The Taiyin Immortal Clan

This is illogical and poorly written. Over 120 people went to join the army, and only 2 came back? The village kids were even fighting in gangs; if 118 people died, your village is practically finished.

As shown in the image, a soldier who beheads 30 enemy soldiers is promoted to squad leader, 60 to platoon leader, and 100 to command 50 soldiers. This is absurd. How did the author come up with this system?

Chapter Six is ​​quite absurd. In this cultivation world, you're telling me wealth and power are the only true path? True power comes from within oneself. The author's experience and way of thinking are insufficient to write this kind of book. With this sheep theory, are you planning to become someone else's "granary"? Relying on others when you lack your own strength?

Besides *The First Saint*, *The Great Crimson Immortal Sect*, *The Azure Wutong Immortal Clan*, *The Peach Immortal Next Door*, and *Dao Lord Qingxuan*, what other good books with a setting like *Xuanjian* are there?

1. You say you like the Xuanjian Immortal Clan so much, and you like trending topics so much, can you at least borrow some ideas? You copied the original settings and plot content from me, and the similarity is over 90%. 2. Authors with warped values ​​produce novels that are utterly unremarkable and poorly written. They're all Frankenstein's monsters—trash novels designed to exploit readers.

The first 100 chapters are alright; although there are many borrowed elements, the plot flows smoothly, and the characters in the family are quite well-defined. From chapter 98 onwards, it becomes a series of overpowered abilities, and the story collapses.

The main character's family are all cowards. The official was bullied by an ordinary farmer, yet he was still trying to make money peacefully. It's disgusting.

The author's writing style feels very immature. Judging from their values, they seem like a student, and a coward at that, with a weak family background that makes them timid. What kind of writing is this?! Someone is negotiating with you, and the profit is already substantial, but you try to show off for a small profit, then they wipe out your entire family, kidnapping your two sons.

Generation name: The heroic spirit of heaven and earth, still awe-inspiring for a thousand autumns. Updates will follow. It's very well written. Keep up the good work, author! 👏

This is the worst starting point I've ever seen. You're just an ant, and they didn't even give you any newbie perks like a treasure binding you to its master. You're still treated like an ant.