The Astrologer Is Pulling Your Leg

Fake astrologers: predicting the future by observing celestial movements A true astrologer: Just send a satellite and let's see.

The Prophecy Mage's combat style (bylike): Predicting the enemy's exact future location, then continuously casting their own spells and uttering mystical pronouncements (declarations of victory) before the appointed day arrives. When the enemy arrives at the trap, they are blasted to death by a dozen or so super-tiered spells.

I remember reading a D&D book before, where a mage specializing in divination chose a carefully chosen auspicious day, used Dimensional Detection in the tower to locate his enemy, and then used his full map vision to unleash a barrage of Meteor Explosions.

The main character feels too unconventional and jumps around too much.

There seem to be many grammatical errors. The author tends to use long sentences, but their language skills seem lacking, resulting in numerous grammatical mistakes. I suggest shortening the sentences and making them more concise.

Have you studied astrology and planetary magic? Some of this is just random writing and assumptions.

It feels like they're always running around outside; they don't really feel like a mage.

I feel it would have been better if the author had added a line earlier in the story stating that the protagonist is a time traveler; the native character's description feels awkward (personal opinion).

The author seems to have many great ideas but struggles to develop them, resulting in bland and unfulfilling stories each time. Whether it's adventure or research, there's a sense of incompleteness, as if the writing is unfinished. It seems the author needs further education.

Dude, it just ended already? I absolutely love this style, it just started to unfold and it's already over 🤡