Devil's Bible

My family will not be weaker than Lu Xing

Overall, I prefer it. The settings of the world, monsters and power system are quite good, the characters are well described, and the plot is attractive. But there is a huge shortcoming, which is that the plug-ins are too flashy. The system prompts you to write the text for each feature, next to the author. Bai explains it once, and the protagonist talks to himself again, and a chapter almost passes like this (and I still can't understand it). Then after a few chapters, I get new features and try it again. The good story content is diluted, and I can't tell whether I am reading the story or the setting collection! In addition, I feel that the author has not completely come out from science fiction. The characters in the story are all Western fantasy, but the tone of part of the narration is very science fiction. Especially in one chapter, it is very funny to see the explanation using black box and white box. If the story can be made more concise later, the proportion of story can be increased, and the proportion of explanation and soliloquy can be reduced, it should be more watchable.

I'll go first. Xu Ming really can't write books. The worse he writes, the worse he gets. He's just rubbish. I hope this book can be written better🙏!

Have you ever been a devil? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

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As long as you can still write a Negri, I will give you a monthly pass

1. "The Soul of Negri" Needless to say a masterpiece, praising the God of supreme enterprising 2. "Chapter of the Old Days" It is a masterpiece with a Cthulhu background. It is in the same category as the starting point and belongs to the best friends. It can sit on the same table as the Mysterious Earth Sea and After Sleeping. Each has its own merits 3. "The Crown of Souls" is a bonus, and the furry 🐺 people also poked me very much 4. "Lord of Souls" may be ranked higher by people who like it. The real plot is intertwined with the nihilistic soul, showing the evil incisively and vividly 5. "Evil" I am currently reading "The Magic Bible", and this ranking is tentatively decided 6. "Mirror of Eternity" ignores the inconsistency in the early stage and the confusion in the later stage. Some of the settings in the middle period can also make people's eyes shine 7. "Death Compensation" has redundant settings, which increases the reading burden and is really unreadable 8. "I went crazy and became the creator" is the most popular book and needs no introduction.

It's not a shabby job to make money. As a leading author in this genre, if you don't write two more books while you're young, how can you make money for retirement? How about writing a dream-chasing article when you have financial freedom in the future? Come on!

Take a look. In the past, each book was basically worse than the other. I hope the author can make a good change.

This author is really sad. I started paying attention to it a long time ago. After writing for so many years, I don't even know what basic readers want to read.

I was in the third grade of junior high school, and Crown of Souls really amazed me. If you had that quality, I would order all of this book (I had no money at the time, so I read a pirated copy). PS: I really recommend Crown of Souls. The setting of sin and God is so good.

If you have the perseverance of Mr. Nemes to teach a little devil, you will succeed in anything you do.

The creativity is very good, the pacing and plot are all very slow. The first part is good, but then it starts to slow down in the middle. Sometimes it struggles for a while, and then becomes slow again.

Hey, I thought this book was about the chaotic and evil appearance of demons who ascended levels, made sacrifices, traveled through planes, pulled legions, threw themselves into the abyss, and attacked the world. After reading 100 chapters, I didn't feel anything. There was no shadow of legions, planes, and abyss. It didn't have the chaotic and evil appearance that demons should have. It was almost like neutral chaos.

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The older the ancient gods are, the more powerful they are, and the older the author's books are, the more beautiful they are.

The original picture is from the game "Infinite Lost" Ipasia

Although the character setting overlaps with the previous books, it at least created a good sense of expectation and caught my attention. The previous Death Compensation was clicked in and out several times, and I could not put it down after reading more than a hundred chapters. This one has been reading to the latest chapters, and I have finally started to make progress. Although I still like to open up complex ideas as always, it is much better than Death Compensation and the explanations of Che Luan.

I have read many books by the author, Chapters of the Old Days, Soul of Negri, Realm of Eternity, Crown of Souls, Death Indemnity, and I can't stand it. The Creator feels that the protagonist has strayed away My biggest personal feeling when the author writes here is that the author has lost the story that attracted me the most before. My two favorite books by the author are Chapters of the Old Days and Soul of Negri. The previous books were twisted worlds, twisted individuals, and twisted stories. In the darkness and distortion, the reflection And blooming with extraordinary spirituality Now I feel that the author has lost the spirituality he once had. The book is full of settings and water injection, and has lost the carving of the characters and stories. The characters have lost their aura, the stories have lost their interest, and they are tasteless The characters in the previous books were all vivid and twisted, but they twisted their own souls. Now the character creation has become dull, and the resulting stories have lost their meaning.

Author, you seem to be following the same old path as Crown of the Soul, but this book didn't look good to me. It's indeed not good-looking. To me, it's not as good as the old chapters.

A god-level start, which introduces the world view and shapes the characters, making readers enjoy the game and look forward to the follow-up. The city chapter is a continuation of the previous chapter. The protagonist's power and rights are further developed, and the interaction with other characters is also very interesting. Destiny chapter: After finishing it, all the interesting supporting characters + the disguise of the protagonist are tied together to set off fireworks. The fireworks are beautiful and it is very exciting to watch. What next? What should I write next? I just gave up on the Destiny Chapter. The story was no longer interesting. The protagonist's disguised development (identity and rights), interesting supporting characters, and interesting settings that I expected were all burned up by the Destiny Chapter After that, it was just the usual routine of changing identities and maps, and writing a bunch of new settings and new characters. Can it really compare to the perfect start before? What I regret most is the female knight with a righteous heart. She may be corrupted and used by the protagonist, but the author chose to set off fireworks. Isn't it fun to play with rules and precepts? Why is it the most direct decisive battle in the end? Oh, it's really a pity

It has 1.72 Million words and only 303 comments. Come on, actually you can learn what that one is called, Wen Chaogong. Your book "The Infinity of Heavens" is very well written, and it's also the kind of story where the protagonist becomes like an unknown person. But you have your own rhythm, come on

I thought this introduction was similar to Negri's, but it turned out that it felt like taking over a human body directly. It felt like an alien being turned into a human being, or a harem being a eunuch.

Xin Gua is indeed interesting, I hope Xu Ming sticks to his basic base

Every chapter explains the setting, it's hard to read

There are two identities at the beginning. You should explain that one is the devil and the other is the body of the person who took the body. Then you should also mention that this identity is the ability of the godhead. If you just throw it out without saying anything, it will be a bit unclear. At first, I thought that identity or something was the one of the protagonist who took the body. I have a dual identity, and it has nothing to do with being a demon. Is there any other discipline knight, main ring or secondary ring? Is this the ability of the godhead or the ability to become a discipline knight? 😥😥😥😥 And there can be a panel to list the abilities.

Finished spreading flowers, looking forward to the next one

I have subscribed to Chapter 712, which means I have subscribed to 70% of this book. I will read the free version later because I think it is not worth subscribing. From the moment I suddenly faced the Sun God, I felt that the rhythm was broken and it didn't look good. (Currently, the author has ordered four books: "Chapter of the Old Days", "Soul of Negri", "Mirror of Eternity" and "Crown of the Soul")

Finished with flowers😁

Let's take a break after you're done.