I Think You Can't Even Imagine the Happiness of a Warlock.

The author's writing style and jokes are very smooth, and he is very familiar with dndpf. The early personal adventure part is very exciting, and the setting of the PF path is something that many people know about but few have written books. In this niche circle, this book definitely belongs to the fairy grass. If this style continues, it will be very brilliant. But in the mid-term, after the presence of players increased, the whole plot started to run away. It was said to be leading the mainstream, but there was no good technological advancement and expansion. What the people were like was almost never mentioned. The industrial education felt that it was just a superficial taste and was not written in depth at all; it is said that the fourth natural disaster stream does not have the excitement of the protagonist's rapid development with the help of exclusive understanding of the players, nor is it a group drama that has a distinctive and impressive portrayal of the player group. The protagonist has no goals or plans (but he has a life plan, which is very ironic). He has built a territory but can't tell who is the owner (it feels like the players are more like the owners). As a result, he is completely pushed along by a group of crazy players who have no goals and cannot be controlled, resulting in a complete lack of sense of agency and identity. Later on, when I went to Blue Star Travel, the style of the movie became even weirder. It turned into a script about urban ghost stories. The protagonist was completely about me being awesome but I want to be an ordinary person. The plot seemed to be big but it didn't come at the door. To be honest, I couldn't stand it. To be honest, if a book has a certain style, just keep writing it. If you want to practice writing, you can start a new book. If your grades are not good, it doesn't matter if you cut it. Changing the style in the same book, not to mention whether it respects the readers, is also a struggle with one's own performance. At the beginning, 100 readers liked the DND adventure stream, but when it became the mainstream, 20 readers were lost who didn't like it. Another 20 readers were lost in the player stream, and another 20 readers were lost in the urban stream. The more the style is changed, the fewer readers will be. How many readers will be able to subscribe in the end?

I have read two-thirds of the book so far Advantages: 1. The author has made great efforts to research and understand the specific settings and various related aspects of dnd. Whether it's a PC or a tabletop game, at least it's serious. Rather than a "cloud dnd" person who just started reading a few novels. 2. The author has put great effort into the warlock's spellcasting system. Some of the spells are quite creative and novel in the sitting pen. 3. At present, the protagonist and the magic pet set the mode of being thrown by the magic pet. It's quite interesting to watch so far. The following is about the shortcomings, without any other meaning. I just hope that the author will write better and better! 1. Is the protagonist's current status relatively drifting? The main line needs to be revised. 2. The author is rather blunt when inserting some content. For example, I saw some comments about taking advantage of players while thinking about shady players. I don't know what the author is thinking specifically. I guess he wants to express that the protagonist can take advantage of the players, but the protagonist should also have his own back-up to deal with the players. You can use it, but you can't live without it. This kind of meaning but because of inserting the same topic many times, the reader becomes bored. You can insert it directly once or twice, and then describe it in detail when it is completed. Since similar topics should not be inserted into the text more than three times 3. It is recommended that the English abbreviations in the book be replaced with Chinese. This is a very simple question. The number of readers of Chinese online novels is ten thousand times that of real DND players. Some personal thoughts: Isn't it a bit inappropriate to describe a level 1.2 Spellcaster as scorched earth? Why can't my level 2 caster even struggle to defeat a few armor-piercing guards? Orz has to use a crossbow 2. Ice knife + magic weapon to suddenly kill a kobold is a bit too much! ! ! This skate is too powerful I hope the author writes better and better ()

Please rate it, thank you! I didn't see it when I went to the Thief Disciple, which is inexplicable. I don't feel like it's to that extent, it's pretty much the Destiny Believers causing trouble. The thief would have been beaten to death long ago

Is it going to become vulgar? The so-called Fourth Natural Disaster player flow is all about using bad Internet slang and unscrupulous behavior that is off-putting. Destroying Fantasy | The most basic structure of Western fantasy novels - the sense of atmosphere. It's not about following the path of a super god mechanic and surrounding these players to gain profits. It's just to prepare the grown-up gamers to get used to these "darkness" and start a pseudo-revolution of "why not play the game if you're dead?", Right? Overthrow the feudal western fantasy world, right?

I didn't quite understand the introduction. It was the protagonist who asked others to tell some warlock jokes, and then the protagonist became impatient before others finished telling them?

To put it simply, the style has changed. I don't know if the author was lazy and wrote a mindless and cool article, or if he changed the gunman.

Recommended by Red Ji. It looked good before it was released. It has a strong Western fantasy flavor. The protagonist feels like Rogue Glory. The daily flow plus some events and complaints made the player's opinion suddenly go away. I have ordered seven or eight chapters and more than half of the plot is written for the player. I am still not satisfied. The protagonist is not as big as the player and the operation is not as flexible as the player. Will this still be the case later? Where can I start if I want to skip the player story?

The beginning is not very friendly to unfamiliar readers. Many parts are unclear, such as ecl, build, etc. It is recommended to add a comment at the end of the chapter.

If you call me Tom, just write Tom. It's a bit inconsistent to always write the protagonist's original name.

To be honest, I've read more than ten chapters, but I'm still confused, and I don't understand the power system. 😅😅😅

I still don't understand why you writers went to the Western Fantasy world and still used Chinese names.

You, the reader, have chosen carefully enough. Let me rank the influence of the tags (as of before they are put on the shelves). Players/Unknown group of fun people/Daily complaints/Semi-waste house non-offensive male protagonist/DND. The number of votes this month is twice as high as the comments. It seems that book friends are really tolerant👍.

After watching the plot for a while, I got the feeling that the protagonist's intelligence is definitely not 11, it's 9 at the highest level.

It's very interesting. Some of the fake divine farmers stopped causing harm to people and I was almost persuaded to quit by you. This book could have achieved better results. It has a very authentic Western fantasy flavor, and the plug-ins are also interesting rather than just adding points to become stronger. The handling of players is also very good, and the interaction between the protagonist and pets is also very interesting. The title of the book, An Xunsi and the Warlock, are both written. It is well written, and the story is relatively bland, but I am tired of watching the constant fighting. This book is very comfortable to read. Just update it reluctantly. The protagonist has a bunch of auxiliary skills, but the battle combines strength and spells very well, and it's not as cliché as other stories about mages adding points to strength.

I just looked at the previous point. It's a typical funny character design and has nothing to do with the tiger man. At most, it can be read as a popular science article on DND settings. I don't know what happens next, but I can't appreciate the character creation aspect. There was no good transition between the character design of Wish World and the new character design, which gave me a very inconsistent feeling.

It's a pity. It looked good from the front, but suddenly a player appeared, and the mood was completely ruined. It's my fault, I didn't read the introduction carefully.

It's okay if the author writes this book for practice. If the next book is a Western fantasy or a game about another world, I will definitely support this book. . . The protagonist traveled through time, and ended up attracting players. This is the biggest poisonous point for me.

What a shame! The more I think about it, the more regretful it becomes. Back then, Senior Sister Amber Sword showed signs of being a player, and Fei Yan had to go to extra trouble to clarify her explanation. Western fantasy novels don't need the fourth natural disaster and don't need players other than the protagonist!

After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't find a single enjoyable point.

Let's put it this way, the current problem with the author's book is that he failed to select a good audience. In my opinion, your approach is a feeling shared by both fantasy readers and game readers. The problem is that your previous chapters and introduction indicate that this is a DND article. You can't attract readers of game articles at all, and your subsequent game settings directly delete readers of fantasy articles. You are directly screening readers for yourself It's not so much that there is a problem with the author's plot, but that you didn't find a niche in the beginning. I said from the beginning that if there are players, it will definitely be better than the current situation. So I said you didn't find the right position from the beginning. If your classification is in a different world of games, it will definitely be better than now. But now your category is fantasy, and overall you are a bit disgusting.

I can't understand... A bloodline sorcerer actually needs a mouse to tell him that bloodline comes with inherited knowledge. . .

Don't say that Western fantasy can't have a Chinese name. Western games are so kneeling and licking China. There are also Chinese gods. There are still people kneeling on their knees and unable to stand up.

Would you rather he write a time travel story than write a story about a natural disaster?

Don't read it, the light novel tastes too spicy.

The protagonist is so good that he handles the most loot and gets very little. When you start fighting murlocs, get a staff.

Why don't you finish it as soon as possible? It's so annoying that you have to update it every week.

I searched around the Internet but couldn't find it. Does anyone know the source?(

What's the situation now? Is this book finished? Starting to update character cards

"I have played with guns on the throne of Khorne, drank soup at the cauldron of Nurgle, shared spoils in the house of Tzeentch, and sold songs in front of Slaanesh's bed! This is me, the founder of the empire! The slayer of orcs! The resister of demons, the emperor of mankind, Sigmar!" Sigmar introduced himself to the banquet with his warhammer, and by the way told all the guests how bad he was. "Fellow prophets, who can tell me the future destiny of the human empire! Can it suppress all races and be glorious forever?" The muscular man asked arrogantly. The prophet of Ulric the White Wolf came out first and said: "I see that the future of the empire will be filled with bald priests. They have scriptures in one hand and hammers in the other. They chant the name of Sigmar and brutally surround and suppress Ulric believers. After the civil war, the empire was destroyed." "Heresy! As a devout believer in Ulric, I don't believe your sowing discord!" Sigma was furious and smashed the White Wolf Prophet's head with a hammer. The Great Necromancer stood up again and said: "I saw countless warriors fighting with muskets and giant swords. Soldiers were cut down, priests were bewitched, and the empire was destroyed. Only the world of undead and bones will last forever." "Bastard! Humans will never accept a dead world!" Sigma smashed the bones of the Necromancer with another hammer. The rat prophet took a step forward, and the green crystal ball in his hand projected a picture of the bliss of the world: humans and rats coexist harmoniously, and the future will be prosperous; they provoke wars and sell military disasters, but criticize normal trade; they eat chicken and shoot each other in American style, but they are called They love life; their hands are full of blood, but they claim that they are the victims; they party together on the island, but claim to be human role models who take care of Luo Li... "This future seems pretty good. How can we realize it?" The big golden man asked humbly. "We lie, we cheat, we steal, and we have a course to teach these. With such continuous exploration and progress, the glory of the human empire will surely be realized." "What a wonderful future, I really want to see it with my own eyes." Sigma sighed happily. "Yes, when the empire is about to be destroyed and the last emperor, Karl Franz, dies in battle, you can be resurrected in his body and experience it all for yourself." ————I will use your comment area to promote it, and I wish the author more than 10,000 daily updates!

I didn't read it, I read a few comments and didn't really want to read it. I just want to ask what the author means by the sentence "I must write a novel that will make everyone mad" on the cover page?