Shinto: Beginning with the Imperial Conferment of Lord Huodexing

It reads smoothly, not bad. But Goldfinger may be a bit criticized. Also, the title of this book is really not good. I originally thought it was a cool fairy tale, but I didn't expect it to follow the traditional path of cultivating immortals.

There are academic literature references, feel free to read 🙂

The plot is smooth, has flaws, but is not toxic, and can be read in one go. Goldfinger has its flaws, but except for the first three chapters, there is no mention of Goldfinger in the rest, so it does not hinder reading. The chapter about the little junior sister's birthday is good and very touching. But the two chapters on the Tao of the Three Meridians Dharma Conference really embarrassed me. It's not that the author is not good at writing, but that he chose the wrong direction. There is no need to forcefully discuss the Tao to increase the enjoyment. I suggest you skip it when reading. To sum up, it can be regarded as half fairy grass and half food. It is much better than many family novels and mortal novels on the market today.

As a Sichuanese, I laughed when I saw the state of the fetal god

Readers, if you keep raising books, the seedlings will die😭

Bai Heng

Zhao Qingwu

The golden finger at the beginning was of no use, so the little cat was a bit weak at the beginning, and there was no drama later. Moreover, the protagonist was given a fairy sword, immortal inheritance and so on. It was too messy.

If you cut too fast, almost nothing you want to write will come out. If you are too anxious about the results, you may never get the results if you keep worrying.

What about the other gods written about?

The protagonist becomes an orphan in this way 666

The writing is still very good, but I still need to speed up the pace of the realm. After all, you still have to write about the fairyland.