The Profound Mirror: Making Hanqi Great Again

I recommend changing the female lead, because the talisman seed is essentially a contracted beast with a built-in camera. Hopefully, this book won't be ruined by a potential cuckoldry plot.

At the beginning, Tian Su was in a hurry to start a relationship with Li Qinghong, which made me a little confused.

A high cultivation level and sufficient sword intent are sufficient for combat power. The most crucial point is how to prevent the powerful from using this information for personal gain or creating unnecessary trouble. After obtaining the remaining positions, how should the achievements of the Cold Qi Dao Embryo be managed? How should the Yin-Seeking Dao Theory be implemented? How should the Yang-Seeking achievements be set up?

Have you ever considered that you could either directly write that you're a member of the Li family or that you're an outsider? Then you describe Tian Su as someone who acts like a normal person, and then suddenly Tian Su becomes incredibly inexplicable.

Why would they choose Li Qinghong as the female lead? The life of the talisman seed is in the turtle's hands, and the talisman seed has no secrets to the turtle. Wouldn't the female lead just become a surveillance device for the turtle to monitor the protagonist?

Choosing Li Qinghong as the female lead is worse than choosing Tinglan. Everything about Fu Zhongzi is controlled by the 🐢 (a mythical creature), and the protagonist will eventually be devoured by the 🐢.

Are you serious about your second picture? What do you mean by frivolous and lecherous? Is it really necessary to fawn over the Li family and Lu Jiangxian like this?

The beginning is filled with too much romance, and the protagonist is in a hurry to make contact with the Li family right after transmigrating, which feels awkward.

Although she's naturally beautiful, she becomes too overly familiar and obsequious after meeting people, which negatively impacts the viewing experience. Her feelings also seem to develop inexplicably. If this isn't her strength, the author should play to her strengths and avoid her weaknesses.

The Qi of Suspension brings calamity, tribulation, and obstruction of the Dao. By borrowing the supernatural powers of the Dao, through the three cold and two Suspension, the calamity and tribulation symbolize the amplification of the calamity of the cold Qi.