In North America, Running a Graveyard

No wonder you restrict the right to speak; it turns out you get a lot of criticism. But that makes sense. I've only read a few chapters, and there's already a ton of minor criticisms—and they're not exactly minor. You really deserve to be criticized; you're not wronged at all. Compared to this garbage you wrote, those studio-produced novels seem completely innocent. I've said what I needed to say; I can't let my 100 coins go to waste.

This grandfather must have hated his grandson so much, for he taught him nothing and said nothing at all.

His grandfather, despite having cheat codes for decades, still died. What makes the protagonist think he can handle it? This cheat code feels so abrupt; his grandfather knew less about folk remedies. The laptop is the protagonist's cheat code, but after decades of cheating, he's still in this mess. What's the point of the protagonist getting that thing?

... I've seen some... Every exorcism always leaves some loose ends. Asking the client for help and then dragging the client down with them.

The vampires are portrayed as too powerful! In China, vampires wouldn't even be considered a major character! They'd only be food! The Classic of Mountains and Seas records: "In the Western Mountains dwell a ghost, resembling a human, with red eyes and fangs. It hides by day and comes out at night, fond of eating human blood, which prolongs life."

The two generals, Zeng and Sun, took three steps, two feints and one real, not the seven-star stepping technique circulating online. 😅😅

According to the author, the protagonist's strength by the end of the book should be similar to that of Uncle Nine, the zombie. But the problem is that the characters already appearing in the book are at the level of gods and demons. How is the protagonist supposed to cope? He'd have to fight tooth and nail even against a vengeful ghost. Besides, the zombie series isn't without strong characters.

The market has opened; let's see when the author abandons the project.

What kind of rubbish is this? If you're writing about America back then, at least do some basic research on its history, okay? America back then wasn't focused on GDP like it is now; it was mostly populated by religious people. Given that situation, who would dare allow a non-believer to baptize and bury them? Building a cemetery for $80,000 at that time would be a serious crime.

It was mentioned earlier that there is no cultivation system, no godhood, and the path leads to becoming a zombie Taoist priest, using one's physical body to exorcise demons. Only a few chapters have passed, and they've already introduced things like "five internal organs becoming gods," jumping directly from fighting minor demons and monsters to battling the very enemies that threaten humanity's survival. Is this a prelude to a rushed and poorly executed ending?!