The Bard Fantasizes Again

So far (Into the Wasteland) is undoubtedly a good book. The writing, plot arrangement, and character creation are all excellent. It is extremely satisfying for a fantasy fanatic like me. Many people in the discussion forum do not like the beginning of the book and think that the three golden chapters are not attractive enough. However, for the identity of the protagonist bard, it can cause conflicts and show the identity and ability of the protagonist. It is undoubtedly a qualified beginning. It may be slightly embarrassing in terms of the performance of the poem, but I personally think that the text cannot be perfect. The author has done his best to express the music, and the content of the poem is not the focus in the first place. It can be said that the flaws are not concealed The author has also put in a lot of effort in character creation. From the protagonist to the supporting role, his behavior can support a complete and self-consistent character image, rather than one set of appearances and another for the sake of shaping. Of course, there may be some characters that are not in line with the readers' ideas, including the protagonist's ideas, which may not be fully acceptable to some readers. But what is certain is that these characters and ideas are not to be unique and attract attention, but to serve the development of the plot and to be as consistent with realistic logic as possible. The rhythm of the plot is also very smooth. How to cause conflicts to advance the story, how to give the protagonist motivation to move forward, and how to create surprises to prevent the plot from being too dull. The author is thinking carefully. If you read carefully, you can also get a glimpse of some of the story framework in the author's mind. This may mean that the author has the ability to master long-term plots. For readers, this is also the best proof that the author can continue writing. Of course, for an online novel, it is also essential to have fun. Whether it is the protagonist's diary being revealed on a stone tablet, being observed by the Poets Academy, or saving villagers and adventurers in Xingmei Town and Longjin City, this is to some extent a manifestation of the saint in front of others. The author has mastered this most basic and reliable technique very well. At the same time, the protagonist's own torture can also be responded to in a reasonable and extraordinary way - succumb to the arrangement of fate, or succumb to the oppression of authority? The answer is neither. Rather than the established route, the protagonist chooses to go his own way. What's even more commendable is that all of this is based on the protagonist's own abilities and available resources, rather than deus ex machina or explosive seeds. I think it is enough to distinguish it from ordinary novice novels. Finally, I want to mention the emotional lines of this book. The author has made it clear that it is a harem novel and has written the emotional lines as well as possible. This is not an easy task. However, judging from the development of the two emotional lines that have appeared so far - especially the one with more of them - the author is not casual about the portrayal of emotions. He has not put aside the problem of character creation in order to write the emotional lines. At the same time, he can also consider the compatibility issue of how to open a harem. I think the follow-up content is also worth looking forward to. All in all, up to Chapter 232, this book is an excellent work and worth reading. I also hope that the author will have more confidence to continue writing after reading my evaluation.

Except for the first two or three chapters, which are a bit strange (you must stick to reading three chapters), the subsequent plot can be said to be smooth and smooth. The author's writing skills are also good, the lyrical points are not embarrassing, and the rhythm of the plot and the characters are well controlled! A rare masterpiece. What is impressive is that this is an author who "rarely knows what he wants to write and how to write it." The continuity of the plot can be said to surpass many fantasy books I have read so far. From what I've seen so far, this is a fantasy book that shouldn't be "buried".

I have read the latest chapter, and now I will briefly talk about my opinions: This book is definitely a good book for me. It almost perfectly fits my fantasy of the Western fantasy world. The bard Tang Qi in the book is also very interesting to me. I want to read the Western fantasy style. Book lovers, don't miss it (the following contains spoilers, please read with caution) The small stories nested between some of the big plots in the book are well written, Coupled with the appropriate description of the environment and psychology, it does not give people the feeling of watching a running account or pushing the past. The succession and transition of the plot are also very subtle, and the transition between plots is also just right. The perspective of the half-elf poet is directly interspersed in each major plot, showing Tang Qi's changes to the world and the poet academy from the perspective of others (some people may think this part of the plot is unnecessary, but really, without these transitional plots, people will gradually feel tired of the exciting adventure experience). It is very good. In addition, the plots of group portraits are also very well written. In this type of plots, it is not easy to grasp the proportion of scenes between the protagonist and the supporting characters, but the author did it - the disputes in Longjin City, the love and hatred in the vampire castle, the adventure in the wilderness, especially the last two plots, which are probably the second and third volumes in terms of volumes. They are really well written. The plot of the vampire also has a plot connection with the lycanthrope in Longjin City, which once again brings out the good and bad of the curse for the lycanthrope, and makes people realize more deeply that the sense of identity and belonging is the lifelong pursuit of the lycanthrope. There are also characterizations of priests and vampires that really make people feel that they are living characters, rather than "vassals" who just mindlessly obey the protagonist in some other books. In the adventure of the wilderness, the protagonist group experienced twists and turns, and finally discovered that the answer they had been looking for was hidden beside them! (Although I have lost my memory (laughs)) I haven't seen this kind of surprise plot setting for a long time, and I really miss it. Nowadays, novels are very homogeneous. In most of them, I can roughly guess what the plot will be like the moment the plot is laid. There is really no sense of surprise at all. Of course, this book is not without flaws, but this may vary from person to person. For me, like the initial stage of the plot, the plot of Paladin Dawn has no poisonous points, but some book friends think that what Chen Xi does is simply a virgin bitch. I can understand Chenxi, but that doesn't mean others can. As I said, understand and respect. At the same time, I also hope that book lovers can view the stories in the book rationally. No, I am off topic. In short, this book is a good book and worth reading carefully. At the end, I would also like to express my humble opinion and put forward some suggestions for modification. I hope the author can think about it: 1. I hope to slightly reduce the number of "dwarf jokes" that appear. Occasionally they are used as adjustments. It is okay to make fun of your companions, but frequent ridicule is not called ridicule, especially this kind of joke that is obviously disrespectful to others. 2. For the group plot, the proportion of the protagonist's plot in the latest volume is a bit too large, or in other words, the protagonist, as a bard, acts as a savior every time. However, as mentioned in the text, "The bard is an auxiliary. When the bard needs to step forward, the team is basically facing a desperate situation" (the original text forgot what it was, but that's what it means). In the latest chapter, the elf lady is obviously a high-level spell caster who has lived for a long time, but when faced with a life-and-death crisis, she can only put in a few oxygen bubbles to maintain the protagonist's "casting feasibility." Is this a bit too dependent on the protagonist? Of course, I can also think of ways to explain and patch it. For example, the elf lady was injured in the wilderness before, causing the wild warlock's spell to be unable to be released, but this cannot change one thing. The senior elf spellcaster who has lived for so long actually needs a bard to save his life. I am happy to see the ambiguous plot in it, but I still have to point out the shortcomings: don't start the "protagonist theory", author. I don't want to see my teammates with facial expressions😭 That's all I want to say. Admittedly, some of the plot is controversial, but this is a really good book. Finally, I wish all the book friends and authors who see this place a happy life (I almost forgot, the author will update soon! Then, please improve it!)

This book is based on the heart. The protagonist is indeed not a good person, and he saves people for the benefit. However, he does save many people. I think this is enough

Many female protagonists chased her 😍😍😍

The writing is quite good, although it's a little less physical than Mushrooms, but this writing style can't help but remind me of mystery and big eyes. But there is a big difference. The good thing is that many of the transitions are interesting. The bad thing is that I personally feel that the priority of the plot is not so perfect, which means that I can write less but write more. Overall, the flaws do not hide the good points, and it looks good. Come on!

Promise me! How about writing dwarf jokes for the rest of your life? If there are no dwarf jokes to watch! Wattasi!

Starting from the next chapter, I will try to tell a dwarf joke at the end of each chapter

Kobolds who eat human corpses can join the team. Chen Xi, you can join the team even if you kill people and sacrifice your health. Can you put aside these things for the sake of fighting power? I feel like the protagonist's outlook on life is also extremely distorted, and it's very uncomfortable to watch.

Alas, when I saw your book, I was reminded of a previous bard-type novel. It was originally quite good, but unfortunately the protagonist suddenly turned into some kind of warlock in the middle of the book, and the content had nothing to do with the bard anymore.

It is one of the best among all the Western fantasy I have watched recently. Although it is all common Western fantasy elements, it is really telling a story rather than an upgraded anecdote The protagonist's position as a bard is also unusual. Goldfinger can obtain rewards through adventures, including spell-like abilities and magical objects (currently the Friendship spell, Alertness feat, and Eye of Truth props have been obtained) From the tavern at the beginning to the kobold cave, from the mist forest to In the orc tribe, all the events are closely connected and interlocking, just like a tense and exciting movie. The characters are very three-dimensional and memorable. Whether it is Uncle Black Snake or the protagonist himself, the dialogue is very interesting. Even non-protagonists like Kuru and Xinxing can be portrayed very well because they have their own character thinking. I think this is the best thing written in this book. The readers and the protagonist are completely unpredictable about the next development of the plot. Like reality always comes unexpectedly When readers thought that the shoddy plan between the protagonist and Black Snake would succeed at the beginning, they did not expect that the plan failed before it started. This is very similar to real life, the plan never changes quickly, and Kulu's counterattack was beyond my expectation, but it is reasonable, because ordinary novels are rarely willing to give highlight moments to non-protagonists, and this novel gives a kobold the opportunity to counterattack, including the previous jackal and An Characters such as Card, Catherine and the lord's son all act according to their own character logic rather than the reader's wishful thinking. I look forward to more plots like this. This is an author who respects the characters and stories. At the same time, the novel's world view is gradually unfolding, including forgotten history, secrets of the desert, southern wars and gods. I hope the author can write unconventional stories, and I will be one of the many witnesses of the legendary bard in the future

Kobolds who eat human flesh can join the team. I understand that it is different species hunting each other. A witch who bewitched a necromancer to kill various human girls in order to resurrect herself, just to collect perfect body parts to form a glorious guide to "resurrection" her own body. What qualifications does a female paladin have to join the team? How can she help others better after being "resurrected"? This continent lacks your combat power to "help" others?

We should all learn from Chen Xi, who ruthlessly bewitched the Necromancer to kill people in order to resurrect him, and asked him to put the corpse together for me. Although I killed many people, injured and healed your teammates, and disfigured Catherine, all in all I am a good person😋👍

Question 1, will the protagonist's diary be spread out? Answer 1: The dean has temporarily blocked it because he cares about his reputation. There will be no negative impact in the short term. Question 2, why don't you fire off cannons as a bard? Answer 2. First of all, you must make sure that there is more than one female in the book who has feelings for the protagonist. Secondly, the author likes emotional firecrackers rather than mindless speculation. Question 3. The beginning is too slow and the poem is awkward? Answer 3: The slow start is to create a sense of atmosphere. Readers will find that no ink or foreshadowing in the first three chapters is wasted in the follow-up. This book is story-focused, so sometimes the slow pace is an inevitable trade-off. As for poetry, it is clearly stated in the book that this is a very simple piece of music. As a music tailor and a creator of prepared dishes, the protagonist can create this kind of music with ease. Moreover, it is prepared for civilians, and it does not require very good writing style. It just needs to be catchy, so when I wrote it, I only ensured that the text was smooth and rhymed. From beginning to end, everyone was shocked only by his daring to sing, not by how shocking the poem itself was, so I think there is nothing wrong with it and I won't change it. Question 4, why write about nobles and commoners? Answer 4. First of all, this is the atmosphere that is indispensable for medieval and Western fantasy themes. Secondly, it is also to increase the flavor of the adventure story. (The theme of this book is adventure. There may be a small amount of description of the so-called rich and poor, but the essence is to make the sense of adventure more important, and not to describe these social issues all the time) Question 5. Confusion about the characters and the adventure team. Answer 5. The specific ideas will be stated in the post, but please believe that the author will be as rational as possible in shaping each character. All kinds of different characters are designed to enrich the excitement of the whole story! 😢😢😢 Then I would like to thank you all for your support. It will be on the shelves soon. Please collect it, read it, monthly tickets and follow-up subscriptions. If you have any discussion or comments about the plot, you can feel free to say so. But don't curse, don't attack each other, don't criticize the author too harshly! ! ! Thank you to every reader for your support, thank you all! ! ! Love you! ! ! ! 😍😍😍

The same goes for I Am Not Goblin Slayer Next Door, and the same goes for this one. The neighbor said he was a mage, but this book said he was a bard. In fact, they are all magicians. They all signed contracts with the system. The system is their suzerain. As long as they complete the suzerain's tasks (kill monsters, gain reputation), they can be given spells 🙂

Even if the author is a DM, but he tricked a necromancer into helping him to deceive people into killing corpses, regardless of the deeds or the heart, how can you say that this is not a broken oath? . . This is not tarnishing the glory.

The bard's spellcasting is baffling. This profession has a trick, and it is reasonable to have up to a level three spell. Why do you have level nine spellcasting ability? Mages rely on learning, warlocks rely on blood, priests and druids rely on gods and nature. What does a bard rely on?

Chen Xi's character would be a hypocrite if interpreted in a Chinese way. One's own core interests are linked to superficial moral justice, and all good deeds are essentially performances aimed at earning reputation. And when morality is contrary to its core interests, it will use any means without hesitation. He is a moral performance artist and gives people a feeling of hypocrisy. To be honest, Chen Xi's character is more annoying than the character of a real villain like Hyena. But I would like to add that the book is indeed well written.

It's so strange. The author's description is very flavorful. The plot is not impeccable but at least it is smooth. Why are there so many people complaining about it? Has anyone been manipulated by capital?

It's not like you can decide the camp with your words. This behavior in the book is completely evil. If you want to write about the evil camp, just write openly and don't create some good camp. Although I have killed many people for myself, I think I am good 😅 It's funny to say that I am a good camp for a long time. I reluctantly accepted it when you said it was a mixed camp.

After Genghis Khan traveled to another world, he was considered by the dwarves as a wise king who did not kill prisoners because he still adhered to the concept of not killing those who were below the wheel In the dwarf country, fruit wine was far less popular than ale because the dwarves could not reach the fruit In the past, there was only one breast shield at most. It was not until the dwarves launched a war with other countries that leg guards were added Dwarf players like to choose loli characters when playing games, because this is the only one. Plant characters that are not as tall as them Dwarves say their bows can shoot two hundred paces Elves say their bows can shoot a hundred paces dragons say elves' bows have a longer range mind-reading monsters say no one is lying Dwarves have more famous scholars than humans Because dwarves are more likely to unlock achievements with a body of work Why do dwarves have technology so long before humans? Because compared to humans who can pick fruits by raising their hands Dwarves will discover gravity earlier Other races have legends of extraterrestrial masters, but only the dwarfs do not have this legend If you feel that you are useless You can think about the dwarves' leggings What is attacking the dwarf's knees? Never drink the mushroom soup cooked by dwarves Because after drinking it, you will not be able to tell whether it is the little man you saw when you were poisoned or the dwarf standing here in the first place Please pay attention to the gorgeous little houses on the streets of the royal city. Those are not doghouses, but houses customized by dwarves Don't worry that the dwarves will record you in the Book of Hatred Dwarves generally don't carry that thing Because they need to bring a Book of Hatred, a pen that can write, a bottle of ink and a ladder that can climb to the page Giants are all stupid figures in the story, but on the contrary Dwarves are all smart This is because dwarves are more likely to get advice from experts, while giants cannot find advice from experts The dwarves searched for a long time but could not find where the dwarf jokes spread The librarian said that he usually puts that thing on the third floor of the bookshelf A The adventurer learned how to hunt goblins from the dwarf master, but he found that this thing seemed more useful for hunting trolls Dwarves usually have two horn-shaped things on their hats, not to use the horns to gob people, but to prevent others from using them as stools to sit on their heads when drinking in the bar.

Put in some DND spells from time to time and evaluate them together.

Yes, there have been a lot of good-looking Western movies recently.

Maybe the author wanted to write something different, so he chose a kobold and a sinful paladin to join the protagonist group, but this writing method is actually half the effort with twice the result. I have never played a DND game, and I only have a general understanding of the world view, so this is the opinion of an ordinary reader outside the circle. It is a good thing that the author has the confidence to write a different story, and it is not a bad thing to use conventional popular writing methods. You think the important thing about this book is the storytelling. Choosing a protagonist group with mainstream values ​​​​will not destroy your storytelling. At most, some people will say it is a bit homogeneous, but no one will abandon the book because of it. Your current writing method is different, and it will poison a small number of people and make them abandon the book. I will not mention the two that have been written and hope to avoid it later. Of course there will be readers who will support you and say not to listen to opponents like me, but I think the author should consider it more comprehensively and try to take care of the perceptions of more readers without destroying the story you conceived. Moreover, this book should be a light-hearted adventure, so it should avoid controversial topics.

The author's writing style of writing the story is good, but the lyrics are really poor. I wanted to make some suggestions, but there are already 400 chapters in the game. The focus of songs and poems are completely different. Songs are more abstract, because the emotion is in the rhythm and melody itself. His lyrics often appear abstract and unclear in meaning when separated from the melody. If you only use words to express that this is a song, then you should study rap. In order to fill in more content words, rap will be more specific and does not rely on melody.

When I first started reading this book, I was put off n times by the beginning, but when I saw Long Niang (XP exerted her strength) and persisted, it really became more and more interesting the more I read. It gave me the same feeling as when I first watched Best Friend (referring to the enthusiasm in watching it). Although there are some flaws, the summary is that the flaws do not hide the good qualities. I heard that many settings are related to dnd. You can understand it even if you haven't seen dnd. It has a very pure Japanese-Western fantasy flavor. It is best to skip reading. If you are not interested, you can jump directly to the end of the paragraph. The author's rhythm is indeed a bit slow, and some people may find it boring. But the world view, characterization, and cool points are all good, but some of the protagonist's behaviors may not be very likable (he is a bard after all). It can be said to be the best Western fantasy novel I have read this year. Support the author, it's really fun to read it in one go. I hope to get to the Empire Chapter as soon as possible. This is a great point. If it is delayed any longer, it will make people feel boring.

After work, apart from Tomato Adventurer, I have read the best Western fantasy book, and I will not do it in vain😌

I'm talking about dnd. The dragon one and the goblin one are not like DND. The focus of the plot is how the protagonist becomes stronger. In essence, it is a traditional upgrade book about DND cheating. This is the one that pays attention to the plot itself If I hadn't voted for the cuttlefish in my brain, I would definitely give this book now and definitely next time 😜

Human, tiefling, halfling, hag, orc

I used to look for meal replacements in the Xia Tounan discussion forum next door from time to time, but after searching for a while I was not very satisfied. On the contrary, the starting point recommended similar books, and this book felt like the right one. See where it is currently on the shelves. I really like the author's writing style. The story also feels more like a running team. As a player who won 3 pits, I feel very friendly. Quan Ding supports it. Looking forward to the next performance. 🙂