Astrologers Are Fooling You

Fate is always topsy-turvy, destiny is always twists and turns, destiny is always threatening you, it's not fun to be a human being ~ It's the same type as the book about the lich who deceived the paladin of a bunch of gold coins in three sentences. It is also the most fun to write in a concise and highlight situation. Other than that, it is a plot about how the young author plays tricks on the unlucky protagonist. The key to reversing readers' comments is that the author wants to use the protagonist's "reasonable" failure to shape the character, enrich the world and the plot, without destroying the reader's sense of substitution, and even increase the sense of participation of the bloodthirsty audience. If real dice or voting trends are introduced, it may be exciting and the shortcomings will become advantages. But this is not the position of this book. Many of the protagonist's actions are purely foresight and recklessness, seeking death as a boomerang. The protagonist is driven by agitation and has no capital to relax. When making decisions, he is so arrogant that he looks down on everyone around him. Those who deceive others will eventually be deceived. The protagonist just cannot see this, so he is always on the road to failure and failure. If you still want to highlight the characteristics of the protagonist who is like a cow cat, whose hands never change, and who is really happy when he cheats people, then don't write a psychological description of doing it and then regretting it. Readers can like a protagonist who is indebted and cheap, but they will not like a half-toned clown who gets away with it by luck. Same fate twists and tricks by the author, as well as academic ideals, the protagonist of this book is much more respectable than Chabi because he dares to act.

Fake astrologers: predict the future by observing the movements of celestial bodies Real astrologers: just send a satellite to see

The battle mode of the prophecy mage is bylike: predict the exact location of the enemy in the future, and then continue to cast his own spells and issue magic words (declaration of victory) before the date arrives. When the enemy reaches the trap, he will be bombarded to death by more than a dozen rounds of super magic.

I remembered that I had read a DND before. A mage who specializes in prophecy chose a well-prepared and auspicious day. After placing the alien detection in the tower to know the location of the enemy, he opened the full field of view and directly threw a bunch of meteors to explode.

The protagonist feels too out of touch and jumps too much.

I feel like there are a lot of bad sentences. The author always likes to use long sentences but seems not good at Chinese, which leads to a lot of bad sentences. It is recommended to shorten the statement and be more concise.

Have you studied astrology and planetary magic? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

I feel like I'm jumping around all the time, and I don't feel much like a mage.

I feel like it would be better for the author to insert a sentence in the previous article that the protagonist is a time-traveler. The Aboriginal words are very awkward to read (personal opinion)

The author feels that he always has very good ideas but is unable to develop them. Every time it ends very blandly, whether it is adventure or research, there is a sense of unfinished writing. I feel that I need to learn more.

No, buddy, it's over immediately? I really like this style. It's finished as soon as I step into the new world🤡

It's an Aboriginal text, so that's okay. I jumped directly to the 10 or so pictures. After reading them for a long time, I felt a little confused. When I scrolled to the front, I realized they were Aboriginal.

Looking at the introduction, it looks like FGO's celestial magic, and the most important thing is that he looks like a native. Who can help me? It's not directed at the author, but the natives can't understand it.

After reading a few chapters, it feels like the protagonist is an indigenous person?

This book fills a gap in the current market. I feel that it still lacks a bit of passion. The writing is quite good, but after all, it is a logistics mage. It should not be a matryoshka-style book to advance the plot.

I hope my combat power doesn't collapse. It's boring to upgrade too fast.

I'm just curious, how did the author go against the current of science today and talk about astrology with originality and seriousness?

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Can the Star God be the upper body when the protagonist fights later?

The writing is well-founded and reminds me of the days when I studied astrology and planetary magic.

🙂 It's all on the shelves online, what's the matter with an update? It's up to you, it's going to explode soon, ten updates for ten consecutive days

I originally wanted to save a lot, but I didn't expect to finish it directly. However, it is true that if there is an information gap between the protagonist's perspective and the reader's perspective, it is only suitable for group portraits or suspense. It is really difficult to write adventure monsters and upgrades.

This algorithm of Qidian recommends books that have been read every day.

The first few chapters seem to be a bit hard to read because of the translation-like writing style.

A feeling of missing you so much and a bit regretful

Why is it so short? Is it okay? Can anyone tell me?