
Am I the Disciples' Portable Old Grandpa?
我才是徒弟们的随身老爷爷?
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- Completed
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 5mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates ten thousand words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun. I heard that calves born in sheep pens will not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? Qidian is strong because it has inherited the etiquette and skills of its ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can earn tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! But Pujie cannot get royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it!
Is there any Shennong? 🙂How about this one?
The writing style becomes weirder the more you write later.
Let's all talk about it, I can't describe it well. There is an indescribable feeling. There were flaws in the early stage, but the rhythm and writing style were okay. Now the more I write, the more strange the style of writing becomes like that of a female video, which makes me feel uncomfortable 😅
You're really hungry for a female supporting character who lies all over the place.
Suggestions for the plot
Looking at it now, I always feel that the protagonist's disciples are too undisciplined. They don't seem to realize how lucky they are. Many of them don't even know how many realms there are in cultivating immortals. They only think about eating, playing and falling in love all day long. They are like a group of college students, not monks at all. The people who look at it feel angry. In this world where spiritual energy is revived, having a reliable master and sect is a blessing that cannot be achieved in several lifetimes. How can it be so wasted? In the future, the author may consider adding a department such as the Discipline Hall to weed out a group of disciples who do not learn well. This is cultivating immortality and not seeking an iron rice bowl. I just don't think you should rely on modern universities.
Cry
[Ruyan] activated the skill "Crying", but the effect was minimal.
"Your application for apprenticeship has been approved"
⌓‿⌓China Speed
Have you ever been a grandfather? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted
The protagonist must also be improved, his mentality must be improved, and his cultivation must also be improved. If the apprentice is allowed to surpass him, it will appear that the protagonist is just a pendant of the apprentice. All he needs to do is give resources to the apprentice, and the rest has nothing to do with the protagonist. I am here to see the protagonist pretending, not to see this kind of cheating or to be a boy who gives away treasures. There is no improvement. This is not good. The above is my personal opinion. If the author doesn't like it, just delete it. There is no need to ban me. 🙂
You have practiced immortality, so you take it for granted and scribble.