Yoshimune's Blessing

I don't know why, but my favorite is the Demon King Brave book.

The amount of exposure is too little. Readers of old books have not converted much. The title and introduction of the book are really average.

The beginning of the book is very confusing. I didn't understand what it was going to say in the first thirty chapters. It kept giving me mysteries and explaining the world view. It is recommended to skip it. I started to decipher it when I became the village chief. Like the book of the Demon King, it is about a civilized society going through special turmoil and moving towards different choices and extremes. , Just like the people in the previous book, whether they are elves, dragons, orcs or demons, they are all human beings. In this era, there are also transformed humans, superhuman beings, and technological armors. The human empire is more like a lost empire, and there is a huge disaster about to happen. The orcs are also a compromise made by human beings in order to survive. I feel like the Brave book is still better. Come back, Tumbling Potato🥔

I don't understand the meaning of the previous paragraph about the true and false young master. If I hadn't read the author's other books, I would have passed it when I saw that paragraph.

I voted for a monthly ticket, for no other reason than that I suddenly remembered the author's book The Demon King and the Brave, and I really enjoyed reading it.

No, buddy, the subject matter is too unpopular, and few people will read it. I might as well write another book about the world of an RPG game similar to Demon King. This book won't make any money. Yang Yu was born at the wrong time. If he writes it now, it will really become popular.

I feel like there are so few people reading this book. Is it an illusion?

I have read more than 40 chapters, and the story is quite interesting, with a few shortcomings The following is only my personal opinion and does not necessarily represent the majority of readers. 1 There are too many mysteries at the beginning, but no answers, which makes people confused. If I hadn't read the author's previous works, I might have given up at the beginning. It can be said that from Chapter 2 to the protagonist. It was not as interesting as Chapter 1 before being appointed by the old village chief to become the village chief. 2 System, it's not that the system is bad, but that the system is anthropomorphic, and many of the protagonist's motivations are completely determined by the system, which makes it seem very random, and it feels like the system is completely pushing the plot. 3 There are many characters in the beginning, and the relationships are relatively complicated, but they have no characteristics. I feel like I can't remember them, so I just remember the main character, the leader of Matsutake Coral Village. I can't remember the others, and I don't know any relationships. 4 There is a story, but it is relatively bland and there are no emotional fluctuations. Some places are quite interesting, and some places are really unexpected, such as when the protagonist transforms and when he parachute truffles, but because there are too many mysteries before, or it is always leading to settings and mysteries, this kind of thing is like a new rule or mystery being added, it will not directly stimulate emotions, and reading it directly feels like a jump, that is, it suddenly transformed, and there was no foreshadowing at all before. For example, if I change the previous paragraph, after the protagonist enters the village, for some reason, he first sees the village chief's manual. Then the protagonist does not understand it at this time. He does not know that people can transform into beasts, but he at least has a guess, or at this time, he can reveal the mystery that the clawed beast is transformed from a human. Then when the bear comes, he transforms into a crocodile, which may make the impression much better. 5. The author created his own worldview, but there is no sense of atmosphere. I don't know how to describe this either. Maybe it's because of the description of the environment, maybe it's just a test of skill, for example, the weird fairy, right at the beginning. You can feel the medicinal materials, alchemy, Danyang Zi, and the cave. You can feel the weird atmosphere of cultivating immortals. For example, at the beginning of The Lord of Best Friends, you immediately know that it is the steam age. The village at the beginning of the book is from the primitive era (not sure). For example, people wear animal skins and animal teeth, but they also have uniform gray clothes and white clothes. And the beginning. In the primitive era, it should have been weathered. Coral described him as being very young, but he had three sons who could go out hunting at that age. Although he may have supernatural powers, it is more fragmented, and the writing style is relatively relaxed. The cruelty of survival will not be felt when the bear kills a relative later. Suggestions 1 For example, the gray clothes and white clothes in the article can be directly said to be the old village chief's faction, and the acting village chief's faction. This way the relationships between the characters are clearly distinguished. It's enough to mention the characteristics of their costumes, but it's hard to tell the difference between the gray-clothed faction and the white-clothed faction. There are many other aspects, such as the three sons of Coral. In the first forty chapters, only the youngest one appears more often, but it is introduced in more detail. One is extremely powerful, the other is a bow-drawer, and I forgot who joined the gray or white clothes, and the other joined the other for some reason. I initially thought it was a foreshadowing, but then I saw more than 40 chapters, and these two people did not appear much. For the first two sons, it is enough to mention them in one sentence, so it is better to explain the impression when they appear. Originally, I couldn't remember the people before, but it turned out that these two had special names, so I remembered them, but they didn't appear for a long time. This kind of comparison details affects reading in many places. 2 The shaping of the worldview, although I know the author has his own ideas in this regard, I think. There are just over 40 pictures, and there is too little information about the world that can be known in the front. Maybe many readers will abandon it if they can't understand it. If the author opens the next book, the suggestion is not to be so Riddler in the front. Even if it is a Riddler, it is better to solve some puzzles. After solving a puzzle, it turns out that there are puzzles behind the answer, instead of popping up one after another. The previous one is not solved, and the following one comes again. The look and feel will be much better. 3 I suggest the author read more popular novels. I think the author is very talented and the book is very interesting, but it is relatively dull. It may be a problem of rhythm or description. When the protagonist encounters danger, he does not feel a sense of crisis, as if he will definitely do it. In the early chapters, I personally think that the main reason is that its system can communicate and help him, and then he solves the danger, so there is no sense of satisfaction. Moreover, some of the author's plots are relatively good, but they evoke few emotions. For example, the sense of crisis, the mysterious recovery, and the scene where Yang Jian meets the ghost knocking on the door at the beginning are very impressive. On the one hand, his rhythm is very good. He first knows about this thing, and then there is an accident in the middle. Finally, he cracks the rules of killing, solves the problem and gains strength. It is very satisfying. The description of the environment is also very vivid. Anyway, I really got goosebumps when the ghost appeared. I hope to continue to see your works. Come on, author. I hope to continue to see your works, come on, author.

It starts well... It's simple and rough... It'll be okay if the eggplant comes slowly, we have the patience to watch 😐😐😐

Come on eggplant!