Hong Kong Crossover: I Seek Eternal Life

The most feared thing in current fan fiction is eunuchs. The protagonist travels to the world of cultivating immortals, thinking about nothing but immortality and giving up on love and sex. Reject parents. From an ordinary person to a stone without emotions and desires, it is just a matter of time travel. The sense of fragmentation is extremely severe. When I read your profile, I don't think about anything but immortality. Personally, I think you practice a kind of fossil technique. Turn directly into a stone. Absolute immortality. Simple and efficient.

After reading more than ten chapters, it's so boring, as if the author wants to teach you to be a teacher. Why do you do this? Do this? Why? Nagging, nagging, oh, my brain hurts when I see a 2,000-word piece of sermon excluding the 1,500-word sermon. There is not much left. You are like this even if you don't put it on the shelves. Is it okay if you put it on the shelves?

Don't explain so much. A large paragraph in one chapter explains why the protagonist or supporting character does such a thing, what is the meaning of doing so, and what are the benefits. There is really no need to explain that much.

Actually, it's probably okay, but I'm shaking so much that I don't want to look at it.

If I want to say something, I'm afraid it will be too dirty, but if I don't say it, I'll feel too wronged. The author's novel is not good

When writing a novel, write it well. Don't write a few sentences of plot and write a lot of inner secrets. If you want to write about the protagonist's egotism, you can implement it from action through creative contradictions, instead of letting a 12-year-old Le Huizhen see the egotistical tyranny hidden under the calm protagonist when she works in the newspaper office. There are at least seven or eight poisonous points in this paragraph. What do people think?

The most stupid author is to constantly remind readers that you are just reading a novel, a made-up novel.

Brother, are you a little self-righteous? You wrote an undercover novel just after being expelled from school. Do you really not regard the police as a public servant? If someone tries to mess with you, your family will be ruined. And why do you think you can make money by writing novels? Really self-righteous

It's hard to describe the writing style, it's all extraordinary, although there isn't much, but it always emphasizes and repeats connections, no problem, just a few chapters are always about connections, connections, connections, connections, and then connections, connections, connections, connections, I'm a little speechless.

The creative introduction to this book is so well written, but the content is so different. I am extremely disappointed.