Of Food Fairy Lord. It will really plunge into the literary youth. If you analyze the story bit by bit, it will be difficult to become a hit.

The writing is good, but it feels too fast and too urgent. It seems that everyone has an unforgettable past and experience, but they rush through it before they have time or plan to write it out. I feel that I don't need to be too obsessed with the accumulation of pen and ink. I can relax and think about the characters when writing. This is how I feel now after reading Chapter 60. I don't know what will happen next.

Rate your book 3>1>>2. Great progress. It is really not easy to write a good story with a similar writing style like Guilty Mao Ni. Update more, but don't imitate guiltless behavior. Come on, the future is promising.

It feels really fishy, ​​not just the writing style. Apart from being tricky, I have never seen any author of a male video that can portray a female character like this.

The question of whether to have a single heroine or a harem is quite important. If you don't talk about it, readers won't feel at ease and won't be optimistic about it.

Is it the old cat? Is it really you? ? The ID that is nearly 6,000 days old is Laodeng anyway. It's still the same flavor 😭 and I cried loudly. After so many years, I'm eating this flavor again, and I like this disease. I have to say "How can I not make people happy?" You are not allowed to disobey it this time! Stop scolding it! I think there was another person who came with the same tone, maybe there was a jade like Mao in front of him. That person seemed to have endured a lot. He quit after writing two or three books. How the hell could he quit and stop writing? And damn, I can't remember his name. It's so annoying.

When reading novels, be sure not to read book circles. People who comment are just a bunch of dogs. No matter how good the book is, some people will say that this is not good and that is not good.

Blue flowers under the bridge? Familiar style

There is a feeling of a high road, or a naughty writing style.

If it is really a person, I feel like my dream is shattered But I can't help but think about what if, what if it's the deputy CP, what if it's a friendship line, what if...

People nowadays don't have the patience to sit down and watch.

It feels like I watched Mao Niu's The Legend of the Destiny for the first time

I'm a bit of a young writer, but I chose the right subject. The author will update it carefully. I think highly of you. You know how to tell stories, unlike those crappy fast food articles. I love you.

I have caught up with the latest version. This book is much better than before. It has a more natural literary flavor, and some of the more enjoyable writing is not so stiff. The plot and characters are very good, but the setting of the combat power is not very clear. An old butler from a small sect can destroy a Foundation Builder with a sneak attack. The protagonists and heroines are all in their mid-twenties. Fu Yueyi only entered the Cave Realm from the Foundation Builder the year before. They are all geniuses no matter how you say it. The current description does not feel like a genius, and the next one is The realm is Jindan. If the first three realms are to be summarized, I still hope that the combat power of Dongzhen and Jindan can be divided in more detail (such as what are the characteristics of each realm). Although I feel that the strength of the protagonist is probably between Dongzhen and Jindan, but if the foreshadowing is not enough, there will be a lot less anticipation and satisfaction in revealing the protagonist's strength. Anyway, I hope it can be polished well. This book looks really comfortable. Don't cut it in half.

It's such a pity that I only read this book at night, so I can only vote for it with one monthly vote. This month's daytime votes have been used up.

Single or many? Are they really blue flowers under the bridge? If so, I quite liked his previous books.

There must be more female protagonists. I like to read well-written stories with multiple female protagonists.

It's rare to see scenery interspersed in such detail. The writing is so good.

I quite like this book, but I feel that the plot progresses a little too quickly, and the combat power system is a bit small. It is unreasonable for the protagonist to become almost invincible in a city (Jiang City) by building a foundation. This will lower the combat power of the entire world. Also, the protagonist's image is not three-dimensional enough. Although the author is trying his best to portray it in this aspect, the impression of the protagonist is still relatively flat at present. I hope that the author can portray the protagonist in a more three-dimensional way in the future.

I'm here to look at the series. Hasn't the author entered 2 yet?

The author's update time is really hell, it's hard not to worry about the state of writing.

Keep it for a while first and vote for two months to encourage it.