The Immortal Is Here

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Who made this cover? It looks like a floating ghost head, and it's also used for a bunch of Xianxia novels.

It's not fun or exciting. After reading ten chapters, the writing is mediocre and the plot is cliche and bland. Set templating (modifier). Good grass, good books to read

I am rewarding you for your last book, "I Borrowed a Brain from the Emperor". I hope your new book will work hard and become a masterpiece as soon as possible.

The previous black hand and that black hand turned out to be the self-fantasy of medicine fields and crops. It is understandable to change the map, but the connection is not good. The description of the Zifu realm mentioned above changes the world, creates things in the void, reconstructs memories, controls destiny, becomes immortal, and is omnipotent. After coming out, it is not as good as a Hercules slave. It is too far-fetched to explain it with a sentence of low energy and high energy.

This book is really not as good as the previous one, it doesn't look good.

There have been no comments in the comment section for more than half a month. The author is also persistent enough. The gap between this and the previous book is too big.

The cheat sheet doesn't feel as good as the original one, and the data settings are a bit weird. It doesn't feel very rigorous. It seems that the function of cheat sheet has not been fully explained, and the functions all appear suddenly.

I feel it's not as good as my brain, but the previous book was still better written.

The cover of this book... It's hard to describe in one word🤔

In the realm of suppression, you can't even change the map. According to TM's settings, your bullshit mountain of 100,000 has been swallowed up long ago. It took so long to break the golden elixir ink mark. This is a fast-paced book that has to be slowed down. Cut it

It's too embarrassing for you. Let's cut it. It's not easy to hold back so many words every day.

The early part of the last book was good, but it was awkward in the middle and late stages. I hope the author of this book will take good control of it and handle it well in the middle and late stages.

It can be seen that the author really wants to write something very new, but since the plot where several elders and leaders died, there is a feeling that the step is too big and it will break the egg.

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I think the linkage with the previous book is good. The protagonist is set to sleep in a coffin, but his consciousness can turn into the blue sky. Watch the development of the world in the blue sky to draw inspiration, then separate a ray of consciousness and turn into a young man to learn secret techniques in various sects, and finally let the body in the coffin live a second life. Then the cooperation between the main body and Qingtian will definitely be interesting

Finally finished the water, feeling tired...

It's okay to catch up on the latest, but the front is a bit boring

Holy shit, I'm still reading a book and I haven't even read a single chapter. Is this the end? This grade is much worse than the previous grade. The author should take a good rest and look forward to the best work, alas

The first copy ended hastily like this. I thought there was some follow-up or connotation, but I felt that the writing was not as good as before.

Why do I feel like this book is half-dead? I'm speechless just because of the update speed.

When does the author get good at it? It's almost December. One chapter a day. How do you read it?

To be honest, I can't understand anything since I went to the upper realm. What on earth did the author want to write? It's really a pity to abandon it if it's tasteless.

It should be almost finished. To be honest, the writing is okay, and it's quite refreshing to not use your brain. But the biggest problem with this kind of writing is the author's updates. The author's updates are too slow. It's a semi-invincible and refreshing novel.

Too short, not as good as the first two books

It ended out of nowhere. There is still a lot to write. I am also tired from homework and don't want to write anymore.

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Can it be completed before the year? Have you thought about any new books?

I have more than 100 books on my bookshelf, and this book definitely ranks first.

No, you didn't say anything about the status of your new book, and why do you need to subscribe before you can leave a message? Are you trying to persuade them to quit?