
Wild Future: War of Half Men
荒蛮未来:半人之战
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 289k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Apocalypse
- Updated
- 5mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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126Chapters
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I came from a writer's assistant. The author's writing and descriptions are top-notch. The beginning of the first chapter is very immersive and I can feel a sense of sadness. ( ╹▽╹ ) But as you can see, you should know that the disadvantage of directly entering a narrative and using the world view to connect the previous and the following is that the reader will be separated from the emotion you have painstakingly created. Anything in this world, tell me using the characters you write!
This author has already started to feel superior even though he has nothing to do.
I can't stand the national sports system, and I feel like I'm writing advanced online articles
Come on! Came here from Writer's Assistant.
The first three chapters are too watery
The first chapter starts with an event, but the dialogue in the second chapter is too watery. Can't you write the follow-up to your opening in the second chapter? After telling the events at the beginning, if you don't keep up with the events in the second chapter, your continuity will be broken. There are too many characters, and you haven't labeled them. The characters don't have their own personalities and characteristics, and they look unmemorable. You didn't mention whether the protagonist is a time traveler or not. The indigenous characters don't feel immersive. I am a twenty-first-century Christian, not the person in your article. I can't replace the male protagonist in it, and I'm even more interested in your follow-up.