
Mirror of Eternity
永续之镜
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Modern Magic
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I've basically seen them all
Pure Dark Wind, Live for Your True Self, Create Immortal Faith
Follow the direction you want to grow and grow into what you want. When you come across a book you like, please give it a heart. Maybe this will give your favorite author more motivation? The book list is biased toward self-awareness and interests first. If there are novels that are not dark or completed, they will be marked in advance. Since there are few purely dark novels, some books with dark potential and some entertainment literature will be added. Eternal life, endless power, never stop
Dark, Murderous, No Heroine
I have read or am currently reading both new and old books, so it's a record! How dark is this book? Normal (not holy) Kill decisively darkness Very dark
A Classic Novel with a Strong Authorial Style
They are all books that I feel are pretty good after reading them. Basically, I started with the lowest level of food.
Infinite Flow. Intellectual Flow
The main recommendation is reasonable logic, rational flow, and unlimited flow.
All Heavens Unlimited Streaming + Long Commentary List
1 Mainly recommends Zhutian Infinite Streaming, dark style serial works and some high-quality completed works. 2. Long reviews will be updated from time to time and some dead eunuchs will be killed. 3. I will regularly recommend a work by an advertising writer every week. After all, it is not easy for newcomers to write a book. If I have time, I will read the long review. It is best to have more than 200,000 words. If I find a eunuch, I will kill it immediately. 4 The content of the long revi
Unlimited Streaming of the Mastermind Behind the Scenes
Mainly recommend some Multiple worldviews, unlimited streaming, behind-the-scenes streaming, imaginative writing, magic-heavy writing A few interesting other genres It's just that there's a bit too much pigeon spirit in it๛ก(ー̀ωー́ก)
Good Writing and Good Plot Book
It must be good writing and good plot
Dream Tower
Mainly, they are books that I think have good plots. I have been following them recently or have read them, such as YY Rejection Stallion, and I am not a novice. To me, each novel is like a big dream, and it is interesting to make the dream more beautiful and exciting, right?
🙅👩👩👦👦🤷Innovation and Eunuchs
Most of them don't have heroines! ! ! ! ! Most of the books I took in were eunuchs. . I personally recommend a good old book. Gu Zhenren, The Age of Wilderness, Swallowing the Starry Sky, Heavy Trucks and Chariots in the End of the World Eunuch List "One Piece: Everything Store" took a day off that couldn't be passed "The Gods of Death" The Eunuch in Silence The inexplicable eunuch in "Plunder in the World" "The Invincible King of Cheats" is too invincible and a eunuch "The Father of Goldfinger
Interesting and Unconventional.
𓀀𓀁𓀂𓀃𓀄𓀅𓀆𓀇𓀈𓀉𓀊𓀋𓀌𓀍𓀎 𓀏𓀐𓀑𓀒𓀓𓀔𓀕𓀖𓀗𓀘𓀙𓀚𓀛𓀜𓀝𓀞 𓀟𓀠𓀡𓀢𓀣𓀤𓀥𓀦𓀧𓀨𓀩𓀪𓀫𓀬𓀻 𓀼𓀽𓀾𓀿𓁀𓁁𓁂𓁃𓁄𓁅𓁆𓁇𓁈𓁉𓀀𓀁 𓀂𓀃𓀄𓀅𓀆𓀇𓀈𓀉𓀊𓀋𓀌𓀍𓀎𓀏𓀐 𓀑𓀒𓀓𓀔𓀕𓀖𓀗𓀘𓀙𓀚𓀛𓀜𓀝𓀞𓀟𓀠 𓀡𓀢𓀣𓀤𓀥𓀦𓀧𓀨𓀩𓀪𓀫𓀬𓀻𓀼𓀽𓀾 𓀿𓁀𓁁𓁂𓁃𓁄𓁅𓁆𓁇𓁈𓁉𓀀𓀁𓀂𓀃𓀄 𓀅𓀆𓀇𓀈𓀉𓀊𓀋𓀌𓀍𓀎𓀏𓀐𓀑𓀒𓀓 𓀔𓀕𓀖𓀗𓀘𓀙𓀚𓀛𓀜𓀝𓀞𓀟𓀠𓀡𓀢𓀣 𓀤𓀥𓀦𓀧𓀨𓀩𓀪𓀫𓀬𓀻𓀼𓀽𓀾𓀿𓁀 𓁁𓁂𓁃𓁄𓁅𓁆𓁇𓁈𓁉𓀀𓀁𓀂𓀃𓀄𓀅𓀆 𓀇𓀈𓀉𓀊𓀋𓀌𓀍𓀎𓀏𓀐𓀑𓀒𓀓𓀔𓀕 𓀖𓀗𓀘𓀙𓀚𓀛𓀜𓀝𓀞𓀟𓀠𓀡𓀢𓀣𓀤𓀥 𓀦𓀧𓀨𓀩𓀪𓀫𓀬𓀻𓀼𓀽𓀾𓀿𓁀𓁁𓁂𓁃 𓁄𓁅𓁆𓁇𓁈𓁉𓀀𓀁𓀂𓀃𓀄𓀅𓀆𓀇𓀈𓀉
No Cp/dark Flow/single CP 1. Comprehensive
No CP/Single CP/Dark Flow 1. Comprehensive (except science fiction) The science fiction category is in 2, because there is no room for it due to quantity restrictions.
Epic Magic Classic Book List
I have always liked the epic stories of Western fantasy, so I made a list of books about this kind of books. Those who are interested can collect them and discuss them together. 😁
Personally I Feel Pretty Good
From weak to strong, never stop
Being Serialized
Most of the books I read are fantasy wizards, infinite flow, fantasy, and fairy tales. Most of the books I recommend now are seedlings. I hope book friends with similar tastes can recommend their favorite books. Several of the new books I had bought were discontinued, I feel so helpless. ╮(╯_╰)╭It can only be cleared. Writing novels is like this these days. It is not easy. I hope those authors can have a better future. My favorite authors include: Wen Chao Gong, Jing Ke Shou, Get Out, Bear Wolf
Simply Read a Book, Simply Recommend a Book.
It is biased to judge whether a book is good or not based on a single person's opinion. Over the years, I have come across many books that gave me great hope, only to be disappointed. These are all books that I consider to be good books, and I would like to introduce them to you. You can judge whether they are good or not.
"The Choice of Steins; Gate"
[Subjective evaluation, no false exaggeration, no deliberate derogation. I am only responsible for giving my opinion. It is up to you to decide whether you agree or not. Mainly includes fantasy seedlings + two-dimensional seedlings (except for fans) and all kinds of seedlings with great imagination. Excellent works that I like, am following, and have a lot of words will also be included. They are all good articles with guaranteed quality. When you see them, don't hesitate to click in and follow
Open the Hidden Window of Your Imagination, and a Fantastic and Magnificent World Is Right in Front of You.
Complicated place names and difficult-to-remember names of people? This is the appearance. When you go deep into the grand world carefully compiled and designed by the author, nothing is a problem. You only need to follow the protagonist's footsteps and experience it with your heart. The endlessly memorable epic charm and touching story will fill your heart and bring you a strange experience that is unmatched by other types of novels. ――――――――――――――――― It mainly promotes new books, and some well
Some Seedlings
As an old bookworm, I collected some seedlings and kept them on the book list first so as not to forget them.
The Long Night Is Just Books
I'm really angry. Even if the book is lost, why are my comments gone? There are really few books that I can keep following! Reading slowly while drunk. It's already midnight. Are you lonely and bored, but still unwilling to fall asleep? Find a novel and savor this loneliness. Of course, you won't be lonely if you have a book. P. S. I strongly recommend "Ace Censor" to be fun and entertaining. Comics It's been a long time since I've promoted a book, so I'll take advantage of the activity to take
Zjz's Book List
Personal book list, take care of your own taste
╭(°A°`)╮fried Chicken Offal's Personal Book List
Just put some of the books I'm currently following.
Because of You, I Fall in Love with Qidian
Life is already so poor and difficult, why waste money reading idiotic articles! There are always a few books that I would rather stay up late to finish reading. Everyone has different standards and pursuits of books. I just want to quietly recommend the good books I have read. After all, I am just a salted fish who reads silently... Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh books? I'm so exhausted! ! !
Thousands of Sails Have Passed but I Am Still Young
Highly recommended: Fantasy "Gu Zhenren" "I Seize the Body of the Demon Emperor" Military: "The Spy of the Republic of China" (renamed "The Spy") Second dimension: Naruto fanfic: "Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi" HP fan "Harry Potter: Born to be a Villain" Pokémon Fan "Survival in the Cracks of the Elf World" Martial arts: "The Reborn Demon Cult Leader" (renamed "Meet the Leader") Xiewangyu's book list, see above
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Finished spreading flowers!
The story of Lu Laosi is over. Although he does not have the illness of Lu Laosi, the legend of Lu Laoer, and the passion of Wang Laosan... But he has his persistence until he becomes him. It can be seen that Ge Ge himself is also trying to innovate. The character of Lu Laosi, as the protagonist, is no longer sick (traditional entertainment)... But has become detached...? It started out a bit like a meta novel, with the protagonist breaking the fourth wall from time to time - until he had to abandon his humanity. Divinity is the alienation of human nature; the moment Lu Laosi chose not to be a human being, he lost empathy with us "readers"... And then he lost the ability to break the fourth wall. Thinking about it this way, I can't help but feel a little sad. Lu Laosi persisted until he had to give up his persistence and instead pursue the power that only surfaced on the surface of the author's words. In this way, He is destined to be unable to transcend the author's pen and become a free person who will never be mentioned again. The ending also shows that this is a failed experiment. Not only for the alien gods in the previous work, but even for the author, this book was not that successful. But at least, thank you to the author for persisting in writing. After writing several books by the author, it can be said that the world view is the same. If you want to sum up the spirit of the whole book in one word, "Chapter of the Old Days" is struggle, "The Soul of Negri" is progress, and this "Mirror of Eternity" is probably... Perseverance. Above. I also wish that the author and all book friends can stick to what they pursue, and may you always walk on the right path (cross words
I hope Xu Mingda's next book will be Dark Flow
I feel that the character and values of the protagonist in Cthulhu-oriented novels should be reflected more by events and interactions with others, rather than talking to themselves about how bright they are and that they are not a purely good person. It's really annoying to have to stress it over and over again when making decisions. The novel is so long, there is no need to rush to forcefully indoctrinate readers. Wouldn't it be more interesting to unfold it slowly? The pronunciation can be more refined. If you want to improve the number of words, just add some daily information after the survey is completed. Don't lower the reading experience just for the sake of a few more words.
Like JOJO, it is also an anatomy of human nature
I have read all the novels written by Xu Ming except for the first one. The most touching thing among them is the supporting characters in the book. Each supporting character not only exists for the protagonist, they also have their own value and reason for existence. They may be weak or mediocre. (Relative to the protagonist) But when facing danger, they reveal not only their stories but also their golden spirit like gold (I always feel that Xu Ming has something to do with the old thief Araki). The hymn to mankind is a hymn to courage. I love you.
It feels like there is a direct disconnect between the story and the story, as if there are missing chapters in the middle, which is very uncomfortable to watch.
"Debut List"——Lu Ye
Lu Yu, the boss of Lu, had just started his business, but Zhongdao collapsed. Now Xu Ming is the third book, and the writing is exhausted. This is a time when the survival of this sincerity is in danger. However, the master of women's clothing is unremitting on the inside, and the master of enterprising forgets himself outside. This is the special experience of Chai Lu boss, and he wants to repay Xu Ming. Cheng Yi votes for recommendations and monthly votes, in order to honor the legacy of the boss of Lu and the enterprising spirit of Negri. It is not appropriate to read books for free, which will cause suffering to the author and lead to rampant piracy. The comments in this chapter are all integrated into one; without the female protagonist Zang, there should be no similarities or differences. If there are shrews who curse and persuade others to quit, they should be punished and rewarded by a judge to show their weakness and bring peace of mind. It is not suitable to slander each other, which will cause worries both internally and externally. Lu Li sat down with General Shadow B, Negri's Three-faced Killer J, etc. They are all good and honest, with pure intentions, so they made a false statement and left a new book: If you are stupid, you think that the things in the book are not big or small, so you can consult them carefully, and then commit suicide. You will definitely be able to plant a good flag and take jujube pills. The pigeon that plucks the strings of life has a balanced nature, a good pigeon and a parrot, and can be used to deal with future disasters. Negri calls it "power", and he is the trumpet of the author based on public opinion: If you think that there are things outside the book, if you know it carefully, you will be able to combine the worlds of the books and create a virtual universe. Being a virgin and lusting after women far away is why the book was prosperous before; lusting after women when you are an adult is why Lu Yu fell into decline. When Xu Ming was there, every time he discussed this matter with his ministers, he always sighed and hated the review. Big breasts, thin waist, curved tunnels, long legs, these are demons to the ministers, I would like to warn them and be careful, then the book will grow, you can count the days and wait for it. I was originally a shadow B, who worked hard in Lu Lao Er, and changed my name to live in Na Lao San. I don't seek to be as knowledgeable as my predecessors. It is false to say that I am despicable, but I am in vain for being lewd. I was tempted by the portrait of a woman dressed in women's clothing. The counselor was still grateful for the book, so he allowed the author to drive away. Later, when it was difficult to write at the starting point, I was appointed to be banned from speaking, and ordered to delete comments. It was twenty-one hours after you came. The governor of Negri is cautious, so he sends me important news before the end. Since receiving the order, I have been lamenting all night long, fearing that the entrustment would not be effective and would harm the wisdom of my predecessors. Therefore, I crossed the Nitan Village in May and went deep into the bad waters. Now Ah Shui has been settled, and his spiritual light is sufficient. He will be rewarded and lead Zhai Di, and he will be sent to the Lengfeng Gorge in the north. The common people will be exhausted and the slaves will be dull. They will get rid of the green-blooded people, revive the human race, and return to their homeland. The reason why this minister repays the author is to be loyal to Negri's duty. As for considering the profit and loss and giving honest advice, that is the responsibility of the editor. I would like to make a false request to my ministers to revive this book. If it does not work, I will punish the ministers for their sins, so as to sue the spirit of the predecessors. If there is no word of virtue, then blame the monthly ticket for being slow and ask for recommendation and collection; if you make a false statement, you should also make your own plans, consider the plot, improve the writing style, and learn from the experience of the previous book. I am extremely grateful. Now that C position has made his debut, he is in tears and has no idea what he is talking about.
Famous scenes
"Don't be afraid of what I'm going to say." Lu Ye sat down at the table in a deep voice. "We are funny, we are not afraid." Shadow B picked his nose. "Please tell me." Killer J dunked jio "I am now the protagonist of the Mirror of Eternity!" "Who is the protagonist of the Mirror of Eternity?" "Not which one? It's Lu Ye, the fourth son of the Lu family who is half a man and half a man!" "(Picture: Yu Sheng) He's not so warm and has more roles." "(Picture: Ji Baichao) He's not a perverted tax evader!" "This! ..." Shadow B took the painting and changed it, "(Picture: Zhai Di) Male." "The mirror of eternity!" Lu Ye seal slapped the table. "Have you read Pigeon's book? It's the kind of hero who dies at the beginning and is no longer a human being." "Understood, continue." Killer J nodded and started to pick his nose. "I was visited by pigeons from the beginning, saying that I was handsome. Who doesn't know? Then they kidnapped me in the Dragon City area. They were all his people, and my stupid Ou Doudou. The mirror was so hard, it was straight Then someone picked up the knife and then dropped it, and then—— I was dead until my junior... What are you laughing at?" "I thought of something happy." Shadow B cleared his throat. "What's the happy thing?" "My boss's brother has dressed up as a woman." "Why are you laughing again?" Lu Ye looked at Killer J "My boss's brother has also dressed up as a woman." "Your boss... Is the same person?" "Yes" "Yes" they nodded, and shook their heads fiercely, "No, it's a traditional art by the same author Yes." "I'm not kidding again!" "Yes, yes" "Hey! !" Seal Hammer Table. Gif "Let's get back to the subject, is the eternal mirror you just mentioned... Good?" "It's really that kind of... ... Its subject matter should be popular, and its outlook is quite positive, but the rhythm is good and bad, and the author is crazy about jokes. He stepped on the gas faster than anyone else. Unfortunately, the river crab climbed too fast and I couldn't catch up with his taillights..." "Pfft-" "You are too much! I have tolerated you for a long time!" "My boss is pretending to be a girl." " You haven't stopped laughing at me!" "Mr. Lu, we have been strictly trained not to laugh, no matter how funny it is." "Unless your brother is also dressing up as a woman." "How about this, Mr. Lu, you go back and update, and we will notify you as soon as you vote." "Okay, go back and subscribe more!"
Pigeon style idol group
This nightmare space can be said to be the model space of Pigeon Books. It appears in every book and is an heirloom of the Pigeon family. This Pigeon family is amazing. The eldest brother Lu Yu, the second brother Lu Li, the third brother Negri, the fourth brother Lu Ye, the third adopted brother, the fourth most favored (sassy), and the third cousin Greg Riggs, Killer J, Shadow B, etc. Lu Yu is also known as the man of light and shadow, and has his own stage name "Lord of Souls". He and the second brother Lu Li formed the idol group "Guanggualuli", which performed in the "Old Days Chapter" area, and Lu Yu also gained a personal fan group The master of women's clothing and exclusive words of encouragement The third eldest brother, Wang Yuan, was adopted by a pigeon and refused to change his surname. During his rebellious period, he gave himself a new name, Negri. The third cousin, Gray Riggs, was an avid fan of the cross-dressing master Lu Li, so he fell in love with his cousin, and the two idol groups Vientiane and the Soul of Negri competed on the same stage. The pigeon became both a father and a mother (), and finally gave birth to his fourth son, Lu Ye. Then the teachers all praised him as a top student, and the coquettish Lu Ye's 'mirror of eternity' also made its debut. It's a joy to congratulate. 233
Why is time in Lu Ye's universe so easy to change?
The time and space of this universe are easier to change than the Blueprint Universe and the Burning Soul Universe. Blueprint The Great Multiverse is capable of changing time. I think it's because it's built on Azathoth, who is on the Chaos side. As for the time of the Burning Soul multiverse, Negri said that it is absolutely unchangeable.
Opinion collection post
In view of the different style of the book Pigeon, some book friends may not be comfortable with it, so you are welcome to give us your valuable opinions. (I hope the pigeons can see it)
Thank you post
Whether the tip is related to the work or the author says it, it will hinder reading, so I created this post specifically to thank all the book friends who tipped. Thank you for your support. I am very grateful to Xu Ming.
Pigeon, do you want monthly tickets and rewards? Transform, the great rivers and mountains of darkness are waiting for you, hurry up and stop being a human being! I don't want to see humans anymore! I want to see Evil God's technology shock people's hearts! Put aside any spiritual investigation, our slogan is: knowledge is power, tentacles are beauty, the more eyes you have, the clearer you can see! All things will eventually decay, but flesh and blood will remain in the world forever. Turn everyone into dependents and embark on the upgrading ceremony together!
The subject of the next book
Saw it in the comments section. Why do so many choose Evil God? Don't you feel aesthetic fatigue? Or some other reason? So far, I have read many novels about evil gods: "Sacrifice to Alien Gods", "Traveling across the Heavens to Become an Evil God", "Evil Gods in the Infinite World"... In addition, there are also many novels about dragons in the fantasy category, and there are also some people who become vampires. 😠How about something fresh? There are no novels about werewolves, but they are all old books from the early years, either eunuchs or not well-known. In the current Internet environment, werewolves are just side characters and villains. Probably in people's eyes, vampires can manipulate magic, while werewolves can only fight physically, creating a stereotype that werewolves are weak, so werewolves don't get much attention. I don't know if what I said is right~ But web writing is created with free expression. If it sticks to tradition, it wouldn't be called web writing. I think the author said in the Flying Immortal Chapter that the werewolves are summoning style and violent breakthrough style. Isn't this the combination of magic and martial arts? In short, I sincerely hope that the author will write about werewolves😌. The ones who become wizards and the evil gods who transform into dragons are tired of seeing them and want to see something different. According to the results of the author's previously completed novels, he can write this unpopular subject well. If the author has the energy, he can write both the Werewolf and Evil God books. Finally, isn't the image of a werewolf quite handsome in the eyes of men? 🤓
To be honest, although Lord of Souls is a bit unfinished at the end, there are so many books, and that one really attracted me the most at the beginning.
With Xu Ming's writing style, it would be better to just write about a protagonist who is born to be a god, a real god. I have been thinking, what is a god? Can the level that can be achieved through acquired efforts and opportunities really be called a god? At most, it can be called a higher life form. A true god is born like this and cannot be compared or surpassed. Memory is created after the human biomass brain is created, emotions are created due to changes in hormones in the body, and the desire to survive is created by biological instincts. These are all human factors and are created because of the human body. Don't worry about the writing failure, the pace is too fast, the club's boss Luo is invincible and the whole book is still interesting. It's just a bit confusing. But I think the author who can write the Tower of Babel should have enough brains .
I feel that this book is not as compelling as other protagonists written by Xu Ming in the past. ………… Compared with previous weapons, they are relatively low-end and not up to par. ……………… It's not that the funny characters are bad, but they don't suit Fumei's writing style. What I like most is the protagonist and supporting characters in Negri's first world. They are really full of character. ………… Of course, the camp is not very lovable. As expected, Evil God Wind is the true love of old readers like me who have read all the formulaic articles.
Personally, I think the author wrote it very well, at least with flawless writing style and logic. Many people criticize the author because of the change in style. The dark flow is naturally the author's advantage, but I prefer the character of Lu Ye. I have always been looking forward to an interesting protagonist, a chaotic neutral character struggling in the collision of sensibility and reason. Lu Ye is not a dark character, he is still a human being (for now anyway). I personally think that human beings and the greatness of humanity are timeless. After all, we are all human beings, not gods like Negri. We struggle and grow like Lu Ye (although Lu Ye may not be human and have no humanity in the future). The author criticizes certain social phenomena. Although I don't have much experience, I think many of the author's views are close to my heart and I think they are very profound. Finally, come on Kyonaruko! (As a personal chef, I like the author's style in this book)
Doesn't the same point-to-push ratio explain the problem? Hurry up and open a new book to save the return of strange and non-human beings. The accumulation of loyal readers of "Souls Beginning" has been exhausted by now. Time and Day None
Long suite building
Give the name and gender (Chinese names are currently preferred), and you can also add your own abilities. Xu Ming will include them as appropriate and become a supporting role in this book.
I can't stand this book anymore. I can only support what the author is writing now and wait for the author's next book. The author needs to learn more about how to be cool. The Lord of Mysteries is very good at pretending.
There are too many elements and I can't understand it at all. The first chapter directly persuades me to quit.
I feel that the writing of this book is a bit poor. The protagonist was very funny and happy in the early stage. However, it has not been very good since the death of Zhai Di. The main reason is that the contrast with the early stage is too big. In the early stage, the thinking goes beyond the bottom line, but in the later stage, he is not a human being. Moreover, I feel that the protagonist is too hung up on the wall and does not go out of his own way like the previous books. It feels like he was supported by the protagonist in the previous books.
The book is good, but it has shortcomings
After reading the first story, I generally thought the author had a good idea. But the author likes to use jokes too much, and there is also a deliberately funny meaning in it. In addition, the author's description of the protagonist's state is quite confusing. One moment he is as strong as the sky, and the other moment he is as weak as a B. Especially the blind Bibi on his lips when escaping is seriously disconnected from the previous terrifying atmosphere. The reading experience is extremely poor. It is recommended that the author revise it. Also, according to the chapters, some of the jokes used by the author are quite niche or are only known to readers of the author's previous book. I would like the author to consider this. In particular, let's talk about the description of the protagonist's state at the beginning of the novel. The idea is good, but the question is, don't you find it confusing when you read it yourself? If the author just wrote this book for his own entertainment. These problems are not big. But if you want to make it a career, it is recommended that you change it appropriately. After all, it would be a pity for a good book to overturn because the author deliberately made it silly and funny.
I just finished reading the story of the Water God, and I honestly didn't understand it! The protagonist may be called a ghost, but he is no different from a real person, and he also needs to eat, drink, and defecate. Secondly, he broke away from everyone and explored alone, but I didn't see the significance of this behavior at all. Everything he explored could be understood by others through a diary. His exploration felt that it brought no practical significance. Afterwards, in the fight, I feel like it doesn't make much difference whether there is a protagonist or not. Even if it's a little more difficult for others, it's not impossible to run away! In the end, someone revealed his real identity...
After reading the first chapter, how the protagonist died should be clearly explained directly. This hole was dug very unnecessary. In addition, the time is directly 5 years later. The feeling of 5 years later is not written here. It is very abrupt to just skim over it. And why is the protagonist's soul different? The first chapter digs too many holes and makes the reader tired. After all, this is not a detective novel.
Uh, um, I want to ask, I want to write a novel using the second world of Negri's Soul, which is the world of King of Disaster, as the background. Is it infringement?
The lovely Zhai Di
Where is the extra story about Zhai Qiuniang's transformation?
Why does a modern world need to set up government offices? It's so painful to watch.
🙂 I don't understand. You can't use the plot points from the previous novels. You will be very confused when you read it for the first time.