Immortal Silkworm

Then the eunuch posted on Zhihu "The Internet literary circle collectively broke the defense!" Why was Lan Li Lao Mo banned from the "ceiling of contemporary online writers"? 🙂

Abusing the mainstream classical cultivation of immortality, it takes the setting of Shushan and some early immortal cultivation novels. It is indeed rare, but the rarity also means that the results are generally not very good, and it requires the control of the writing. It is still difficult to keep the readers reading. The description of the character is also difficult, and the author must be aware of his own strengths and weaknesses.

Start with past life inheritance. How many chapters are there now? At most, the protagonist has acquired a magic door, and he doesn't even know where it is.

Asking about Emei Xian Chan First-grade Taoist species Taojun, starting from the clerk of Xianting Xianpao Xiancan

I knew you would be a eunuch, repeating the same old path from book to book, being stubborn and not learning lessons and experiences. Fortunately, I didn't subscribe this time😌😌😌

The readers in the book review section are also much smarter. This author may be trying to write about the difficulty of entering the immortal world. The idea is indeed good, but unfortunately he does not know whether his writing skills are insufficient or his experience is too shallow. The protagonist is like a fool, not even as good as an ordinary person.

It's just a complaint. I'm 13 or 14 years old. I'm pretty and beautiful. I really feel that the author has never been exposed to any handsome guys and beauties. Those celebrities are ugly when they are fat. And when they are 13 or 14 years old, they still have no growth. It's not too much to say that their life span will be shortened by three years at a glance. . There are no fat beauties. They are so exquisite. You can't imagine that you haven't come into contact with them. To put it bluntly, if you were liked by such a girl when you were in school, you would want to jump off the building and you would secretly have feelings for her. .

This opening is very fairy-like. The protagonist walks in the path of immortality and demon, and by chance, he gets the top inheritance and magic weapon. This writing style can probably be traced back to the martial arts novels of the last century, but it is really a bit old now. At the same time, every time the protagonist runs around and mediates between immortals and demons, the timing is too coincidental: it happens that the old snake is surrendered by the enemy, it happens that the master's daughter gets the fate of immortality, but it happens that the snake's venom has no solution, and the reversals are too many and too fast, which makes people tired. When did the protagonist decide to practice Taoism? Or does the author plan to give him a red fruit, add a lot of skill to him, and then continue to stir up trouble in the world? I really don't like this kind of protagonist who has a lot to do.

I finally understand what inaction means. The protagonist is busy and busy, and has gone around in a big circle. After experiencing life and death, it is better to do nothing and work honestly, and Xianyuan comes to your door. Deliberately force it, but when I see Xianyuan, I can't care about anything, but I'm going around the bush.

I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist has only started to practice in chapter 30, and he is still practicing heresy. It's hard to stand up.