Death Benefit

This book is a bit hard to read and cannot be read 😵. It is not as interesting as the previous books.

First of all, I admit that I am wrong and have no fans, but I really want to praise the author, the writing is really good How to integrate the power system of this kind of heaven theme is a very difficult thing, including concepts such as planes, dimensions, planets, and spaces. It is difficult to define and distinguish, and it is even more difficult to put them into the same system, but the author did it. This is the most powerful point of the author. He is really constructing rationality and a fantasy science system based on non-modern scientific cognition! The science I am talking about here is actually a system with relatively strict logic. This system does not actually need to be precise and reasonable, but it needs to be convincing and make people feel reasonable. Most authors cannot do this. Few people challenge to deconstruct the myth system, belief system, concept of life and death, concept of existence, concept of time, concept of desire. These things are so basic that in-depth analysis is not actually necessary, but the author just wrote it, and the degree of completion is very high. The degree of coordination is also very high, which is the first great thing about the author The second great thing is that he dares to conceive and write without collapse. This is simply magical. This is especially true for the concept of time. In the world of Kewu, he actually wrote it out. The time mechanism is clearly defined and the logic is reasonable. It is not one layer, but multiple layers, and the analysis of this result is revealed bit by bit as the protagonist thinks. This is amazing, I really don't know the outline of how to do it. One more point, which is actually very important, is the rationality and richness of the villains. This is actually very basic, but it is not easy to do well In this book, no one's evil is inexplicable, or in fact there is no good or evil in it, only whether it is in the interests of the protagonist. , And whether he is stupid or not. This is so awesome. When a character who regards life as trivial and plays with people's hearts appears, he always feels like a bad guy and a madman, but the author can always give him a reasonable origin and motivation. This person is so crazy that it is actually just the world that pushes him to be like this. He is nothing more than some poor people who are either stupid or smart but not lucky enough. , This is done very well The behavioral logic of each character in it is based on his growth background and world background, and the world is driven by these people. The cyclical law of this grand historical wheel runs through the whole story, and the author's thinking can be seen in every story The person who saves the world is good, such as If saving the world requires the sacrifice of some involuntary people, then what is justice? In fact, it is just that everyone has different desires and obsessions, and there is no right or wrong. Therefore, the enemies of the protagonist are basically worthy of respect, and the author or the protagonist only looks down on two types of people, one is stupid people, and the other is people who cannot see their own desires clearly. But looking at it from the outside, the protagonist is a desire structure, and his own goal or the New Year is to implement his own desires. So it is normal to look down on people who cannot see his desires clearly, but does the protagonist have to be superior? No, that's what's interesting. One more thing, Milan Kundera passed away two days ago, and I think of a passage in his "The Book of Laughter and Forgetting", which is about when a group of people discover that your beliefs are different from theirs, then suddenly you are no longer regarded as a person, but become an existence that is incompatible with them. You will be isolated and ignored, and even any harm and bullying done to you will suddenly become just, because justice depends on the perception of the majority of people. This point is also reflected too much in the book. People who are not my race must have different hearts. Among them, the Human Rise Alliance is connected by the human species, while families are connected by smaller bloodlines. Groups or organizations are connected by common beliefs or cognitions. What is the difference in essence? What is wrong with those families who ignore the overall interests of mankind for the sake of the family? Maybe there is nothing wrong, but they are stupid because of short-sightedness, but there is no right or wrong. I wrote a bunch of things in a mess, but the author's writing is really good, and it comes from his feelings, so I must praise it! @XuMing

I hate the Holy Mother, I hate the sperm on the brain, I've read too many articles like this, it's so hypocritical and ridiculous!

I really don't want to read this part recently. I haven't read about 30 chapters. After entering this world of trials, I really have no interest. This book also has a bit of an infinite flow. I have also read Negri before Xu Ming, Lord of Shadows, and Crown of Souls. This book has always been a Western fantasy with a touch of Cthulhu and a weird style. Now the story has suddenly moved to the Eastern classical world. It feels like it has not been handled well. It is not the main line. It is still a clone. It is not good-looking. The style of painting has changed too much all of a sudden. It is really boring and it will lose readers. Those who like to watch Dongxuan will not follow this part, and those who like to watch Xixuan will not watch this part, which will lose the audience.

So does this kind of character help the plot or the future world view in the book? Or does it look better to readers? Desire? Is it okay to understand "desire" strongly in this way? So generally speaking, who doesn't have "desires"? Does the protagonist have strong desires? Are other people just devoid of desires and independent of the world?     ，，，，，，？ The congenital damage did not knock them down, but made them even more desperate! Not only humans, but also animals are desperately struggling in the face of death, tenaciously showing their desire for "life", which is also desire. Rabbits don't eat the grass beside their nests, ants move snakes across the aisle, etc... It highlights a kind of wisdom about "life" and is a manifestation of desire. Desire? So, where is the protagonist's desire? Which place is stronger? This is obviously the instinctive desire of every life! There is no difference! Not just for individuals! It is every life's desire for "life"!

Come fantasy, go martial arts. My evaluation is martial arts cloaked in fantasy.

Bro, who knows when Kewu will end?

About the protagonist Goldfinger The protagonist Goldfinger is named Ring of Death. The effect is not the killing, touching and exploding module, the extraction module is an ability that all travelers have. The basic setting is that the latitude of death refers to the space of the dead such as the underworld, where things will sink after death. Goldfinger can transform it into a living state and make it his own. But only the protagonist himself cannot be transformed. So the protagonist can die and enter the dimension of death to make a fortune, but he has no resurrection ability so he cannot get out. The main line has always been to find the ability to resurrect. Currently, one can only soak in the water of death when he is near death. If he has the ability to be resurrected later, he will be able to harvest the wool from death. If you have any questions, you can ask here in this post. Xu Ming is available and can answer them.

The system is too complicated and has no highlights. The author's last book was similar. Every time I read it, I couldn't put it down. People who read it were confused and felt really tired. For example, the author's module system, except for disrupting the underlying logic, is not a new thing at all, but it is more difficult to understand. The author really needs to write a good system, refer to the Super Mechanic or the Lord of Mysteries, divide it into a simple large level from 1 to 9, and then subdivide the various abilities and characteristics of specific professions. The current module system complicates simple things, and the general direction remains unchanged. For example, an internal force is composed of what modules. It gives people a headache, and internal force is still internal force. For example, if 1+1+0 equals 2, the result will always be 2, but it is not simple 1+1.

Start a new book, stop showing off your skills, and delve more into the plot. Anyone who has read Negri knows that you are an excellent author, and I hope you get good results. I can't stand what you are writing now.

Module Skill Building You can use modules to set skills by yourself, but you must pay attention to the rules. The basic format of skills is: energy module + operation module + operation module + element module + release module Example: internal force + concentration + Dantian + meridians + acupoints + flame + knife = wood-burning sword technique Of course, the format is not completely limited, as long as the logic operation is OK, you can try to set the skills yourself, thank you for your support.

I made a module diagram of the four stages of the battle I couldn't find the color of the released module, so I chose red The [person] provided by Linhaixian replaced the Dantian, meridians, etc., Which just happened to save a lot of space

It can only be said that Chapters of the Past and Negri's Soul were the author's peak, and then he has been declining. First of all, the Mirror of Eternity is like a continuation and re-enactment of an old chapter. In fact, the copy is well written. The snowman, plant infection ability, and dragon are all novel, but the characters have no personal charm at all. I can feel the transformation from divinity to humanity in both Negri and Lu Li, but when Lu Ye becomes the string picker in the end, I feel that he is an ordinary person. To be honest, I have only read a fifth of Crown of Souls. I read this book two years ago, but I felt irritated as soon as I read it. Is it really good that the beginning is too limited to one world? I feel that the author's strength lies in describing the wonderful effects of the collision between the ability systems of different worlds and the old system. As a result, one-fifth of the chapters describe a new world in the elf world, and the rest is a bit boring if it is placed in the main world. Finally, there is this book. It keeps talking about how the protagonist is arrogant and loyal to his own desires. To be honest, it's a bit overwhelming. You don't need to mention it every dozens of chapters. You just show it. Don't keep talking about it. It's really cliche.

His books always give me the feeling that one generation is inferior to the other 😭

I feel like there is a curse, and the authors of several series I have read have begun to pull their hips Xu Ming's "The Soul of Negri" to the current "Death Compensation" are becoming more and more funny. Taibai Suijun's "This sandbox game is unreliable" to now "Who gave you the ability to use it like this?" , I don't even know what I'm writing about The black-hearted Dabai's "Doomsday Summoning Frenzy" to the current "The End of the World Begins from the Global Dungeon"

Xu Ming's books are all good, but he likes to write about the protagonist becoming inhuman, and then he can't grasp it, and there is no sense of reality. The real person Gu written by Zhenren Gu is very good.

I can only say that Xu Ming's book has revealed his nature a bit. In the past, the protagonists were truth-type protagonists. In addition to being a scumbag, this book is also an LSP. Xu Ming is not in love, right? In the past, Xu Ming seemed to say that he was single, so the protagonist in the book is single, so the protagonist in the book is an LSP. Has Xu Ming also become an LSP?

It's not good to watch. The male protagonist is a big bastard. I can't even stand the free chapters. I came here to chase Xu Ming's reputation in a female protagonist bar, but ended up being robbed and fed

I feel that the better written chapters are the old ones, and the best one is The Soul of Negri

Martial Arts is really ugly, so just give up on this one. Check out the next book. The same goes for Sustainability. I read part of it and gave up on it. It's not good. The crown still has some taste. Of course, Negri is the best. Goodbye.

Finish this book early, I want to read a book like Negri's

Dragon Tower You can set your own dragon character, Chinese name is preferred, you can set your own gender and character. Your past and ability must match the background of this book before it will be used. Thank you for your support.

This book is far less beautiful than Chapters of the Past and Negri The results are not as good as Crown of Souls Sometimes it feels like reading a running account, without the imagination and special excitement before I feel a bit weak 😴

After seeing Chapter 37 I just want to ask What kind of online game is this world? Break the enemy's guild base, and the power will be over? If not Then you lure out the enemy's main force, and then attack their lair What if you destroy their lair? In addition to being more famous You can get some property Then what? The main force is fine It's nothing more than rebuilding what was destroyed and retaking what was lost This plan is outrageous It's very game-like

Regarding the relationship between Xu Ming's several books (you can make up your own mind, just read it) The first book: Lord of All Souls, Lu Yu was originally supposed to be the Lord of All Souls, but because of a certain (in every sense of the word) pigeon, he finally became an indescribable man in the light and shadow, and became the cornerstone of the next era. The second book: Chapter of the Old Days. In the new era, Lu Li became the incarnation of the Man in the Light and Shadow (not Lu Yu, Lu Yu is gone, this is just a specious existence) because of his parents. He was then pulled into the game of a group of great people. He inherited the legacy of the Man in the Light and Shadow and became the Lord of Shadows (because he had cross-dressed as a woman in the game, and was also called the Lord of Cross-dressing). At the end of the era, he devoured everything and left a book that disappeared, suspected of being detached. The third book: The Soul of Negri, the protagonist is the remnant soul of the opponent of the person who inherited the book, Anonymous. Later, he named himself Negri. By constantly advancing (kai) and taking (gua), he finally succeeded in overthrowing the successor, and also went to other universes. However, there must be a problem with the direction, and time went backwards, usually from the beginning to the end, but he went from the end to the beginning, so there was something wrong with the time in many worlds. Book 4: The Mirror of Eternity, Lu Ye was jointly created by Pigeon from the first book and Shabu from the second book. An experiment conducted in order to transcend the circle. Due to some relationships, he was influenced by two unscrupulous shadows. It is extremely improper and imitates the existence of Negri. The fourth book: Crown of Souls. The original location of the protagonist Neser is unknown. It can only be determined that the world he lives in is the multiverse where Negri was born. A great man wanted to read Negri's past to obtain the key to transcendence. In the end, he failed and turned into a world to try again. He was stopped by the protagonist. Finally, a specious existence suspected of being Negri appeared.

Can I read this book? Look at the comments section where a bunch of people are talking bad about it.

The author is getting worse and worse as he writes more and more. He suppresses grades and squanders young writers. All the problems that were not there before are now showing up. No wonder the popularity is getting lower and lower.

Before I read the book, I briefly looked at the data. It's already 3.65 Million words, and I've been writing 10,000 words a day for a year. If I have less than 1,000 comments, is it a bad result or too many deletions? At the end of the month, there are not even 1,000 monthly tickets, and it is difficult to draw a prize and get a minimum of 100 yuan. What did the author do? Or when there is double the amount at the beginning of the month. You don't need to read it to know that this book has a lot of problems. Has the author thought about the reasons? I can't say that I haven't read this book. I remember reading it when it first came on the shelves, but I can't remember why I gave it up. But I can still get it, it can only be said to be fate, please come on, author.

After reading ten chapters, there were a lot of settings thrown out, and the skill bar was very complicated. I thought at first I could only put three modules, but later I discovered that one skill bar can hold many modules, and the modules are used to form a skill. Then there is the protagonist's ring, a golden finger that kills people and touches corpses, but it is also very complicated. The protagonist must be resurrected before it can be used. It's too complicated. The beginning throws the reader a lot of settings that need to be thought about. I had a headache when I came in to read it, and I needed to think a lot. I watched it several times and couldn't stand it. If you like to see this kind of operational setting flow, you may be interested. If you just want to feel good, I suggest you just withdraw. It won't feel good at first.

This book is very well written, the writing is smooth, the logic is self-consistent, the content is in-depth, the story is attractive, the protagonist is vividly portrayed, and the supporting roles are various... Sorry, I can't edit it anymore, and I don't want to take the money.