
Xiao Wei of Mortals Cultivating Immortality
凡人修仙之萧诧
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 706k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Stats
0Monthly votes
3.9kRecommends
10.4kFans
311Chapters
Tags
Synopsis
Reader comments
Readers also read
Immortal Travel
Guixuxuanji
Your Magic Weapon Version Is Too Low!
Xuanjun
Never Walk Alone!
Mortal: Start from the Yellow Maple Valley Medicine Garden
People Are in Yellow Maple Valley, and Opportunity Information Is Refreshed Every Day!
Daming: Have I Become Wanli's Portable Grandfather?
I Am Drawing a Hot-Blooded Episode in the Zhiyu Episode!
I'm in Yellow Maple Valley, and I Have a Monster Clone!
Mortal: I Am Zhang Tie, a Man of Enlightenment and Cultivation of Immortality
Mortals Cultivate Immortality, I Have a Cave with Me
Immortal Road Zongheng
What are you writing about? You don't want to give everything to Han Li. You are just like the original. Extremely speechless! ! !
What should I say? Don't give in too much. It's you who gives in all the time. You are playing the role of the old devil. I feel like you are too timid and explain too much.
Isn't this a dog-licking article? If you don't dare to do this or that, then you might as well just wipe your neck and forget about it. What's the point of traveling through time? 😅Watching the original novel is not as enjoyable as yours
Except that the little green bottle of cause and effect is too big, there are no other problems. You can take it, but don't give everything to Han Li! This makes the protagonist look stupid. Cultivation of immortality means having clear thoughts. You can do this or that. It is impossible to pass the inner demon barrier of transforming into a god.
How should I put it, is Xiao Zui who does not practice the demonic or ghost ways still Xiao Zui? It would be better to be reborn as another person without even starting the kill.
Han Li actually has no intention of getting the Void Heaven Cauldron. As long as you are tougher, Han Li will definitely give up. In the original work, Xiao Zui was playing with fire and burned himself, and Han Li's evil-fighting divine thunder was almost exhausted.
The main reason is that the protagonist doesn't have any golden fingers. He can just have a small golden finger. He doesn't necessarily always want to follow Han Li to make good relationship deals. I think the previous demon's oath is a bit too much. Even if it is given a time limit, for example, he will not be an enemy of Han Li for 500 years.
The author didn't use many tricks in the fight, and there was no need to write a lot of psychological descriptions. He just wrote a sentence about the divine master surnamed Zhong, who looked at him once, vomited blood, and then ran away. There was no need to write that long paragraph of psychological descriptions.
Fans need to have fun
Nowadays, readers are very picky, especially when it comes to your writing style of eunuch cultivation flow. Readers have no loyalty, and they will leave immediately if they don't like it.
No heroine, no harem? Guess why I look for fans to watch 😊
If you make friends with Han Li, you won't lick him so humbly. Why can't they be exchanged equally?
Curious to know who is the audience for this book? Is this a book written for love?
The thighs can be hugged without licking the dog.
Not bad! I personally think the author handled it well. After all, it is difficult to reach a higher realm by yourself when your lifespan is short. You can only take shortcuts. The shortcut in the mortal world is Han Laomo. In order to live forever, you will not be miserable! Of course, it would be even better if you have a Taoist companion. Just one person is enough, after all, being alone is still too lonely. I estimate that Jiyin has dark spiritual roots or is suitable for the magic method. The righteous method is probably difficult enough, but it will be different after taking the body. It is better to be cautious when switching attack methods! After all, life is running out, so we can only start after breaking through to the realm of overhaul.
The first few chapters are aggrieved and show kindness without any checks and balances. Let's cut it.
There is no heroine. Should Han Li kill the author? Does the author want to have sex with Han Tianzun? In the end, people in Korea must think this way. Old Demon Han is so celibate and has a Taoist companion. You are a demon cultivator who lives forever and is a eunuch. What do you want to do? 🤭
Finally updated, did you have fun during the seven days of National Day? The author is so grateful
The battle is poorly written, with almost no content.
Every fight is finished in half a chapter. It is a brief description without any sense of picture.
I just want to ask where the original Xuan Gu went?
I think it's okay, there's nothing wrong with licking Han Li.
Updates will be interrupted for seven days during the National Day. Although there will be two updates every day on the 8th and 9th, it seems that there is a loss of readers. No updates today
Didn't Jie Yuanying survive the thunder tribulation?
Well written, good, keep updating
Water
I have been working on various narrations and explanations, writing the script!